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As we walked along the sidewalk back from the movies, Adrienne bounced next to me, her sprightly frame charged with energy, stemming from the light deep inside her. I smiled, my hand in hers, knowing she was happy, at least in part because of me. After Boston, we talked and grew closer, spending hours texting or talking, or with her kicking my butt in tennis. I looked over at her, with her blonde hair bouncing as we walked, her smile radiant, and her eyes, as always, incredible, framed by soft pink lips. Her dark eyebrows framed her eyes perfectly, heightening her every expression. She had a small dark birthmark on her chin, and I always teased her about it, but it, in all actuality, was extremely cute, giving a contrast to her white skin, making her special, better than the rest. Adrienne’s eyes; I could look into them, and find five minutes had gone by before I looked away, the beautiful corona of gold surrounding her iris, with a blue green contrasting so perfectly, showing you both of our souls with every everlasting glance. She looked back at me, her eyes bright, the gold flashing, and moved closer, bringing me into a tight hug, the ones where you feel as though there is nothing wrong in the world, for she is there, in this moment with you, and I hugged back, wrapping my arms around her, showing her my strength in tensed muscles that only wrapped around her body, not squeezing, their full strength only ever used to hold her safe and protect her from all of her fears and those who would wish to harm her.
On the plane home from Boston, Adrienne and talked for hours, and she helped me get over an attempt I had made with a friend; being as amazing as she was, she was there for me. I also got to know more about her; she had just gotten over a relationship herself, and was a little worried about how love changes over time. I helped her, listening, and finding myself enthralled by her stories, wondering if I could ever be hers. She was so amazing, helping someone like me, and I couldn’t help but wonder…
She led me to the fro-yo place, and I got a pineapple fro-yo with coconut and graham cracker crumbs, while she picked out pistachio and chocolate covered almonds and as we walked up to the teen at the register, who was too busy watching the ‘Bama state game on the tv behind us, Adrienne pecked me on the lips impishly, a challenge in her eyes, daring me to kiss her here, showing my affection for all to see. I drew her close to me and kissed her softly, my fingers of my free hand ever so softly trailing down her back. As I broke the kiss, the teen working the counter looked up and resumed his post, motioning for us to place our ice cream on the scale. I pulled out my wallet and paid, $7.68, and worth every cent for the moments that I got to spend with Adrienne eating it. We walked outside into the brisk Arizona night, and as Adrienne shivered, I wrapped my leather jacket around her shoulders. We sat on a concrete planter, our backs to the ubiquitous palm trees in the soft loam of the planter. She grinned as she dipped her spoon into her yogurt and fed me a bite, and I smiled back, content in the knowledge that she was happy; I dug into my own favourite, pineapple. I finished quickly, as always, so that I could talk to my beautiful Adrienne. She was quietly nibbling at her treat, looking up at me now, with the pink spoon sticking out of her mouth after her last bite. She took out the spoon, and kissed me softly, lovingly, and I kissed back, enfolding her in my arms, feeling her close to me, her body warm in the chilly air. She finished eating, and I asked, “How are you Adrienne,”
“Im good,” She replied, with a questioning tone in her voice. “You?”
“I’m doing well Adrienne-girl. After all, I get to hang around with this super awesome chick all night,” My smile was apparent in my voice, lifting the tone and her chin, as she giggled slightly.
We got up, as if strings had tugged us both at the same moment, and walked to the trash can, disposing of the spoons and bowls before strolling to my truck. I walked over to the passenger side, holding open the door as she got in, and then got into the driver’s seat, starting my car and looking over to her. She reached for my hand and I obliged, and as we were in the Denali, I didn’t have to let her go the entire way back to her apartment. We talked about the movie, and decided that it was an ok movie, and that if Leonardo Di Caprio didn’t win a Grammy soon, we were going to have to start a protest. We both laughed at this, and soon we arrived at the door to her apartment. I hugged her close to my chest, but as I reached for my jacket off of her back, she intercepted my hand with her own and intertwined her fingers with my own, opening her door with the other hand while she pulled me in.
