First time writing looking for feedback. Emily part 1

The first time I met Emily was at the interview for my first job right out of college. In fact, she was one of the main reasons why I chose to work at that particular emergency department. I was fresh out of med school and the hospital that I started at wasn’t the largest. It was in a rural part of the state, mostly farming accidents, colds and coughs, or the occasional DUI, but nothing too exciting….except for Emily. She was 26 while I was 33. She stood at 5 ft 6 and looked straight out of a magazine. Her eyes were as blue as a glacier and her alabaster complexion was complemented with long Auburn hair that extended to her mid back and was smooth as silk. It was both tantalizing and a crime that She typically wore it up off of her shoulders with a few locks that fell into just right into their proper places. She was the ER coordinator and was involved in my interviewing process. To say she made it hard to focus during the interview would be an understatement

Her figure was absolute perfection. Perfectly proportioned legs with thick muscular thighs led up to a round, toned, ass that seemed to be basically vice griped by the fabric of whatever skirt or leggings she was wearing that day. Above that her waist seemed to shrink to half the diameter of her hips before giving way to breasts that grabbed the attention of every individual on the unit, male and female alike. Not necessarily due to size but how they perfect for her frame and just topped off everything else.

Her full, heart shaped lips could give way to smile that would make a man commit murder just to be able to see it again whenever she laughed at a joke or asked for a request. She knew she could get anyone we worked with to help her out if she flashed them her smile but despite the power she had it, never stopped her from always having a warm and inviting personality that would make you happy you knew her.

During my interview there was a lot of back and forth banter between us that was playful and sarcastic. I would crack a joke to lighten the mood and she would fire right back with an excellent comeback. Her quick wit was an even hotter turn on than her figure was. She would even throw out movie and tv references that I could pick up on and deliver back to her. All in all, this led to a successful interview and me being offered a position at the ER. Since then we had the typical back and forth of coworkers with some flirting undertones. However, during the night shift about three months after I started things escalated further than I ever thought they would

I was in the physician quarters of the ER that had a bed, shower, and a desk for writing up notes after we see patients. It was close to 6 in the morning and I was sitting at the desk that was pushed against the wall that also housed the entry door typing away when I heard a knock. I tapped a final key before rolling away from the desk and simultaneously yelling “one minute” at the door. After rubbing the bridge of my nose to try and refocus my eyes after staring at the screen I got up and answered the knock to see Emily’s smile beaming at me once it opened. “Oh, Hey Emily!” All symptoms of fatigue and exhaustion immediately left my body upon seeing her.

Emily was on her third consecutive 12 hour shift but you wouldn’t have had any idea looking at her. She was still as charismatic as ever and had a hand on her hip and a jokingly unimpressed look on her face. “It’s not polite to keep a girl waiting at your door you know..” she said behind a mischevious grin while she tapped her foot on the floor. Before I could even open the door all the way she made her way into the room and sat on the edge of the bed that was opposite the desk. “ you gotta minute?” She asked, crossing one leg over the other and leaning back on her arms, her palms pressing into the mattress.

Being that she worked on the administrative side of things she never wore scrubs and opted for business casual instead. She was wearing a pair of black Bermuda shorts with a white blouse and a bright red blazer. As she sat on the bed across from me she crossed one leg over the other exposing a muscular toned thigh that immediately ensnared my gaze. My mind immediately raced to thoughts of running my hands across them to bring her closer to me while my head was between her legs…I wondered how amazing she would taste…I snapped out of my trance just quick enough to respond to her question without raising her suspicion. “Yeah, sure, what’s up?” I asked as I was running my hands over my face in an effort to clear the cobwebs of lust out of my mind that kept me focusing from what she was going to ask me.

We spoke for a few minutes about changes to the upcoming schedule and how work was going. My eyes continued to dart to and fro across her figure then back up to her eyes again as I put my best effort on concentrating on what was being said and not all the other things I wanted to be doing at that particular moment. After we finished discussing all the professional matters. She raised her arms above her head in a huge catlike stretch and fell back onto bed with her arms still extended and her legs crossed…”you docs are so damn spoiled…” she said behind a wide smile as she wriggled her hips to and fro on the mattress stretching her lower back. “By the Gods, who do I need to sleep with to get a bed like this in my office…I..am…exhausted.” My response seemed to have left my lips before I even processed what I had said. “I mean…I would’ve just let you crash here..but if you’re offering..” I immediately widened my eyes and froze after I had made the statement. Emily immediately raised onto her elbows and gave me a puzzled and surprised look. I returned the same glance back to her…”oh..shit..” I stammered “that came out wrong…”

After a few moments of silence Emily threw her head back and laughed “Well Well…no time wasted with you I see.” I sheepishly ran my hand across the back of my neck as I leaned back in the chair “yeah my filter shuts down after 2:00am sorry about that.” She leaned up off the bed and towards me.. “it’s ok..I thought it was cute..” she put her hand on my knee and pushed herself up. I expected her to stand straight up and walk out of the office but instead she leaned forward supporting herself on her arm that rested on my knee and brought her lips close to my ear and softly moaned into my ear. “In fact….I really liked it….” my eyes shot open as wide as they had ever been. I took a deep breath in and before I could exhale I felt her hand making it’s way from my knee up my thigh. I immediately became rock hard. I began to respond to her statement when there was a knock at the door again…”Dr. Jordan, there’s a patient that just walked in.”..I let out an exasperated “fuck..” under my breath. Emily giggled as she stood up and walked to the door. She turned and gave me a seductive wink and a smile. “To be continued…” she said behind a smirk as she walked out the door.

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/12l8nsm/first_time_writing_looking_for_feedback_emily