Currently working on a piece and I was wondering two things.
1. When describing actions (and minimal dialogue) between two characters, should actions be broken by separate paragraphs as well?
2. Should a third-person narrative style talk about someone’s genitalia as it’s own entity (“Cera moaned loudly as her cock spewed more cum from its tip like a fountain”) OR should it be possessive, “As she moaned loudly, Cera’s cock spewed more cum from her tip like a fountain”)
Thanks in advance!🥰