This is my first ever post and first ever real erotica story (that is almost complete). I’m really starting to dip my toe into the water with writing these stories. Turns out my partner has a kink for erotica. Criticism is most definitely welcomed.
The story: “Excuse me sir” she said with an anxious crackle toned voice. “Yes Miss Thomas?” I replied as I return to face the detention classroom, i had been met with an eyesore of her busty cleavage piercing through her top.
“I need to go to the bathroom sir” she exclaims. “Is that so Miss Thomas? As last week when you were excused for a bathroom break we found you escaping through the bathroom windows, should you try to escape again, you will be met by a more severe punishment” i stated with authority. Miss Thomas is excused for an escorted bathroom break, moments later a window is heard to be smashed open with Miss Thomas stuck between the window panes, panties showing in full view under her lifted skirt.
What fathoms next would change the course of teaching. Her shirt shredded and torn, her breasts could barely be contained with the shirt intact, was only fair to rip the remaining button off, exposing Miss Thomas’ busty chest. I could no longer hide my throbbing erection as it burst through the zipper it just broke. We hurried along the hallway, Miss Thomas is dragged along the hallway floors by a handful of her hair.
Entering detention, Miss Thomas is brought to her feet, panties furiously pulled down to her knees, legs spread apart at shoulders length, with a heaving push is forced to be bent over across the face of my desk. My cock at the ready to penetrate this rebellious sluts’ pussy.
Growing longer and striking harder with each thrust into her wet tight pussy only makes her devilish smirk gleam brighter and brighter. “Youve always wanted my cock haven’t you Miss Thomas?” I questioned. “Fuck yes!” Exclaimed Miss Thomas “My pussy always gushes with cum when i think about your cock, just like this!”
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/lr7u3m/teacher_and_high_school_student_mf_explicit
I know it should be obvious but I’m really fucking confused. Who’s the teacher?
That was quick
On the whole good story, but I would have liked to possibly see more background before hand and it was a little short for my liking. However definitely a fun story to read?