[str8] [exh] [voy] My first erotic story

I wrote this erotic story the other night, without planning to. I was talking with a friend about a girl he liked at college. And he showed me some fully clothed pictures of her. We began chatting about her and over the course of the night I had a 6 page completed story. He loved it and I’ve always been a talented writer, I’m thinking I have a shot at this erotic literature thinks.

This starts with you, at a pool party watching me fuck your slutty crush in a hot tub. If you read, please share your feedback. Thank you so much! I really enjoy this. DM me if you want to see a couple pictures of her.

The Hot tub

It’s getting late at the party and Myah and I are sitting close together chatting in the hot tub. She sees you, waves and smiles, motioning towards us and you hear her bubbly voice, “Hey, get in!” You walk towards us and step into the hot tub. Myah and I are sitting very close together and you step in and sit opposite of us. Myah introduces us and immediately turns her attention back to me. Her cleavage is peaking up above the water, her long hair hanging wet behind her back. Her and I are talking softly and you’re trying to join in the conversation but every time she opens her mouth all you can do is fantasize about her talking dirty to you. Right now you’re wishing that instead of being captivated by my presence she would stand up and step across the hot tub and straddle you. You’re imagining her grabbing your shoulders and kissing you forcefully, then quickly standing up and slapping your face. She’d giggle at you, maybe turn around and wiggle her ass in your face as she walks away.

Look at her body language, she’s relaxed and leaning toward me, with a wide grin on her face. She glances at you and winks as she places her hand on my chest. You can make out some words, “you know, there are so many boys here, but I really like getting slutty with a man.”

I place my hand over hers and press it against my chest. She leans her head close to mine and touches my nose with hers.
“Oh we’re gonna have fun!” she says seductively and she quickly adds, “do you like my tits,” as she bounces up a little, lifting her breasts above the water. Her bikini holds her tits tight, but the weight of them makes the water splash a little and she giggles. “I always ask the boys I play with to tittie fuck me but they can never last long enough.” “Do you think you can last, If I tease you and suck you and fuck you, would you be able to hold your load until I let you straddle me and pump your cock between these?” She smiles at me as she grabs each breast, rubbing them and squeezing them together.
I look over at you, and remind her that we have company.
“Oh! My goodness!” She stands up and turns around to face you. You’re excited as she leans forward, expecting her to bend over and touch you. She’s teasing you with her cleavage and giving you an evil little grin. Her hips wiggle a little in front of me and I love seeing her ass. Her tight ass. Her black bikini bottom is wet, and I can make outt the perfect outline of her ass crack, she bends over a little more so I can just make out the outline of her pussy underneath her bikini bottom.

She lifts her body up and you’re disappointed as you realize that she was just teasing you with her breasts and her playful smile. She’s now standing up straight, the water bubbling halfway up her thighs. Her hands are at her sides and she looks over her shoulder at me as she wiggles her fingers. I grab her hands and she drops her ass into the water and on my lap. Her ass instantly feels good against my cock and rests perfectly between my legs. Under my shorts my cock is just starting to stiffen and press up between her ass cheeks. Her hands are gripping my thighs as she holds herself up, rocking a little, barely moving her ass against my cock.

She turns her attention back to you, “You can watch.” she says. “I mean even if this was my house and my hot tub I’d still want you here with me.” “I know how much I turn you on, why don’t you stay with me, watch me, watch us…” She trails off, turns her head and kisses me deeply and passionately.

She’s not done teasing yet though. She looks back at you, Her eyes are staring at you with an evil glint you’ve never seen before. “Don’t you want to be here, don’t you want to see me happy.” “I’m about to fuck this guy and I want you to see all of it because I’m a filthy slut, which you’ve always known.” “You’ve had so many chances to fuck me but you never have, it hurts my feelings. You’ve let me get so cock hungry and now you have to watch me eat a cock.” She feels my cock getting hard under her ass and she wiggles and bounces on top of me. “That’s right she says, I’m hungry but it’s not for food.”

“So now,” She reaches up and swiftly pulls the string on her bikini top, letting her tits drop into the water they make a sweet slapping sound against the water, “you’re going to have to watch me get filled because you wouldn’t feed me.” She reaches up and pinches her nipples, rubs her breasts and squeezes them together. “That’s right, you have to watch me fuck the brains out of this guy, You’re going to watch us until his cock pumps between my tits and he shoots his cum up my neck and onto my face.”

“Maybe I’ll even have fun with you too… If you’ll let me” she says sweetly.

