First time posting here… let me know what you think or if I broke any rules… I’ve never shared my writing with anyone, so here goes….
The lights flickered as Ash slipped on her clothes for the night. A good day, wonderful perhaps. A few posts on reddit, a bit of shopping, and work wasn’t bad for once either. All in all, the young woman had been rather happy.
He had watched the car pull in. She lived alone, and the house wasn’t too close to others. She was a good target. Young, pretty, and an exhibitionist if the posts she made suggested anything. He had followed her on reddit at first, her teasing posts and suggestions interested him. It had developed into an obsession. Eventually, he had a friend extract the meta data from her posts, and found her. He had been watching her for some days now, waiting for a good time…
The shower beckoned Ash, and she went, turning on the water and waiting for steam to rise from the bottom. The sound of streams hitting tile was relaxing, and blocked out the noises the old home made. The house might have some issues, but piping hot water was never one. In a matter of two minutes, the bathroom was steamy. Ash disrobed, letting her small, perky breasts hit fresh air. Her nipples hardened in the cool air. and with a smile, she reached up, giving them a twist… “Remove-able showerhead, here I come…”
The shower started. The sound of it could be heard through a crack in the window in the bathroom. That was what the stranger was waiting for. He slid around to the back door, a leather portfolio containing a lockpicking set in his hand. He set to work on the back door, taking just shy of five minutes to crack the lock. He wasn’t great at it, but it did the trick. After observing the house for a few days, he figured this was the best way in. She didn’t have a dog or alarm system, so if he could crack the door before she got out, she wouldn’t know. The stranger closed the door behind him quietly, shutting it with a soft snick. He headed up the stairs to the shower, until his hand rested on the knob…
Ash rinsed the soap out of her hair, letting out a sigh of satisfaction as hot water dripped off her head and against her ass. Then she heard a sound. The bathroom door creaking. She had no pets, and no one else had a key. Her eyes went wide, and she stared at the door as a figure came into view through frosted glass. The stranger was tall, broad shouldered, and dark haired. She couldn’t make out his face as he started calmly to the door. Ash took a deep breath, about to let out a scream as the glass door slid to the side.
The stranger slammed open the door as her mouth opened. He shoved four fingers into her mouth instantly, closing them into a fist so she couldn’t scream or bite down. “Shut the fuck up bitch!” He snarled into her ear. “I’ve been watching you for a few weeks now…. We are going to have some fun, you and I…” Roughly, his free hand went down, searching between her legs as two hands pressed on his shoulder and the wrist whose fingers were in her mouth.
Ash sobbed as she struggled. All those fantasies she had, all the questions she asked her fans were coming back… This was it…. her Karma. She struggled desperately against the man before her, seeing for the first time the face of the man in her home. He had sharp, cold blue eyes, with a flecking of gold around the iris. His nose had been broken once to often to be set properly, and it gave his face a severe look. A gleam of lust shone out as she squeezed her legs together, trying to keep his fingers off her.
The man growled, digging a finger into the soft flesh under her tongue. “Open up your legs, or I’ll rip your god damned tongue out!” Hot water was soaking his clothes, and his cock became aparent through the outline of his jeans. He pushed her back against the wall, finally getting her legs apart and slipping a finger into her cunt. “Fuck, your wet as a bitch in heat… And don’t you dare claim its the water….” he took his fingers out of her mouth, and wrapped the hand around her neck.
Ash gasped in pain as rough fingers crushed the underside of her mouth. She immediately stopped resisting, letting her legs open as she was pressed back against the cold tile of the shower. It dug into her back painfully as the rough digit penetrated her. Skin calloused from working hard jobs rubbed against her cunt, but there was no pain… Why, why wasn’t it painful? She was about to be raped, but she was enjoying it? It was all supposed to just be fantasies….
“I’m about to show you the proper place for a bitch like yourself….” He smirked, pulling the finger out of her and tasting it. “Like a little whore… you taste sweet. Now, get on your knees.” He didn’t give her the option though. He pushed down on her neck, forcing her to kneel on the sharp tile.
Ash didn’t have to be told what to do as the hand slipped from around her neck to the back of her head. He pulled her hair, and her hands fumbled to undo the denim at his waist. When she finally got it off, he sprung out in front of her, cock smacking her in the eye. It seemed huge… how was she going to fit it in her mouth? But the tugging grew, and as she looked up, cold eyes met hers. She sobbed silently once, and took the thick member in her mouth. Instantly she fell into a rhythm, bobbing up and down on the thick cock, her tongue twirling around the head as she sucked. Maybe she could make him cum before he got the chance to fuck her… Maybe she could get out of this?
He used her hair like a handle, forcing her back and forth on him. His head rolled back in pleasure. “You even suck cock like a whore….” He thrust forward, jamming the tip of it into her throat, holding it there as she gagged around him. Her hands came up, finding his balls. “That’s right bitch…. you know how to serve a man…” He sighed out as release swelled in his balls. Then it hit him, like a lightning bolt, pleasure smashed through his body, and cum barreled out of him, pouring thick rope after rope into her mouth and across her face. “Fuck…” He groaned out.
Finally… it was over. He had cum quick, but she was good. Lots of practice and all. She panted, about to spit on the floor. But a hand closed over her mouth, and she was forced to swallow. She looked up at him, hoping that he would just leave, but knowing it couldn’t be the end…. She was soaking wet after all. Wait… what thought had just crossed her mind… of course she wanted him to leave. But he didn’t. The rest of his clothes came off, and he pulled her out of the shower, shoving her, soaking wet, into the bedroom…
Source: reddit.com/r/sexystories/comments/dy4by6/unexpected_shower_guest_mfnonconsensualoral_only
Great writing. And damn hot.