I am hungry! [MF] getting head from my girlfriend.

I am coming home from college, in Mumbai on my bike.
It’s pouring cats and dogs.. I am drenched to my balls. I stand near a tea stall for temporary roof and give my girl a call..her name’s Minisha!

Me: hey there!!
Payal: hey!! Where Are you? It’s pouring out side.
Me: no shit Sherlock! I will take a little more time than usual.
Payal: ride carefully and come home I am really hungry.
Me: you always are.
Payal: shut up and the sooner you come the better.
Me: on my way!! See you soon Mini.

Now I am 20 to home, wondering what she meant, “the sooner you come the better”!! I have done nothing wrong.

I reach the parking, water dripping down from ever centimetre of my body, walking to the lift helmet in one hand!
Reach the door, ring the bell saying “Mini I am back”

She opens the door “SHE STOOD STARKK NAKED!!!!”
I got stunned and not did I drop my jaw but also my helmet for the first time ever in my life..

She pulled me in holding my collar whilst kicking the door to shut, and kissed me and our tongues met, and my heart pumped the blood like never before, she slid my bag and there goes my laptop with a thud, but I couldn’t give two shits, our mouths are busy, my hands wanted the same thing, to get busy with her breasts, the boobs which I sleep beside every day and still dream of them whilst asleep, the moment I cupped her breast, she moans a little and pushes me to the wall and starts unbuttoning my shirt, I help her with that, she starts kissing me again and pulls my belt buckle to get up and pushes us to wards the single sofa, and she laughs, standing up she’s laughing, coz she’s been planning this before I got home. Hence she said “the sooner you come the better”.
I look into her eyes, start staring down again her neck, her god amazing boobs, her smooth, tender abdomen, and I reach the treasure, I couldn’t see it though, hiding behind her squishy thighs, she notices me stopping my eyes there, and spreads her legs just as little to give me tease. And there is in an ache in my pants.
I look at her she has that smirk on her flushed face!
And I say: Mini you are fucking Amazing!!!
She says “I know that and I am hungry now” gets on her knees to unbuckle my belt and held my trousers, and my underwear and slipped them in one go till my feet.
And business up sprung like a soldier should.
And she gulps into my junior.
I couldn’t say anything for the next minutes apart from Mini , Miniii, Mminiee. She didn’t care for my drenched clothes or my cock.
She new what she wanted and took it.
She was indeed hungry, she’s licking my balls, stroking the mister.
And she goes faster, and I clench my buttocks and there she gulps my entire cock and I shoot in her throat the threads of nectar. And I am on another planet, in ecstasy, I scream “I LOVE YOU MINISHA”..
She takes my cock out, looks into my eyes, engulfs the last bit of nectar in her throat and says, “I know that”!!
I pull her up and kiss her! And flip her down still kissing her!
And there goes the door bell, she stops me and says “the food is here, you go a take a shower and come, I am not done with you yet”

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Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/11ulers/i_am_hungry_mf_getting_head_from_my_girlfriend