[fm] She might just be a nympho Part II

Some more, unpolished, open for constructive criticism :)

Rachel jumped as the doorbell rang. She adjusted her top, and quickly fixed her hair as she hurried to the door. Dampness was beginning to seep through her panties and onto her inner thigh, and excitement rushed through her pussy as she opened the door. Rachel bit her lip as she eyed over her guest. “My god, that smile…” she thought to herself, as she invited him in. She noticed his eyes gravitating around her tits, and she thrust her chest out slightly, hoping to see a reaction in his pants. Her glances at his crotch did not give any sign of an impressive bulge, and she felt a little disappointed. Rachel was lusting for a big dick, and she desperately hoped he was hiding something substantial in there. David’s voice broke her dirty thoughts. “Thanks for letting me stay, I’m not quite sure how to repay you” “Oh, I’m sure we can think of something”, Rachel flirted, hoping he would get the hint. “Maybe I can buy you a drink. Is there a nice bar around here?” Rachel was surprised by the idea, but it excited her. “Sure!” she blurted, a little more enthusiastically than she had intended. “I’ll just get changed”, David nodded “Ok, no problem”. Rachel quickly chose a flattering, short-hemmed dress, and started flirting with the idea of leaving her panties at home. “I’ll put them in my handbag” she reasoned, “I can always excuse myself and put them back on” As she slid out of her panties, she saw they were more damp than she had thought. She quickly put them in her bag and headed out.

As they walked, Rachel felt the air twirl around her legs, and was constantly reminded of her bare pussy. Her strides were faster than usual, and she was eager to get to the bar. When they arrived, they sat down at the bar, and ordered a round of drinks. Rachel felt her dress ride dangerously high up her thighs, and the thrill of being so naughty renewed the feeling of pressure in her pussy. She could barely pay any attention as they talked. She noted his broad shoulders, and when he rolled up the sleeves of his button down shirt, she found herself admiring his forearms.The dull ache in her warming cunt grew stronger when his hand fell on her knee and his fingers pointed up her thighs. She let out a slight gasp, and she felt her pussy suddenly begin to grow wetter and wetter. “Wanna dance?” David asked. Rachel could only nod, as she alighted herself carefully off the barstool. David led her into the dancing crowd. Rachel felt the alcohol begin to take it’s effect as she moved to the energetic rhythms. Rachel’s snatch grew wetter and wetter as David whirled her around, and after a while, felt up her legs and waist. The burning inferno between her legs was making her more and more aggressive, and she attempted to grind on him. She hoped to find his hard cock wrestling against the fabric of his pants, but before she could make contact, he spun her around so her ass was to his groin. Rachel’s cunt throbbed with hunger and excitement as he pressed himself against her. She gasped when she felt his thick meaty shaft rubbing against her ass. Her whimper was drowned out by the loud music, and she felt her sweet juices running down her thighs. She closed her eyes and moaned as she rubbed herself against the hard cock hidden underneath David’s clothes. David’s hands were on her hips, moving her up and down. She pushed her ass out enthusiastically. “Oh god he IS big!”…

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