“Well then!” I mused, slightly surprised by her invitation.
“Well I wouldn’t be a very good girlfriend if I didn’t invite you in to watch TV and get a chance to snuggle, now would I?” she responded playfully. Her grin belied ulterior motives, and I promptly raced up the stairs after her, following her cheerful countenance to her kitchenette, which was adjacent to her living room.
Her apartment was one of the biggest of the college friends I had, as she used to have a roommate, but the roommate had moved out, leaving Adrienne with a giant apartment, and because of the contract of the rental, the same rent, as the roommate still had to pay her half. Before this, Adrienne had to fight her roommate to do even the simplest things like wash her dishes, and pick up after herself, so it was definitely a plus that she now had the place to herself, not only because she had so much room now, but also because we could spend time at her place, not worrying about other people walking in at any moment. We had never gone all the way, but I knew Adrienne was ready, and that was good enough for me. I was ok with going all the way, because I knew with her it would mean something, but I wanted Adrienne to be sure before we did anything, and that was far more important to me than any physical pleasure I could ever derive from our time, even as beautiful and sexy as she was. She was incredible, so nice to me, compassionate and understanding, empathetic, and she always knew just the right time to throw a corny joke my way, or to snuggle up close to me, running her hand through my short hair in a moment of closeness.
I sauntered over to her keyboard, and sat down lightly, turning the Yamaha on, and adjusting the voice to a good, rich-toned piano tone. I played, letting my fingers glide across the keys, playing out my love for her, a minor chord strata here to realize the dark beginning, working into a major deceptive cadence, utilizing the full tension structure, sus chords resolving into their comfy major counterparts, my improvisation working well, running a sound melody over a strong basis of ad-lib chords, all based in the theory I had studied for so long, pulling from both my jazz and classical backgrounds to epitomize my soul’s speech. She sat on the counter next to the piano, eyes closed, the ghost of a smile touching her lips, knowing I played for her, felt for her, and loved her. As I wrapped it up, using the 5-6-4-1 resolution, she hopped down from the counter, coming up behind me and wrapping her arms around my chest, bringing me to a standing position, then spun me around as I sidestepped the makeshift chair turned piano bench.
“That was beautiful,” she remarked, “ I wish I could play like that…”
I leaned in softly, kissing her, our lips barely touching, the mood heightened by the soft classical music she had put on in the kitchen. She broke the kiss, her lips lingering slightly, and looked into my eyes, telling me that she loved me, all of me, in one look. I returned the look, and brought her close, falling to the posh couch she kept in the middle of her living room, her in my arms, landing hard and then catching her momentum, laying her softly next to me. I kissed her again, deeper, letting my emotions pour into the kiss, clouding it with love, the knowledge that I would protect her and be there for her, and that I would die for her happiness. As we kissed passionately, her lips parted slightly, and we French kissed, our tongues circling around each other, tasting the slight sweetness of the ice cream still on our lips.
She was so perfect. Her slight frame, standing just 5’4”, pressed close to mine, our legs interwoven on the couch as she moved over me, straddling me with her hips, never breaking our kiss. As she did this, my hands moved to her sides, tracing slight circles ever so lightly on her stomach. She kissed me deeper, and I kissed down her her neck, sucking gently on the fragile skin of her neck and throat, leaving small red marks, where the blood rushed to her skin. She melted in my arms, leaning on me, trusting me, knowing that I would hold her tight and keep her safe, through all of what I am. Knowing that I would give up anything, everything, for her, if she asked. Knowing in her heart that I loved her, not for what I saw, not for her body, or what she could do for me, but for who she was, for her beauty, for her smile when she was happy, for all of what made her her, that which differentiates one person from another. She was incredible. Adrienne made my life worth living again, after all those who left me hanging, left me empty, a shell, those who took me for granted, used me for compassion, used me for my heart, my soul, my kind words and my absolute adoration and trust. She, Adrienne, made me feel worth it.
