No, I can’t, I shouldn’t even think about it. She’s my roommates girlfriend. But I want her, I need her, I lust after her. It’ll never happen, I’ll be moved out by the time she gets here. Its just a phase. Its just a phase…
Whats that smell? I thought to myself. Thats odd, is he spraying perfume? What is that? I continued to the bathroom to shower, with my towel wrapped around my waist. “Seriously dude what the hell are you spraying?” I exclaimed as I opened the bathroom door. There. Then. Her. I was greeted with a soft smile. There she was. Staring. At me, in my towel. “Sorry I’ll be out of here in a second” she gently said. I grew erect and I swiftly exited, I let out a sigh of relief. She did not notice my penis growing erect under my towel. “Hey, why don’t you come in here” she whispered. Why? Why does she want me in there? I cautiously entered the bathroom.
As I entered, there she stood. So beautiful, so confident, so powerful. In her tight black patterned sundress, her silky smooth opaque black tights and her black shiny leather heeled boots with a gorgeous face of makeup. “On your knees” she commanded. I stood wearing a look of confusion, “what?” I said. “Drop that towel and get on your fucking knees” she commanded again, “this is what you’ve always wanted isn’t it”. We both knew what was going to happen. So I did as Miss Hollie commanded. I surrendered, dropped my towel and fell to my knees at her feet. And she whispered gently “Good boy, it will all be over soon”
End of Part 1. Feed back is appreciated and welcomed.
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/lqh9c6/worshipping_miss_hollie
I would read part 2!!
When is part 2 coming out!!?
Need the next parts soon
That was fantastic. You did an amazing job of building anticipation instantly. There are some people who would suggest taking more time describing the physical appearance, but I really like what you’ve done here. Great job.