First try at erotica so feedback is much appreciated

Noah’s heart was pounding in his chest. He was so engrossed in the kiss that he didn’t notice the hand reaching up his shirt and stroking his chest hair. His breathing was strained as he responded to her tongue with his own. Their kiss was hot and hungry and filled with passion. The hand on his chest slowed and then stopped as she broke their kiss.She looked up at him, her blue eyes bright and her mouth red and swollen from kissing. Her cheeks were flushed and her nipples stood out invitingly “I want you,” she said breathlessly. “I need you.”

They were words he had heard often enough. He pulled away from her mouth and kissed her gently on the lips.Her tongue darted out to explore his mouth as he responded with his own. His hands traced her curves as she leaned into him. Her breasts were firm and peaked with age. He cupped them gently in his hand and felt the warmth of her body as it pressed into his. His dick hardened as he felt her pussy open under his fingers.He traced his fingers along her wet pussy until he found the clit. He pinched it gently with his thumb and then let his fingers tickle the bundle of nerves. She cried out as his fingers traced erratic patterns around it. Her hips bucked trying to meet his fingers but he resisted the urge to move them inside her. Instead he pushed her away from her and stood up.

He looked down at her as she looked back up at him. Her eyes were bloodshot and her cheeks were flushed. Her tits were the size of cantaloupes and heavy with milk. They were beautiful. He could see why she was attracted to him. He was young, fit and good looking. But he was also inexperienced and untrainable.

**Continued..**

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