A bdsm story I wrote for someone.

I’ve been writing these short erotica stories for a woman I’ve been talking to for a while now. She said someone else should read this so I stumbled in here. I figured it’s worth a shot. Every time I write for her I use “I” and “you”. Please let me know what you think and where I can improve. I am in no way calling myself a professional writer.

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I was in the shower washing last night off, reminiscing about everything we had done so far, and thinking about what I could do to keep the fire going. We agreed to meet up at the usual place and I told you I left a card at the front desk for you. I heard the door open as I let out a deep exhale, ready to meet you.

“Make yourself comfortable. I’ll be about another 10 minutes.” I rinsed the soap off of my body and ran the water over my head, relishing in the thought of your sexy curves waiting to be explored by my hands. I tied the towel around my waist and walked out of the bathroom. The lights were dim. You weren’t in my field of vision as I moved toward the balcony, wondering where you were. “Ahem.” The hairs on the back of my neck became stiff. Once I turned around to see you, my eyes widened and my tongue involuntarily started to lick my lips.

You were standing in the walkway to the bathroom. My eyes slowly panned up, witnessing your attire. A pair of thigh high stilettos with metal tips, clasped to a leather and lace corset coming just up to the bottom of your breasts. Black fishnet covered your arms going down to your gloved hands. You were wearing a flat rimmed derby hat, with it casting a light shadow over your eyes. You tilted your head up slightly, slowly moving your tongue around your lips. You were smacking a leather crop into your hand as you said, “it’s time I took control. Now be a good boy and lay on the bed. Now!”

“Yes ma’am!” I quickly backed into the bed, keeping eye contact with you. You walked toward my side. The crop started to glide up my leg stopping at my balls. “Listen carefully. You will not touch me unless I say you can. You will not speak until I address you. You will do exactly as I say and if you don’t-” you smacked my balls with the crop, forcing me to let out a long grunt, “-you will be punished. Do you understand me?” I sucked my lips in pain as I hummed in agreement.

“Good. Now let’s begin.” You took your hands and agressivly cupped my balls, grinning as you saw me startled. You placed the crop onto my cheek and asked me, “do you like me playing with your balls, you fucking pervert?”. “Oh god yes please do it mo-“, you smacked my cheek as I hummed in pain once more. “You don’t get to make any requests!”, You said squeezing my nuts. You relinquished your grasp and began to slide two fingers across my cock and up my body, ending at my jaw. You firmly grabbed my jaw and started kissing my neck and chest, leaving lip markings across my body. You moved on to my nipples and gave each one a light kiss, then a strong bite. You noticed my cock twitching and begging for attention.

“Awwwee does your dick want to be kissed?” Nervous to answer the question I simply nodded yes. “Too bad.”, you said as you clenched it in your hand and pulled it towards my stomach. You started to kiss my balls and bite on the skin. My legs spread wider as you pulled my cock even further. Your tongue started around the bottom of my balls and worked down. Your tongue hit the top of my ass. My cheeks clinched and my back arched as I felt this new sensation from you. “You shouldn’t have done that. This ass belongs to me now, daddy.” You let out a little laugh as you continued to lick on my ass, stroking my cock intensely with a strong grip.

“Fuck! I’m going to cum!” I shouted and gasped as I realized I had just made a mistake. You abruptly stopped everything and smacked the crop on my dick, making it pulse. You stood up and lifted your right foot up. My eyes widened and before I could even comprehend what you were about to do, I felt the heel of the stiletto press into my balls, with the toe of the boot smashing my cock into my stomach. “You don’t get to cum until I tell you too! Now be a good boy and get on your knees.”

I got into position and you walked infront of me. You grabbed my hair and pulled my head back. “You’re going to eat my pussy right now.” You pushed my head into your panties and I started. You guided my head further into you and kept exclaiming how you wanted me to go harder and deeper. I was more than happy to oblige, as I proceeded to grab my cock and stroke while eating your pussy. I felt the crop whack across my back. You pulled my head back to look you in the eyes. You had a smirk with raised eyebrows shaking your head in disagreement.

I layed down on the floor per your instruction, my arms and legs spread out wide. You removed your thong and threw it on the bed. You got down on your knees, each one pressed on one of my arms, your asshole close to my face. “Your going to taste this fucking ass you dirty boy. I’ll be the only one to play with your cock, you got that?”. You say down on my face and started to grind back and forth along my tongue, driving it deep into your ass. My cock started to pulse some more, inviting you to it. You grabbed the base of my cock and spit on it three times before agressivly stroking it. You put my whole cock into your mouth and used your teeth as you moved your head up. Your hand moved across my thigh and started to massage my balls. You popped my cock out of your mouth and put your middle finger in your mouth, getting it nice and wet. Your hand maneuvered around my balls and back to my ass. I let out a muffled groan as I felt your finger penetrate my hole and your mouth engulfed my cock once more.

You kept working your finger against the wall closer to my cock while slobbering all over me. I wanted to cum so bad, but when you felt me swell again, you ceased everything and back handed my cock, making it pulse and lose sensation for the second time. “You’re going to cum inside of me, but first we are going to try something. Now get back on the bed.”. I felt defeated from being denied my orgasm, but eager to please my mistress to her hearts content. I layed back down on the bed. You pulled out a pump from your bag and placed in on my cock. “I want you to fill this pussy up. Let’s get you even bigger.”, you said as you began to pump. I felt the blood rush to my cock and expand it. I felt the tension in the head of my dick and when I felt like I couldn’t take another pump, you released the pressure and pulled the pump off. My cock was swollen and bouncing. You grabbed my legs and spread them, as I would normally do to you. I kept my legs spread as you stood there, grabbed my cock, and guided it into your pussy. “This is called the Amazon position. I’m going to fuck you like this until you cum.”

You began to push your pussy in almost a thrusting motion slowly, imitating the times when I would fuck you in the same manner. You reached out and grabbed my throat, applying pressure as you went faster and faster. “Are you ready to cum daddy?”. I closed my eyes tight and moaned with the last of my breath as my cock burst inside your pussy. I was denied so much that my cum was seeping out of you while fucking.

You got off of me. I was catching my breath when you layed down on the bed, legs spread showing me your cum filled pussy. “Now get over here and finish me. I want you to taste yourself as you make me cum.”

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/upvzzd/a_bdsm_story_i_wrote_for_someone