Now she stands completely and turns her back to you, you watch droplets of water run down the smooth skin on the small of her back, all the way down to her bikini bottom where the tight black fabric absorbs the water. Her little ass is perky and you so badly want to reach out and grab her now but she is already stepping away from you and forward to me. I reach out with one hand to grab her waist and pull her into me but she slaps my hand away, “no, no, no. I want to show you what I can do.” She steps above me and leans forward.

You’re watching us now as you touch your hard cock through your shorts, still working up the nerve to take it out. Her long hair is held up in a ponytail but from her neck down it’s wet and lies against her back, between little shoulder blades that you’re watching move as her hands are pulling my face forward into her gravity defying tits. Her little body bounces up and down as she giggles and talks slutty to me. “You like my teen tits don’t you. Have you ever seen a girl with a body like mine, but tits that look like this?” “If you like your face between my tits, imagine how your cock is going to feel while I’m lying on my back, squeezing my tits around it and letting you pump away.” She moves her hands to my shoulders and grips me tightly as she leans all the way back. Holding onto me, she lifts each leg up and steps forward onto the seat I am sitting on without fully standing up. She is straddling me with her feet on the outside of my legs, knees bent above the water, The mound of her pussy pressing against my hard cock through our bathing suits. Watch her body heave up and down while her and I make out.

“Are you enjoying the show?” she says looking back at you. “Do you want a taste,?” she’s teasing you, she giggles and licks my face, then she pulls my hand up to her face and begins sucking on my fingers, as she looks over her shoulder at you. “So tasty, so yummy.”

She wants to taste more than my fingers though. She wraps her arms around my neck and her and I make out for minutes, she puts her entire body into her kisses. She presses her wide soft lips around mine and forcefully puts her tongue in my mouth. Her tongue darts over mine and she pulls it back out and bites my lip, giving me one last sweet kiss on the lips as her mouth works it’s way over to my ear, She’s whispering to me and you can’t make out the words she’s saying. Maybe she’s turning me on even more by telling me how she wants me to sit on the edge of the hot tub so she can pull my shorts down and taste my cock next. Maybe she’s asking if we’re being too mean just letting you sit there, she could be feeling guilty about how much it must make you hurt to see her getting fucked by another guy. You want to know what she whispered in my ear, “I want you to fuck me daddy, right here right now, I want my friend to see me used like he could have done so many times. Use me daddy.”

I grab her waist and pull her up to her feet as I stand. I grab her bikini and yank it down below her knees. You’re just sitting there, watching her ass bounce out of that tight black bikini. My hands slide up and down her waist as you look at her tight ass and long hair hanging down her naked back. The hot tub bubbles and feels good against your naked cock. That’s right, you didn’t even realize that you’d taken your cock out already. You were so turned on you couldn’t help yourself. Good job. Keep focused on me and Myah. Make sure you don’t cum yet, if you hold out maybe you’ll get the chance to fuck her.

I pick her up by the waist and she wraps her wet legs around me. She grabs my torso tightly with her legs and wraps her arms over my shoulders. I spin her around so my back is to you. You can see her adorable little toes, dripping with water over her soft skin. You can see her muscles clenching me tight, her toes curling in pleasure.

“I want you to fuck me daddy! Put your cock inside me and pound my pussy. I’m a slut daddy and I need your dick and you’re going to fuck me while he watches you give me the best orgasm of my life. Will you do that for me daddy, will you fuck me right here, right now?” Listen to the fucking desperation in her voice as she begs for cock. You’re mesmerized by her sweet, slutty, sexy voice and don’t even realize that she turned her gaze to you. Looking into her eyes, there’s no denying that she’s a complete slut, not a shred of innocence left. She has cruel intentions for you and you know it. Just like she begged for my cock like a good little slut, she’s going to make you beg for her pussy. Myah is going to turn you into her little slut; but first she’s going to show you how a good little slut fucks.

She breaks your trance, “And you are going to sit right there and watch him while he pumps his cock in and out of me,!”

She looks into my eyes and almost growls, “Do it Daddy. Pump your cock in me.”

I set her down on the edge of the hot tub and stand up between her legs. She releases her tight leg lock around me and I grab each of her ankles as I lay her down on her back on a wooden deck surrounding the hot tub. I think about putting a towel under her back but don’t bother, she wants my cock so bad right now and is such a slut she’s not going to mind a couple splinters and scratches on her back. Every time she feels the irritation the next few days her pussy will just get wet all over again while she thinks about this night, the night she put on a show for you.

