first time posting – would love PMs with feedback [m+f]

The silence surrounds us as we lay in my bedroom, talking about whatever comes to our minds. I love the feeling of her hand caressing my chest, it drives me nearly to the brink as she lay there in just her boy-shorts and tank top. The door is open and the light allows me to see every detailed curve of her body in the position she lay in. As my hand caresses her inner thigh I suddenly feel it moving higher and higher. She looks at me, half smiles, and leans in and passionately we start kissing. We explore each other with our mouths, though the taste and texture feel familiar the feeling is new and exciting each time. My hand lightly grabs her cheek and then moves down to her collar and then her hips.

She straddles me, slowly at first but then plants herself on top of me. With so little clothing on the both of us, it is so easy to feel how the other is excited for what is about to happen. She sits on me in such a way where she must know how much I am craving every inch of her. She begins rocking back and forth slowly, teasing me, and I know it…and I love it. I feel her smile as we continue kissing ,and my hands slide up the back of her shirt, feeling her smooth skin as I rub up and down. She sits up vertical, and crosses her arms and lifts off her shirt. It amazes me when she sits up that her breasts look so perky, as well as perfectly proportioned to her body. There is not a thing I would change about her.

I sit up and kiss her neck, lightly sucking and using my tongue as she grabs the back of my head and runs her fingers through my hair. My left arm crosses her back, my right arm is resting on her thigh, with my hand squeezing her ass lightly as she continues to rock back and forth slowly. I love the way she tastes. I cannot describe it, but I love it.

I take one of her breasts into my mouth and lightly nibble and suck on them. I dont want to ruin the moment with my building impatience, and I let her soft moans become the only thing I pay attention to. Her hands run up and down my stomach and chest, slightly tickling me but more or less driving me to the brink. I roll her over and I am now on top, still nibbling and tasting. I kiss and lick gently down to her stomach, down to the top of her pink boyshorts. My hand rubs the calf of her right leg and she knows what I want to do next. Her legs open slowly as my right hand runs up her calf to her thigh. her right leg hooks around my shoulder and I press my mouth on the outside of her boyshorts.

I can taste how excited she is, as I put my mouth over her, her panties the only thing stopping me from tasting her juices and engulfing her into my mouth. I slide her panties down slowly, exposing her smooth vagina, yearning to be tasted and touch. I rub up and down slowly with my fingers, using it as a tease. I slowly put my middle finger into her wet little slit and feel her tense up a little. I press my mouth onto her gently, and nibble with my tongue and mouth.

She squirms a bit, and I hear her moans come out gently as she bites her bottom lip. She has no problem telling me what to do, and how well I am doing it. She grabs the back of my head and pushes me into her as my tongue probes around the inside of her vagina. I love how she tastes, which is weird since there barely is a taste. The more wet she gets, the more it turns me on. All I want to do is please her.

We have been seeing each other for quite some time now, and I am still unsure whether or not she does certain things. I try to sometimes hint at certain activities but after this point it usually leads to sex. We begin kissing again, and her hand reaches my belt line. I want her to go for it, I am dying for her to go for it. She reaches under my boxer briefs and starts slowly caressing my increasingly hardening penis. Her grip is perfect, not too strong and not so weak. I am dying for her to explore it with her mouth as she never has before. We had a few drinks and I am curious to see if it opens up her inhibitions.

She kisses down my neck down to my chest. Her hands move faster and faster on my cock, jerking it faster and faster and really testing my endurance. As she feels it become rock solid in her hands, she knows what I want from her, She kisses down my stomach and down to my abdomen. She has slowed her hand now, and her tongue is slowly sliding up the base of my shaft, gently, lightly reaching the tip. She wraps her mouth around it with her hand at the base and begins slowly moving up and down. I love everything about this moment. I love the little sucking sounds coming from her mouth. I love the way she uses her mouth, her hand, and the way she looks doing this. I want her now. I need her now.

After a few minutes I lay her down on the edge of my bed and I hover over her. Our eyes meet, and we smile at each other and I kiss her and move in between her legs. I rub the tip of my cock up and down the warm, wet slit of her vagina. I slowly slide myself in, the further I go the more her mouth opens in pleasure. She wraps her legs around my lower back and I begin to slowly thrust into her. She moans louder and louder as I go faster and harder, her hands wrap around my shoulders as I feel her juices slide down the sides of my penis.
She takes me off of her and turns around on her knees, showing me that beautiful ass. I come up behind her as she turns around and looks at me, and tells me to fuck her in a quiet gentle voice. I grab her by the hips and start thrusting in and out of her, loving the feeling of my thighs pressing into her ass when I go all the way in. I do not know how much longer I can hold out, the only thing keeping me going is her screams to go faster and to keep going. I wrap my arm around her chest, my forearm covering her breast as she arches her back and I kiss her shoulders. I am ready to explode and as I pull out, I cover her back and ass in cum. We lay there momentarily silent, kiss, and then head into the shower together

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