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After a couple days on the road, studying the doctor’s book, she became disenchanted with the possibilities. “All the ingredients are so rare! And almost all of these require dead people! Only a doctor could afford this!” she thought to herself flipping through the prep list for all the experiments.
She thought maybe if she found one she really liked she could use her next victim to make it, but her chances of getting all the prepwork done and the expensive ingredients together would be slim. She thought maybe about the zombie servant, the book calls for fresh body parts. If she were the one to kill someone then all their body parts would be fresh and she could bring them back to life. The rest of the recipe called for an electrolyte bath consisting mostly of potassium and zinc, four copper plates, and two very rare ingredients: Halsburgh oak bloodroot and an oath crystal.
The doctor’s notes warn that the spell can be completed without the oath crystal, but the resurrected body could not be controlled by force, however if their mind is still mostly intact they may choose to be loyal of their own free will. The Halsburgh oak grows in the northwest corner of the continent that Millie travels: Anveya. Oath crystals are sometimes found in geodes, but Millie wasn’t worried about that too much since she already had a couple in stock. As for the electrolyte solution, she had all the ingredients she just needed a tub. “Maybe if my next victim is a noble…” she pondered.
The plates were also easy, since she already had copper wares in stock as well. She decided to make her way towards Halsburgh in hopes that she could get a bloodroot. She had a client there who pays very handsomely as well. She could profit as long as she made a couple stops on the way. Looking at her map, there would be a good city to trade in every other day on her route. She could get to Halsburgh in a week or two. On her way she made a point to buy little things that were needed for one recipe or another just to have on hand. Exotic fruits and special crystal catalysts that would be hard to come by. She made sure to pickle the fruits so they would last until she needed them. The doctor’s notes usually called for them to be pickled or mixed with vinegar anyway.
She arrived in Halsburgh in the rain, she was wearing a big black parka over her body’s petite frame. She was approached by a man, “Hey doll? You got a place to stay tonight?” he asked.
She gave him a scowl and he backed away. She continued through the town and to her clients home. She knocked on the door and he answered right away. “Hey, do you have a job for me in the area by any chance?” she asked.
This client knew about her side business and used her services from time to time. “Yeah, there’s this creep who’s been harassing every woman in town. He approached my wife and daughter and I would like him gone. You don’t have to kill him, I’d be happy if he was moved to another town, but you can do whatever you like.” he said.
“Ugh, I think I saw him on the way here.” she said.
“Probably… So what’s the price?”
“Hmm, I’d like to get a nice inn with a bathtub. It would make the clean-up easier. So enough for a night at an expensive inn plus ten-thousand for the hit.”
He counted out some coins and put them in a bag to give to Millie. “Twelve-thousand coins here. If you go to that inn over there they have what you need for seven-hundred a night.” he pointed to a nice building still bright in the windows with magic lighting.
“Thank you, Sir. Can I interest you in anything else?” Millie asked, gesturing to her cart.
“Ah, well. The usual.” he orders.
“Mhmm, got it,” she went over and pulled out a potion with a discreet label.
“Thanks. It’s hard to keep up with the wife without this.” he said.
“Always a pleasure. I’ll let you know when the job is done.”
“The pleasure is all mine. Now have a good one, Millie,” the man closed the door.
Millie went and got a room at the inn and brought up all the wares she needed to resurrect a body. Her client paid her enough extra for two nights so she decided she would deal with the creep tomorrow. It should be easy to lure a target who was asking every lady in town. She did think about what the client said, that it would be enough if she forcibly moved him to another town. She fell asleep feeling confident in her plans. She dreamed about the doctor’s tentacles inside her once again. She wriggled and writhed in her sleep and woke up soaking wet. “Heh, maybe I can knock two birds with one stone…” she thought.
She hasn’t been satisfied since she left the doctor’s clinic. She just never stopped somewhere private to take care of herself in the past week. She didn’t really think about it until she started thinking about the creep. “I’m becoming a dirty woman.” She muttered to herself.
She was smiling though. She was proud. She went out and found a seller for the bloodroot. It was quite expensive, but thanks to her client’s advance pay she could afford it. She stowed it in her pocket and went hunting for her target. Later that day she saw the creep hanging around. “Hey babe, where ya staying?” He asked, acting all cool.
When she looked at him he recognized her face from the day before, and his smile fell. “Oh sorry, I thought you were someone else…” he said meekly.
He looked like a younger guy, with a soft face and long well groomed brown hair. He was large, Millie guessed he was about thirty centimeters taller than her. His chest was big and his shoulders were broad. “No it’s alright, I was in a foul mood yesterday,” she said.
“O-oh. Okay, um, what’s your name, miss?”
