Me and my now ex went went for a walk in a garden at night. Usually it is very dark and many corners for couples to make out or have sex without anyone knowing. I was damn horny and wanted to just be naked in the open. When we sat on the bench he started touching my boobs and squeezing it. I always wear a crop top so that he can easily touch by bare boobs.
A watchman was roaming and we stopped what we wre doing and went to another place. We found a corner and he immediately kissed me and squeezing my boobs. Within seconds he took off my top and i was half naked in the garden. My 34d boobs felt so exposed and my small hands couldnt cover it. He Took off my hands from my boobs and got a good view of my boobs and made him hard seeing me like this topless in the garden. He started sucking them without caring who will notice.
He looked at me and smiled and pulled my shorts down and exposed my shaved pussy. Now i was totally naked in the garden and ready to be fucked. I coved by boobs and pussy but he caught my hands and had a good view. He kissed my neck and ran his hands thru my body. He was so horny seeing me so naked that he made me kneel and suck his dick. He then pushed me on ground and told me he is glad im his bitch and loves publc sex and started sucking my pussy while i morn.
I was afraid if someone would come but we were hidden in a corner. He explored by body kissing it and slapping my boobs. I had no idea where my clothes were and he told me its ok if i am naked all day and would love if someone saw us fucking. He teased my pussy with his dick and then pushed it in as if to rip me apart. He fucked me good in the pussy and then fucked me in the ass while my huge boobs kept moving
He wanted a clear view of my naked body so he took me little near the light and was harder seeeing me like a slut. He slapped my ass more while i face the treee and fucked me again. He loved seein me naked like this and was not ready to give my clothes back. He fucked my pussy again till he cummed on my boobs a lot and made me suck his dick more. He made me his whore that day.
Source: reddit.com/r/sexystories/comments/uool2l/f4m_naked_and_fucked_at_night_in_the_garden
Your work is improving and there’s more detail and set-up this time so I commend you for that. I would strongly recommend improving your wording next, like you say _boobs_ a lot and it’s both not a particularly erotic word plus it’s kind of silly seeing it four times in two sentences.
Additionally, I would recommend researching more positions, like you could use a little more variety in actions besides breast-play and direct PIV.
Overall though you have done a pretty good job with this! Keep building this up!