As she melted into me, she brought my lips to her own, guiding me ever so softly with the tips of her fingers, as I traced soft and small circles on her arms, so light that we were barely touching. I kissed her again, our combined passions heating the air around us; there was only here, in each other’s arms-there was no tomorrow, no yesterday, nothing, Nothing but here, in this room, with her. I kissed her deeply, and she played with the hem of my shirt, her way of asking if it was ok. I nodded in our kiss, never breaking contact between our lips, and as she lifted off my shirt slowly, She stepped back for a moment, admiring me, smiling gently as she looked me over, and then leaping up into my arms, trusting that I would catch her. I easily took her weight, the muscles in my shoulders and upper arms clearly defined by the load, even under her slight frame. Well, sophomore year finally paid off, I thought to myself, remembering my time in weight training, where I worked out daily under the varsity football coach, working up to bench 250 and squat 400, three times my weight on a squat, and about 100 lbs more than my weight when i bench. We slowly fell back to her couch, as I supported us so that she did not fall. I held her close, stroking her flaxen hair as I now played with the hem of her shirt, my turn now to unveil more of Adrienne’s perfect body, that which ties her incredible being to this earth. She nodded, impatient in our kiss, and lifted her arms to assist me as I pulled off her shirt, her cute stomach and black bra now revealed. We kissed deeper, as I traced light circles on her bare shoulders and upper back, all slowly, slowly leading towards the upper middle of her back, where the catch to her bra lie. As she held me close, she kissed my neck, pecking at first, but then sucking gently, giving me a matching set of marks to her own. I sighed softly at her touch, and circled her strap, asking without words. I looked into Adrienne’s beautiful eyes, their golden inner circles shining brightly with enjoyment, and her quirky half smile pleaded with me to unburden her of the piece of clothing. I obliged, laughing slightly as I reached behind her and fumbled with the catch, finally releasing it as Adrienne shrugged her shoulders to make it easier. I lifted it off slowly, kissing along the bottom edge of the bra, ever so lightly brushing her skin with my lips. She sighed at my touch, and as her bra came up, I kissed softly around Adrienne’s nipples, still lifting softly. She looked into my eyes, and leaned over to kiss me deeply, holding me close, our now bare chests pressed tightly together, our passion unfolding in her living room. I kissed down her neck, sucking softly at the hollow of where Adrienne’s neck met her chest, her beautiful skin soft and warm against my lips. She gently nudged my head lower with her hands, and I obliged, although I still made her wait, gently kissing around her perfect A-cup breasts at first, then slowly moving in towards her light pink areolae, my lips so light that their touch, except for Adrienne’s heightened sensitivity, would be imperceptible. I then circled her left nipple with my tongue, softly taking it into my mouth and sucking ever so gently, sucking a little harder as the infinite moments marched on, spurred on by a soft moan of pleasure. Adrienne’s bright eyes were shut in the moment, her mouth slightly open in a sigh of pleasure. I suckled harder, then kissed across to her right breast, moving my hand from her back to her left breast at the same time, caressing her breast gently while I traced a circle of kisses around her other nipple, drawing out her impatience as I waited before drawing it between my lips, flicking the raised flesh with my tongue and sucking softly. I hold her softly with my right hand as she moans again, then looks down to me with her incredible eyes shining with joy and passion. She moved off of me, standing up with her lithe body, her cute stomach facing me, her nipples alert and aroused, and told me softly “Austin-Thank you. Thank you for caring, and for being here, and for your love.”
I kissed her neck, softly nipping her unblemished skin. She held tightly to me, and I lifted her off of her feet, bringing her eye to eye with me, as she leaned forward and kissed me slowly, our passions unfolding in the kiss, sweetly growing more heated in our lover’s embrace.