“I’m Millie, how about yourself, sir?” She giggled flirtingly.
“I’m Garret.” He said.
He seemed so earnestly sweet after she got into the conversation. “Well, Garret, how old are you?” Millie asked.
They sat down together at a nearby bench. “I’m nineteen.” He said.
“Have you ever been with a woman before?” Millie asked.
He seemed like just an innocent guy who didn’t know what he was doing. “No. You’ll be my first.”
“Oh honey… you’re terrible at flirting. Come to my place, I’ll help you out.” She offered, earnestly.
“Really? I’m not sure I’m ready.” Garret said.
“Really. But you have to come with me now, if you don’t act in the moment you’ll lose it.” She instructed.
“Well okay, let’s go to your room.” He smiled blushing.
“Follow me, hun.” She said, grabbing his hand and leading him to the inn.
“Yes, ma’am” he stumbled after her.
They got to her room and she let go of his hand to go sit on the bed. “So, let’s go over something real quick. How do you flirt with a stranger?” Millie asked.
“Well I’ve seen the guys do it, they just walk up to girls and say really bold things.” He said.
“Oh honey, you can’t just walk up to any girl and talk like that, it’s rude.” She explained.
“Well how do I do it then?”
“You need to get permission to approach them.” Mille said.
“What do you mean? I should ask them if I can flirt with them?” Garret looked confused.
Millie chuckled, “not quite, but I’m sure someone would think it’s cute if you did. You get permission with your eyes.” She explained.
“Oof, I’m not great at eye contact. It feels awkward.” Garret admitted.
He pulled out a chair from in front of a desk in the room and sat down to face Millie. “It’s only for maybe five seconds. You see a girl you fancy, you lock eyes. Give her a smile or a smolder and if she seems happy about it, if she smiles and blushes, and most importantly if she maintains eye contact for a moment. That’s your permission to approach her.” Millie kept eye contact with Garret and paired with a light smile so he could understand what he was looking for.
He blushed deeply looking into her eyes. “And how do I know not to approach them?” He asked.
“They’ll break eye contact as soon as they can. They might look a little bothered, but most people won’t care if they catch you looking once. Just don’t try again if they turn you down though, you might make someone mad or uncomfortable if you keep looking at them.” Mille once again demonstrated with her eyes.
“And what about you ma’am? Why did you accept me?” Garret asked.
“You want the truth?” Millie answered.
“Yes please!” Garret said nervously excited.
Millie sighed, “I was hired to ‘take care of you’ since you were bothering the townspeople,” she gestured her finger across her throat.
“O-oh. Are you still gonna… ‘take care of me’?” he asked nervously, sweating.
“Don’t worry hun, I think I pity you. My client said he’d be okay if you just moved towns, can you do that?” She asked.
“Yeah, I’m only here for a little while anyway. I’m going away in a couple days.” He explained.
“Good. Now that we’ve cleared that up, would you still like to spend the night with me?” Mille asked, pulling part of her robe away to reveal her bare slender leg.
“If you’ll have me?” Garret said nervously.
“Do you know how to treat a woman in bed?” Millie asked.
“I’m guessing I probably don’t.” Garret said.
“Well first, if you want her to enjoy it as much as you, you need to get her warmed up. Give me your hand.” Millie ordered.
“Um, okay.” Garret walked up to her and offered his hand.
Millie took his hand and put it on her right breast. “Feels soft, right?”
Garret cleared his throat, “um, yeah.”
“Make a ‘v’ with your hand and try to cup underneath my boob. You won’t hurt them if you come from underneath.”
“Got it.” Garret cupped her breast from underneath.
“Now you can squeeze and massage it as you like, just don’t be too rough. Women are delicate.”
Garret started squeezing and moving her petite breast around, “ah, sorry it’s hard to learn on small ones.” Millie admitted.
“No, it’s alright. It’s still fun.” Garret said.
“Mmmm, girls like it if you can have fun during foreplay too. Half-rate men treat it like a chore or skip right over it.”
“O-oh really? That makes sense.”
“Okay now push me down. Against the bed.”
“Isn’t that kind of rough?”
“Hmm. You don’t have to push hard, a woman will know what you’re trying to do even if you’re gentle. If you’ve already gotten this far she’ll let you push her around a little, just don’t take it too far sweety.”
“O-oh okay.” Garret said, giving her a gentle push down onto the bed.
“Next, climb on top of me.” Millie ordered.
“Yes, ma’am.”
Garret climbed on top of her and overshadowed her with his big frame. “Put your knee here.” Millie pointed to the area between her legs.
“My knee?”
“Trust me, press it gently against me right there.” She whispered.
He put his knee up against her crotch, “mmmmnn now kiss me.”
“Okay.”
