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09 permission

violet didn’t expect to sit on lukes lap for the last half of the movie, but one thing led to another and she eventually found his hands hesitantly pulling her on top of him.

she’d complained about the floor not being comfortable enough to watch a movie on, to which luke told her to sit on the sofa and she obliged.

she sat far away from him, as far as she could.
glancing at him every now and then just to admire the way he looked when he wasn’t in his work clothes.

violet liked this look.

she didn’t want to cause any more intense or awkward moments to happen between them..if they both knew what they wanted but neither of them were going to act on it, what was the point?

ultimately, it was in the older mans hands to initiate anything. for the young girl was far too shy and innocent, albeit she still wanted to be touched by him.

i should Not Be watching a movie with twenty – six year old man alone

she reminded herself, internally cursing at herself for never being able to fall asleep during a good movie.

everyone else had fallen into a deep slumber. timothee was sleeping on the recliner chair, while lana and savannah had fallen asleep on the hard, wooden floor.

luke notices violet constantly glancing at him, from the corner of his eye and lets out a deep chuckle-

“whats so funny?” violet asks, unamused.

“nothing, little girl”

her heart does a little flip, at the pet name.

she crosses her arms, letting out a huff and tries to hide the fact that she is flustered ; which luke of course, pretends he is oblivious to.

“i’m cold” she mumbles

“then come here, i’ll keep you warm”

he dosent have to repeat himself, for violet obliges soon as the words leave his mouth.

she gets up from her spot on the sofa, walking over to where luke is ; just about to sit close beside him when a pair of arms guide her down onto his lap instead.

“w-what are you doing?” violet stutters, looking back at luke

“you were cold sweetheart, remember? this is me keeping you warm”

“i don’t think that’s a good-”

“sshh, we don’t wanna wake anyone now do we?” he interrupts her

violet sighs, giving in. “n-no”

shes unsure at first, but eventually gives in ; her body relaxing against his. this is nice.

she lets out a yawn, realizing how tired she actually is

“sleepy are we?” the older man asks the young girl.

“not reall-”

“don’t lie, little girl. it’s okay, turn around. you can lay on me”

lay on him?

“it’s okay ill just lay on the couch luke” violet stands up

lukes arms automatically shoot out to grab her hips once again, smirking.

“i’m much more comfortable than the couch baby”

maybe she’s too tired to think, or maybe she just wants to lay on luke ; but nevertheless violet places either of her legs on each side of the older man, straddling him. and laying her chest against his. completely oblivious to the fact that he’d just let the word baby slip out of his mouth.

luke wraps his arms around her. embracing her for what seems like forever

there’s a big loud explosion on the tv, which startles violet, making her jump up and shift her weight in lukes lap.

his hands steady her waist immediately, as he lets out a breathily “fuck, little girl”

“o-oh did i do something?” she shifts her weight again.

“you’re-you’re okay baby. just stop moving”

he could feel her

he felt her rub against him as the thin material of her velvet shorts pressed against his pants when she shifted in his lap

and he could still feel her.

violet was only making it worse, her innocence was making luke feel a certain type of way.

for some reason he had the urge to replace the clueless look on her face with ones of gasps and moans as the older man took advantage and the younger girl and gave her exactly what she needed.

he knew what he was thinking was wrong, but he couldn’t help himself. he wanted her, and he was going to have her.

violet stared at the older man in awe,

baby?

she couldn’t help but look down sheepishly, for his admiring stare was too much to handle.. and she’d wondered if he was starting to pay attention to her imperfections.

luke gently places his hand on violets chin, tilting it up to look at him.

“you’re so pretty, little girl” he drawls,

violets breath hitches at this, and the butterfly’s in her stomach cease to stop fluttering.

“i-i thank you” she gets out, her breathing gradually getting heavier by the second.

lukes hands remain on her waist, and she feels his grip getting firmer and firmer.

violet wants him, but she just doesn’t know how to say it.

he’s about to speak up when-

out of nowhere, something inside her tells her to rock her hips forward, and even she is surprised once she does this.

it catches luke off guard, and he wonders if he’s just imagining it.

but she does it again, and again, causing lukes mind to go into a frenzy.