I set her down lightly, and Adrienne, with a smile, led me into her bedroom, walking with my hand in hers down a small dark hallway, with a few posters from NAU covering the wall. Her room was a medium size, and her bed was in the middle of the room, pushed against the back wall, a sapphire bedspread covering it, with a small wooden nightstand and a lamp next to the bed on the far side. The walls were a soft yellow, with white trim where they met the carpeted floor. Her clock read 9:30 pm, and I thought to myself ‘We have so much of the night left-to us-this is our night-to be-whatever we want-to be together.’ She got onto the bed, and I followed suit, lightly pressing her to a lying position, with me over her, supported on my elbows and knees. She leaned up slightly, kissing me passionately, and I responded in kind, while shifting my weight to my right arm and gently caressing her lovely left breast. Adrienne wrapped her arms around my chest, pulling me on top of her, and I pressed closer, then, as we broke the kiss, I touched my forehead to hers, the tips of our noses touching, and I looked into her sublime eyes, brightened with this feeling of love. I kissed down slowly, taking my time with each kiss I planted on her delicate form, sucking gently and nipping at her neck, down to her stunning chest, her pale skin now flushed with the experience. I kissed around Adrienne’s gorgeous, perfectly sized breasts, circling closer in a figure 8, then pulling raised nipple ever so slightly between my lips and flicking my tongue over them. I kissed down further, slowly, circling her cute belly button, until I met the waistband of her jeans. I looked up, to Adrienne’s beautiful eyes, and she nodded softly, giving me the ok. For the first time, I undid her pants button, the blue fabric catching slightly as I softly pulled her zipper down, now kissing along the waistline as I slowly pulled down her jeans, being careful not to bring down her panties as well. I planted kisses along the length of the top of her jeans, slowly, slowly pulling them down. As I unveiled Adrienne’s small black panties, and I kissed along them, I was careful to miss the raised area of her pubis, saving that pleasure, drawing out her wait to make it that much sweeter. I brushed my lips along her legs, finally pulling her jeans free, and kissing her left foot, much to her chagrin. I did this, partly to tease her, but also to show her that all parts of her were beautiful, with no exceptions. I moved up to her, pressing close against her as I took both of her hands in my own, interweaving our fingers as I kissed Adrienne, softly, but the kiss grew deeper as the infinite moments crawled past, our passions merging and compounding upon one another. Adrienne took my hand softly as I lay next to her, placing my fingertips on the waistband of her lacy panties, just touching the bow on the front. I always found those kind of funny, like an ironic statement of the gift that lay behind, as the only people who saw it were the ones wearing them, or those about to “unwrap” them.
I moved back down Adrienne’s incredible body, gently pecking each raised teet and her belly button as I moved, down, down to the band of her panties, where I started to take them off with my teeth, gently pulling down as she lifted slightly, easing my way, As I did this, Adrienne’s light musk drifted across my nose, a dark sweetness, so enticing, drawing me to her obvious arousal, as the light moisture of the fabric under my teeth suggested. I continued pulling, being careful around the middle, taking care to make Adrienne wait, never touching her incredible sexy shaved lower abdomen . As Adrienne’s panties cleared the base of her lower lips, I continued their downward journey with my hand, pulling them free of her legs softly and I laid kisses along her inner thighs, moving down one leg and up the other, skipping over when I reached her kneecap. As I did this, I gently traced circles around the small pink areola of her left breast, then gently pinching her nipple between my thumb and forefinger, rolling slightly as I kissed back up her right leg, to the place where her legs met, kissing once just above it, and then once on each lower lip. I continued softly rolling my thumb and forefinger, and I softly licked up Adrienne’s slit, tasting her sweetness for the first time. Her flavor put even the most expensive and rare dark chocolates to shame, a perfect balance of bitter musk with a slightly sweet overtone; Adrienne’s arousal tasted as if it were the essence of her-light and sweet, with the bitterness of her musk bringing it to an unbelievably seductive. I lapped softly up her slit, savouring the newfound flavour, as Adrienne’s breathing quickened slightly under my attentions, her chest rising and falling more rapidly. As I lapped softly at Adrienne’s most intimate of places, and then started to circle her clit with my tongue, slowly and lightly. She moaned softly “Austin,’, lost in the feelings surrounding her, filling her, as I circled faster with my tongue, gently drawing her clit between my lips and flicking across it with my tongue, heightening her pleasure as I moved my hands to trace soft circles on Adrienne’s stomach, feeling her perfect skin under my fingertips. Her breath quickened, and I knew she was coming close to the brink of ecstasy, so I flicked faster, occasionally circling her clit with my tongue once or twice before flicking again. She moaned, and her body tensed, her hands shooting to the back of my head, and pressing my face to her; Adrienne’s back arched, as my tongue moved faster, and she cried out “Yes! Austin! I love you so much!”