Garret leaned in and gave her a peck on the lips. “No, a long kiss. Put your tongue in my mouth.” Millie ordered.
“R-right” Garret blushed as he complied.
Millie sucked on his tongue and exchanged saliva with Garret. Their tongues danced around each other intertwined in her mouth. He pulled away. “Like that?” He asked.
“That’s perfect.” Millie was now grinding against his knee.
“What next, ma’am”
“Help me undress.”
Garret pulled the robes off her arms and she raised her hands so he could pull off her tunic underneath. She wasn’t wearing a bra since her chest was too small, so the only thing left was her panties. Garret reached for her panties, but Millie grabbed his hand, “not yet, Mr. Eager. Here give me two fingers.”
She shaped his hand so his index and middle finger pointed out and guided his fingers into her panties and onto her clit. “Now make slow circles right there. Feel that small lump in the middle?” She asked.
He started making circles around her clit, “yeah, I feel it.” He said.
“You’ll be ahead of the game if you can find that on a woman. They love to be touched here. It’s called the clit,” she said.
“Your clit is wet.”
“Feel around darling, my whole pussy is wet. It means you’ve done a good job so far.”
In reality Millie has been wet since she got Garret into her room, but she wanted to boost his confidence. Garret searched around her whole labia and around the entrance to her pussy, “you’re so wet, Millie.”
“Mmmmnnn, now it’s your turn. Get undressed.” Millie ordered.
“Right.” Garret stood back up from the bed and took his shirt off.
Millie stared in awe of his big chest. As he took his pants off she slid off the bed and kneeled in front of him so she could be face to face with his crotch. He started to take off his underwear, but “allow me,” Millie winked and put her slender hands on the waist of his boxers.
“Uhh, go ahead.” He said.
She pulled his boxers down around his cock. It bounced as it was released from its fabric prison. “It’s huge,” she commented.
“Really?”
She compared his cock to her forearm and it almost reached her wrist. It was about as thick too. “Your cock is impressive, mister,” she said.
“Oh, thanks.” He blushed.
She gave the tip a sweet butterfly kiss. “Ahhh-“ Garret moaned.
Millie licked the shaft up and down, slobbering all over his cock. “Woah- that feels amazing”
She giggled. “You’re so sensitive, I can feel it getting harder,” she said as she traced a finger across the length of his stiff rod.
“Well I’ve never done this before…” Garret said.
“Don’t worry, I’ll take care of you.” Millie said.
She grabbed his cock at the base and took it into her mouth. “Ahh-“ he gasped.
She wiggled her tongue around the end of his cock, covering it in saliva. “You’re really good at this.” Garret said.
Millie pulled off the cock. “Well, I’ve been in the business for a while,” she said.
“You’re a prostitute? I thought you were a merchant?”
“I’m not no tramp. I’m an assassin. I was hired to kill you, remember.”
“You weren’t lying? After we got started I thought that was a joke to scare me.”
“It was no joke. And now my hands are around your cock. Exciting isn’t it?” Millie smirked.
His dick twitched. “A little… is that weird?”
“Not at all. A little danger and excitement, taking risks, building trust. That’s what makes love fun, even if we’re only lovers for a night.”
“A-alright.”
“But it’s probably a good idea to avoid assassins from now on.”
“Right…”
Millie laughed, he found his innocence adorable. She took his cock back into her mouth and as far down her throat as she could, she grimaced through the effort of taking one so big. She gargled on it to send vibrations through the shaft. “Ah- ah- ooooo” Garret moaned.
She came off his cock again, slobbering and licking it over on its way out, and asked “are you ready to lose your virginity, boy?”
“Yes!”
“Good, you’ve earned it,” she winked.
She turned around to face the bed. She dropped her panties to reveal her womanhood to Garret. She bent over the side of the bed and her cute little butt cheeks opened up to invite him inside. “Go ahead, enter gently,” she said.
He pressed his cock against the entrance to her pussy and pushed it in. Her pussy fought for a second since he was so thick, but once it gave way he fell all the way inside. “Ooohhh shit-“
“What!? Did it hurt?” Garret asked full of concern.
“No. It’s just sooo big~” she writhed.
“Will you be okay?”
“Yeah I’ll be fine, you can start moving.”
“Oh o-okay.”
He started hammering it in and out all of sudden. “Hoolly fuck! Slow downnnngggg!” She squealed.
“Ah sorry!” he came to a complete stop.
“It’s okay, you can keep going. But you need to start slowly, we’ll get there. Just listen to me.”
“Alright.”
He started sliding in and out very slowly. “Mmmmnnng that feels good~ It might take me a minute to get used to you. You’re so biiiig~” Millie moaned.
“Get used to me?” He asked.
