She knew getting stuck was a possibility but she had to see him. There were winter storm watches in place all over the state. She planned on grabbing a quick dinner together and heading back home. Plans were changed quickly. “You can’t drive in this, it’s too dangerous.” He told her. “But I have to get home.” She replied. They argued back and forth for at least 25 minutes before he finally put his foot down. “You’re staying with me. We’ll go to my place for the night and get you home tomorrow. You’re not driving in this shit. I forbid it.” She knew by his ton that arguing any further wasn’t going to make a difference, so she obliged. He settled their tab and they rushed to his car. Once they were inside, waiting for the heat to warm the icy air, he wiped the snow and tears from her face. “I know this wasn’t your plan, but you’re safe. I will take good care of you.” She took a deep breathe and sat back in her seat. His words always calmed her fears. The snow was already getting deep and falling fast. It seemed like the longest drive. He drove so slow and careful to ensure their safe arrival. He did truly care for her afterall.
They hurried inside his place. The warmth was soothing and the smell was intoxicating. She could smell the remnants of Christmas and a mixture of his usual musk. “I need to change and find you something to wear. Wait right here.” Then he disappeared. She walked around soaking in her surroundings. Their relationship was still so green and she was unaware of his intentions. He was always respectful of her and her wishes. They still hadn’t moved from getting to know each other to a physical relationship. She was ready.
He entered the room with a t-shirt in hand “Here, you can wear this so you’re not wet in those clothes.” Her mind raced. If he only knew how wet she really was. She grabbed a blanket off the back of his couch. “This will be just fine.” He looked at her with both concern and delight. “Oh Ace, you just don’t know what you’re in for. Suit yourself.” He walked to the kitchen to make tea. She heard him fumbling around and she started to undress, making sure every so often that he’s watching. First, her shirt. Then her pants. She turned the opposite direction of his eyeline. He began watching her like a hawk. She removes her bra. She inches her fingers between her hips and panties and bends over. Before she can even pull down her underwear, she heared him “Oh, fuck.” He was right behind her, his hands on hers preventing her from being completely naked. “You’re sure, Ace? Really sure this is what you want? That you’re ready?” She turned to him, looked him dead in the face with her big green eyes, swallowed hard, and let’s out a barely audible “Yes.” He almost giggled at how nervous she was. “You can do better than that, Ace. If you want me to touch your sweet little pussy, you’ll have to do better.” Finally letting her nerves settle, she said confidently, “Do with me what you will.” He moans with pleasure. “Mmm. Now that’s my good girl.”
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/61zl80/snow_day_part_one
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