I kept flicking, moving as fast as I could, driving Adrienne to another shattering orgasm, as she pushed my face harder against her, and she tensed again, moaning loudly in pleasure. As the final waves of her twin orgasms racked across her body, I lapped at her entrance softly, taking in her sweet juices, before finally letting her subside, softly kissing up her incredible body, warm with her passion. Adrienne held me close, kissing me softly, first on the tip of my nose, then my neck, and on to my lips, sweetly French kissing me. She then pushed me back on the bed, moving to kneel over me, kissing me before moving down my prone body, sucking on my neck, kissing down the middle of my chest before she kissed my bellybutton. She then kissed the button to my shorts, looking up to me to ask with her eyes. I nodded my affirmation, and she undid the button, unzipping my shorts and pulling them down gently, revealing the raised fabric around my hardness. She gently ran her fingers across me through my boxers, and finished pulling off my shorts, lifting them off my feet and laying them on the floor next to her own clothes. Adrienne now came up to me, kissing me softly, and gently tracing circles on my bare chest, kissing my neck and nipping me with her teeth, down to the line of my boxers, where she slipped her fingers under the elastic waistband of the smooth black cotton and pulled down, only an inch, teasing me. Adrienne smiled up at me impishly, teasing me, and she then pulled down another inch, revealing my tip. She touched the skin of my abdomen around it, making me even harder than before, forcing me to wait. Her fingers pulled down another inch, touching around the edges of my shaft on my stomach, and then repeated, bringing the boxers all the way to my knees this time, where she left them for a moment, pausing to take me in, with a small half-smile on her face. Guess I must have been a little bigger than her last, and only, other. I smiled slightly as she removed my boxers completely, looking down to her eyes, which glanced up and met mine, the spark deep within betraying our passion, her self-control forcing a longer wait upon me. Adrienne traced up my inner thighs with her fingers, her touch so light I was surprised I felt it at all. Her mischevious fingers then reached the place between my legs, and for the first time, I felt her gently wrap her hand around my shaft, moving up and down softly, before I felt an even more incredible sensation. I looked down in startlement at this amazing pleasure, and saw that Adrienne had taken me into her mouth, sucking on me softly, and I moaned her name “Adrienne. You are incredible. You are so sexy!”
