Space, the final frontier (ongoing)

This is a story I have just started writing, I am really interested to get your feedback and opinion on it, so please let me know what you think.

I have been thinking about writing a story about sex in space. But I can expand on that much much more…. And that’s what I hope to do.
Perhaps this can have multiple Starts and go multiple ways?

Start 1:
Is an experiment to see the effects of having sex in space. What would happen to the body and how would it actually play out.

Start 2:
More fantasy like, there were 2 astronauts who were stranded on a space station. Their station was flung out of orbit of the nearest satellite and now they need to figure out what to do..

Let’s start at the beginning and give them some background.

The year was 2049 and there was a class of 5 newly graduated astronauts .there were 4 males and 1 female.

After they spent many years and finally graduated, they were sent on their maiden mission.
A routine assessment and repair.

The woman’s name was Jess. The men were Greg, Doug, Jamie & Rog.
Jess and Rog were handling computers, nav and cons from inside the ship and the rest were doing a space walk to assess things.

About 20 minutes into the walk Doug and Greg who were busy scanning the circuits reported a Corona blast off the near sun BTY-03. They immediately started to real themselves back in, whist Jess and Rog were scrambling to sort out the computers and organize everything for their return.

Suddenly, the blast hit them and because Greg, Doug and Jamie were outside of the protection shielding of the craft, they were killed instantly. Fried by the intense heat and electromagnetic blast. While inside the ship, Jess and Rog survived because of the shielding, but were thrown around quite a bit.

After they came too, it was damage assessment, the food processing unit had been cooked with the electromagnetic blast, the main power was on backup which only prioritized life support. Due to them being 3-lightyears away from help, things were looking bleak. Space is a cold place. Due to them not having ample heating they were finding it incredibly cold.
Rog said to Jess “we need to conserve our heat”, “good idea” siad Jess, Jess being quick witted began to strip, “whoa what are you doing” Rog reacted, with surprise, then it dawned on him that the naked body produces more heat, especially when put together with another body. So before Jess could answer Rog also began stripping. The gravity was low, so Rog just stopped for a second to marvel at Jess’s beautiful body, she was a tall woman at 5″8 and she had a flat, toned stomach, but what was the thing that took his attention was the E-cup sized tits with perfect pink nipples topping them.

Rog himself was a good 6″2 with broad muscular shoulders, he had a 8.5 inch dick that he tried to cover, when Jess saw she merely shrugged, saying “ah come on Rog, it’s nothing I haven’t seen before and we’re stuck in here for who knows how long” at that Rog lowered his hands and up sprung a semi-erect, 8.5 cock that made Jess briefly and sharply inhale. “wow stud, is it happy to see me” she said teasingly, “I haven’t seen a beautiful naked body in 5 months” he said which made Jess laugh “aww you think on beautiful” said Jess, Rog stood up to his full height, “hell yeah you’re stunning”

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/gikbpv/space_the_final_frontier_ongoing