I reach my hand between her legs and I’m not surprised by how wet she is. I start sliding a finger into her pussy but she grabs my cock and slaps it against her clit. You can hear the sound of my dick slapping against her pussy, even over the hot tub jets. Grabbing my shaft, she puts the tip at the entrance to her hole. And looks up at me, “Do it daddy!’

“Oooohhhhh Ahhhhhh!” she screams in surprise as I bury my cock inside her. Her pussy is so fucking tight, especially for such a slut. Holding her ankles in the air I begin thrusting in and out of her. All you can see is my back and ass as I plow into her. Listen to her scream, moan and squeal as I fill her with my cock, in and out, again and again. Listen to the slapping of the water and the slapping of my balls against her ass. Be hypnotized by our sex as her pussy grips my cock tightly and I pump it ideep inside of her.

“I’m gonna cum daddy!” “I’m gonna cum I’m gonna cum for you, I’m gonna cum for you daddy” You watch me hold her legs high in the air, I’m watching her huge tits bounce as I fuck her more furiously than she’s ever been fucked. She lets out one last scream of ecstasy as her entire body writhes, tenses, spasms, she’s almost having a seizure. I slowly pump my cock deep in her pussy three more times, then let her legs fall into the hot tub and let my cock slide out of her tight, pink pussy I just destroyed. I let her now limp, panting body, rest for a moment.

Still catching her breath, she speaks softly but with great sexual desire, “thank you for using me like such a slut daddy. Now it’s time for you to get what you want,” she says as she squeezes those huge perfect tits together. “Tittie fuck me before I can catch my breath, Titty fuck me until your cum flies onto my face.

I lift myself onto the deck and slide onto my knees as I straddle her stomach and my cock instantly slaps against her chest, between her breasts. “Do it!” she growls and squeezes her tits around my cock.

You’re about to cum as you look directly between her spread legs, her perfect pussy smiling right at you. Why don’t you get up now, if you just took two steps forward your dick would be almost inside her, do it, do it. Get up and fuck her cunt while I shoot my load on her face, neck and chest. She’s such a slut, she’d love that.

Looking up, you can see me grinding against her belly, pumping my cock between her breasts. I reach down with one arm and grab her throat. Lightly squeezing, choking her just a little because that’s how a slut likes it. Watch as her legs squirm while I press her head against the deck and take full advantage of her breasts.

Oh my god, I’m gonna cum now. She must sense this, sluts have a way of knowing these things intuitively. Her cheeks are red and her eyes are watering as I choke her. Still she looks at me and says, “do it daddy, cum on me whenever you’re ready.” No one’s ever lasted this long and I want your cum. Cum daddy. Cum!”

With one last thrust forward I release her neck and moan in pleasure as I release. My huge load shoots all the way up to her chin, pools of cum running from the top of her tits and covering her neck and chest. As my body relaxes on top of her she takes my hand. Holding my hand she brings me toward a spot of cum on that landed way up on her cheek. She uses my finger to wipe it off her, then turns her mouth toward my finger and deeply, passionately sucks on it. Swirling her tongue around it in my mouth as she finally gets to taste my cum. Overwhelmed by desire, she lets my hand fall from her mouth and begins cleaning the cum of her slut chest, wiping up every last drop and licking her fingers clean. “Thank you daddy. Thanks for giving me what I wanted.”

I notice that she’s looking at you. “What about you, are you going to give me what I want, or am I going to make you my slut?”

The end!

Source: reddit.com/r/sexystories/comments/fyru4w/str8_exh_voy_my_first_erotic_story

4 comments

  1. My critique for “Right now you’re wishing that instead of being captivated by my presence she would stand up and step across the hot tub and straddle you.” would be to use list her desired actions using commas instead of repeating the “and.” This would transform it into “Right now you’re wishing that instead of being captivated by my presence she would stand up, step across the hot tub and straddle you. ” This feedback is meant to be constructive, not insulting; I really like the story so far.

  2. Possible typo in “That’s right she says, I’m hungry but it’s not for food.” It seems like “That’s right,” she says “I’m hungry but it’s not for food.” is what you meant. I love the descriptions of her (minimal) clothing so far, it’s one of the more subtle and alluring facets of erotica and even porn.

  3. In “She reaches up and swiftly pulls the string on her bikini top, letting her tits drop into the water they make a sweet slapping sound against the water,” the repetition of the word “water” is a bit distracting. Still, these descriptions are making me wetter than the hot tub, and I’m male.

  4. Noticed other potential mistakes, but they were too minor to stop me from reading… You’re quite a talented writer.

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