I twitched slightly at her touch, as her tongue circled the raised edge of the tip, causing me to sigh softly in pleasure. Adrienne then took me back into her mouth, bobbing her head slightly as she moved along my length. I felt my breathing quicken involuntarily, and as I watched this amazing sight, I came closer and closer. She circled my tip again, once, twice, and then, after only another minute, I was on the brink. “Adrienne! I’m about to…”, and thats as far as I got before waves of ecstasy racked me, spurting into Adrienne’s mouth, which was wrapped around me. I found my body had tensed, and as the pure pleasure subsided, my body relaxed into the mattress, while Adrienne came up to me, and I kissed her, wrapping her tightly in my arms, holding her form close to my own. We snuggled like this for a time, and then, as I had grown hard again, with Adrienne’s perfect body pressing close to me, Adrienne shifted, rolling me onto my back softly as she straddled my hardness, my shaft pressed against my stomach between her still-moist lower lips, grinding smoothly against me, her clit rubbing along my length, lubricated with both her juices and my pre-cum. She ground against me, moaning softly, and causing me to grow impossibly harder, as her lithe body moved against me. Adrienne then looked down to me, her eyes bright with want, their green outer circles so pretty against the gold inner lining, and spoke lovingly “Austin, I think I know. I want you so bad! I love you, and I want to be closer with you, and to experience that with you, and we don’t have to worry about anything, because I started taking the pill last month, because I knew that I wanted you, even back then.” Her bright smile lit up the room, and I sat up, wrapping my arms around her back, and we kissed passionately as she straddled me, our love about to be consummated. I softly caressed her divine breasts, noting their perfect size and shape, and then I suckled at her left nipple, tugging gently with my lips, and sucking in while circling with my tongue. I then moved to her right breast, suckling and circling, then nibbling up Adrienne’s neck to her soft lips, kissing her even more passionately than before,, showing her that I loved her, everything she was, not just how she looked. I lifted Adrienne off of my lap, and laid her on the bed next to me. I then stood up, getting off the bed, and moved Adrienne to the edge, with her legs hanging off slightly. I reached down, slightly raising her legs, with her knees bent slightly, held spread. I gently circled Adrienne’s clit with my fingers, circling faster as her breathing grew heavy. I looked into her beautiful eyes, and then moved my middle finger to her entrance, slowly pushing inside of her, her arousal easing the entry into her tight body. With the knowledge she was ready, I positioned myself between her spread legs, looking to her once more to ensure that she wanted me. Adrienne nodded, mute with expectation, and I guided myself into her, pressing slowly at first, until I was buried deep inside her, our pubises touching. I waited, giving her time to adjust to this new length inside of her, and then I moved slowly in and out, my hips rocking gently, her body pushing into mine on every stroke, our sighs and moans of pleasure increasing. I looked into Adrienne’s magnificent eyes, and reached to her chest, caressing her flawless breasts, as I moved back and forth, increasing in speed, as our passions merged, becoming one. I continued steadily, both of us building up, and then slowed down slightly, drawing out this wonderful moment. I was so close, and then Adrienne’s body tensed, her inner muscles contracting around me in the first millisecond of her orgasm, her first with someone inside her. I lost it, giving in to the pure bliss, and we cried out in unison, her muscles milking me inside of her, our bodies one in our rapture. We cried out in unison, the pleasure so intense, filling both of us. I moved just once more, to bury myself inside of her, and collapsed onto her softly, no longer able to hold myself up under such intense pleasure.
We lay entertwined for what seemed like an endless time of peace, my head resting softly on Adrienne’s bare chest, her legs wrapped around my lower back, our breathing slowly returning to normal.
“You’re so beautiful,” I finally said,”I love you so much, forever and always. Thank you for this-for who you are, and for trusting me,”
“I love you Austin. You are incredible, and I want this. I love you.”
Never had those words held such meaning, as I gently climbed up next to her, holding her safe in my arms, those which would only be used to protect her, to keep her from harm, and to comfort her. I kissed Adrienne, my Adriennegirl, and she kissed back, softly parting her lips and circling my tongue with her own. We kissed deeply, lazy in the afterglow, and snuggled close. I traced light circles on her back, and we fell asleep together, in each other’s arms, lost in the beauty of the night, our night. My last thought before I fell to the soft darkness of sleep, as I brushed a strand of golden hair out of her peaceful face, was this… I love you…
Source: reddit.com/r/eroticstories/comments/51pjlx/adrienne_erotic_story_written_by_me_tags_cons
This made me hard. Dripping pre-cum inside my pants while at work. I’ll make my fiance read this and reenact this tonight!