“now baby. what do you think you’re doi-?”

violet gasps at the feeling, and she doesn’t say anything. her hands grip his shoulders and she continues to move herself against him, grinding harder and harder each time.

luke is at a loss for words, but he’s enjoying the sight of violet doing something he never thought she would.

he sits there, in awe. and allows her to use what she can of him to make herself feel good ; all while, refraining himself from going too far.

“do i feel good baby?” he rasps

she throws her head back slightly, letting a faint moan slip past her lips in the process.

she immediately stops, hand shooting up to cover her mouth.

“i didn’t mean to-”

luke interrupts her by switching their positions, he flips them so that she’s sitting upright on the couch, and he’s hovering over her.

she doesn’t have time to say anything, for as soon as she opens up her mouth to speak , he attaches his lips to the skin right beneath her jaw,

violet lets out an inaudible gasp at the contact, his lips finding the most sensitive part of her neck.

he kisses and sucks, on the tender skin ; causing violet to lightly moan at this new feeling she’s never felt before

luke places his knee between her legs, and she finds it pressing against her heat

she starts to rub herself against it, a completely foreign feeling taking over body ; she wants more of it.

she grinds against his knee, nice and slow..reveling in the way lukes lips continue to move against her neck

“please” she slightly moans, tugging on the hem of his shirt

“please what baby?” he murmurs against her skin

“lu-”

“do me a favor” he pulls away, “call me daddy baby. call me daddy, and i’ll give you whatever you want”

violet bites her lip, “yes daddy”

and with that luke places his fingers on the outside of the fabric of her thin shorts, pressing against it firmly ; he earns a choked moan from the girl

she waits anxiously, looking up at him with pleading eyes.

his fingers start to move in circular motions against her, and violets eyelids grow heavy at the feeling.

“is this what you want, little girl?”

violet nods.

“words.” luke stops.

“y-yes” violet hurries out, silently begging him to keep going.

he rubs harder this time, focusing on the reactions of young girl before him ; as she tosses her head back and moans his name

“d-dadddy”

his hand slips under her shorts, and he feels just what he’s done to her. she squirms against his touch

she’s soaking.

he focuses on the bundle of nerves that elicit phrases from the girl he’d never thought he’d hear her say

“right there daddy, please right there..it feels so good i-”

he slips two of his fingers inside her, beginning to pump slowly as his thumb continues to rub her clit.

his other hand makes it’s way up her body, taking her breast in his hand and squeezing..then up to her neck, wrapping his fingers around it.

violet feels something build up inside her, like a fire in the pit of her stomach, or a knot.

she’s almost there, she can feel it.
her breathing becomes even heavier, her gasps and moans becoming uncontrollable.

“i-i think im gonna-” she starts

“not yet” he pulls his fingers out of her, getting on his knees so that his face is right in front of her heat.

a rush of adrenaline courses through her, and luke dosent waste any time before he attaches his mouth to her clit

he licks slowly, remembering she’s not yet experienced this before.

“when you’re almost there, ask for permission” he murmurs against her, unintentionally sending a wave of vibrations through her bottom area.

he sucks on her clit gently, violet parting her legs to allow him more acesss. to let him know she wants more.

he speeds up his pace, licking and sucking faster than before, his arms finding her thighs; forcing her to stay in place

her hips unintentionally buck against lukes mouth, grinding herself against his tongue and her moans becoming louder then ever,

her hand voluntarily reaches down to hold his head in place and luke can feel her throbbing against his tongue

“i-” violets thighs involuntarily shake “can i cum?”

luke dosent answer her, he slips two fingers inside her once again while he continues to suck on her now overly sensitive clit

“daddy, please” she wines, voice on the verge of breaking “please can i cum?”

“yes baby. cum.”

the knot in violets stomach comes undone as her hips press against lukes mouth, the overwhelming feeling taking over the young girls body for the first time. she squirms, gasps, and becomes out of breath-

she dosen’t stop moaning, and lukes mouth dosen’t move.

she tries to push his head away, but he dosent budge.

“you didn’t think we were done baby, did you?”

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