“You need to take care to stretch me out gently. Especially since you’re so thick. Feel how tight I’m squeezing you?” She asked.
“Um, yeah. You’re really tight. It feels like I’m being grabbed by you.”
“I’ll loosen up, you can speed up when you feel it,” she said.
“O-okay.”
Millie felt his slow, gentle strokes stretching her insides. Every inch of her pussy was feeling his cock, “mmmmnnnn ahhh ahhh mmmmnnn” she moaned and huffed trying to get used to the monster inside her.
She was making an effort to relax, “ahhhh mnnnnnn it feels amazing. You can speed up a little,” she said.
“Oo, it was getting hard to hold back. You feel so good, Millie,” Garret said.
He sped up, he was a little rough but still slow. Millie could feel his cock hammer and press against her cervix before slowly moving out, and then hammering again. “That rhythm, it feels amazinnnnnggg~ just like that.” Millie moaned.
She started grinding her hips in pace with him. She arched her back so that he would rub against her g-spot just right. “I think I’m gonna cum! I’m gonna cum so soon.” Millie said.
“Already? But we just got started.”
“But your cock! Going nice and slow and stretching me out. Mmmmmmnnn it’s so passionate. Speed up, push me over the edge!” Millie ordered.
“Yes ma’am!”
Garret started pounding her pussy. He wasn’t quite hammering her like he did when they started, but it was fast. “Oh fuck! Yes! Yes! Yes! Right there! Right there! Ahhhhnnnnngg mmmmnn”
“Millie?” Garret asked between panting breaths.
“Yes hun? Mmmmmm”
“I think I’m gonna cum too! What should I do?” he asked, concerned.
“I want it inside! Cum inside me!” Millie demanded.
“Won’t you get pregnant?”
“It’s safe! Don’t worry! Harder baby! Fuck me harder!” Millie demanded.
“Okay!”
Garret started hammering into her at full speed. “Yes! Yes! Yes! Punch my insides! I’m cumming!! Cum with me! Cum with me!”
Millie’s pussy started twitching like crazy. “I’m cumming!!” Garret said, pressing his cock against her womb.
“You’re filling me up! I feel it, it’s so gooood~” Millie screamed.
Garret stayed deep inside her and leaned forward to hug her. “Thank you, Millie,” he said.
“It’s no problem. You did a good job.” Millie replied.
They stayed like that for a while before Garret finally pulled out. “Oho~” Millie was still sensitive to the movement.
“Are you sure it’s okay I came inside?” he asked, sitting down in the chair from before.
Millie climbed all the way onto the bed and laid down to look at him. “Yeah, I paid for an infertility enchantment after my first job. It comes in handy in this line of work,” she explained.
“I see. So what do you do after sex?” He asked.
“I’m glad you asked. Aftercare is important. Hugging me was a really good thing to do! You need to make the girl feel safe and comfortable after you’re done.”
“I see. So should I get in bed with you?” He asked.
“Normally yes, but as soon as I can walk again we’re going to my client’s place. I need to show him proof that I completed the job. So you’re going to apologize to his wife and daughter, okay?”
His face went pale. “I guess I have to.”
“Good boy.” She giggled.
He blushed nervously. “Hey by the way? If you’re an assassin, how were you planning to kill me? You’re unarmed.”
“Check inside the sleeve of my robe.”
She pointed to her robe laying out on the bed. Garret walked up to it and probed around inside the end of the sleeve, “OW!”
He pulled his hand out and looked at the small prick trickling blood on his finger. He folded back the sleeve to reveal a small knife tied to the sleeve. “I would’ve driven that into your neck. There’s other weapons in that robe, but that’s the easiest one to get to in a hurry,” she explained.
“That’s badass!” Garret commented.
Millie shared a bunch of stories with Garret about being an assassin over the course of an hour before she was finally able to stand up without stumbling. Millie was disappointed that she wouldn’t get to revive a body, but she’d feel guilty killing this man. They made their way to the client’s house and knocked on the door. The client answered, “Hey Millie, who’s this?”
“This is the ‘creep’ I brought him to apologize to your wife and daughter,” Millie explained.
“Nice work. My daughter is out, but I’ll go get my wife,” we left the door and came back a little later with a woman.
The woman’s face was covered in bruises and cuts. She looked at Garret, “that isn’t him,” she said.
“It’s not?” Millie asked.
“This man is harmless. He helped me carry groceries the other day,” the woman vouched.
Millie looked at Garret, “yeah, haha, I was only going after younger women. No offense ma’am!” he admitted.
“None taken, sir. Millie you caught the wrong creep. He’s still out there,” the lady said.
Millie got excited, maybe she would get to take a life after all. “Can you tell me what he looks like?”
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