Hi, I would love feedback on this story as I’m trying to get to a place when I can make publishable erotica. Hope you enjoy!
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Linda’s warm, soft little body laid comfortably in my embrace. We had fallen asleep cuddling naked with each other, her blonde hair ticking my face as I spooned her – the perfect way to end a Saturday evening with my girl. Both of us were in a bit of a daze since we’d had a couple of drinks together. Linda was a pretty shy and modest girl who didn’t drink often, but since I recently introduced her to cider she had taken a bigger liking for it on weekends. She was a short girl too so the drunkenness would hit her fast after just a few bottles, it was really cute but embarressing for her.
Well, this night was going to be embarressing for both of us.
When you feel something wet while sleeping, there’s that survival instinct that calls you to immediately wake up to find out what it is. My sudden jump when I felt a warm, wet liquid running down my legs caused Linda to wake up too.
“O-Oh my god I think I…” Linda stammered with a surprised expression. Something like this had never happened before. Yes, she was peeing herself, and she couldn’t stop it from coming. Her warm pee kept tricking out between her thighs, and when I had realized what was happening I couldn’t help but laugh a little. I didn’t mind that it was getting on me, and I didn’t move even though I could… It felt nice in a weird way, like I was sharing this vulnerable moment with her. But she wasn’t enjoying it – she buried her ashamed face in the pillow for a moment after she was finished and sat up, her lower body drenched with her own liquid.
“I am so sorry, this is so messed up!” She said in her bright voice and began shuffling out of bed in rapid pace towards the cupboard to change sheets. I got up to help her – and that’s when I realized that my dick had become rock hard… It had been pressed against her butt while it happened, and had gotten her wet piss on it as well. Linda looked confused when she saw my erection but didn’t say anything. Now I was embarressed too – I didn’t know why I was so aroused, and my dick just wouldn’t go soft. Both of us just blushed as we changed the sheets and made the bed together, awkwardly not uttering a word to each other until I commented that we probably should wash ourselves off being before going back to sleep.
I watched Linda’s round little asscheeks wiggle in front of me as we sort of drunkishly wobbled to the bathroom. Maybe it was the alcohol, but something about looking at her felt different. Thinking about the wet little hole between her juicy thighs made me impatient to lean her against the wall and enter her from behind, feel her fresh fluids on my hard cock… A kind of kinky fantasy that I’d never had before. But as we got in the shower I could tell she was still feeling like an idiot. The hot water started running, and I leaned in to kiss her soft, delicate lips as our bodies became wet and slippery.
“Hey, it’s okay. I genuinely don’t mind what happened.” I said, giving her another comforting kiss. “I found it weirdly adorable in a way.” Her chest was tightly pressed against mine in the small shower, and her face looked warmly adorable with the wet hair hanging down her head.
She broke a little smile, signaling that I had been successful in reassuring her. “I promise it’ll never happen again” she said.
I embraced my girl in my arms for a wholesome hug… I could feel that a connection between us had deepened somehow, and it felt heavy enough that the comedian in my felt the urge to diffuse the situation a little – an utterly ridiculous impulse just popped into my head. Maybe it was because I was drunk – but when I felt that need to pee that I always get in the shower, I suddenly just began releasing it right onto her, thinking it was the funniest idea ever. My dick was still standing erect and the strong beam of my piss hit her wet belly and breasts – she got the most shocked and cute look on her face I’d ever seen, and we just laughed together.
“Now we’ll be even” I said, taking a step back and grabbing my dick to direct the beam to hit all the parts of her body. She played along as silly as it felt, and put her arms behind her back while standing straight to not obstruct the beam of my piss soaking her together with the running water. She just looked at me with a stupid smile like she couldn’t believe this was happening. I unleashed all the golden liquid I had stored from the drinks we’d had earlier, it was such a pleasurable release and spraying it all on my girl felt strangely reminiscent of cumming on her. That’s right, I thought, I have even more fluid to drench her with.
As soon as my blatter was emptied I leaned back in to kiss her, and then to her surprise hastily beginning to make out with her while I started stroking my hard cock beneath us. I pumped the shaft with fast speed, quickly building up an orgasm while I caressed her slim, slippery, and amazing little body with my other hand. Linda was confused but did her best to reciprocate my excited tongue, putting her hands on my chest. The moment I squeezed that round little asscheek of hers is when my cock launched out an explosive ejaculation – I drenched her body in wave after wave of my hot cum, continuing to stroke myself as more came out.
She stretched her body and let the warm running water wash her clean of piss and cum. I had orgasmed, but her amazing figure in the steamy shower was still irresistable for me like this. I grabbed the soap and began sensually rubbing it in, touching every place of her that I wanted. Linda let out a soft moan, I knew she loved when I touched and caressed her body like this, having my full attention. At the same time, a part of me imagined what she’d look like drenched in my liquids if we hadn’t been in the shower.
“Have I been a good girl now that I’ve let my boyfriend spray me with his… thing?” She had shameless, satisfied grin, but she was still too pure to just say the word cock. “Yep, you’ve been very good. Now let’s go back to bed and never speak of this again!” I said, both of us laughing and kissing.
We thought this would just be a one-time weird little moment that we could look back at and smile. Linda wanted to be a good girl, but it would only be a couple of days until her next incident…
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It was the next Friday, and we found ourselves watching movies and having some drinks together again. I was laid back in the couch with my arms around her thin frame, she loved to be cuddled. But I found it hard to focus on the movies… Ever since that incident last weekend I had been much hornier than usual – we had fucked every day. Linda hadn’t commented on it yet, she seemed to just be enjoying all the increased attention I was giving her. It wasn’t just sexual attention – I felt more in love with her than I had ever felt before. I felt closer to her than I had any other girl.
I leaned in to smell her soft, wonderful short hair and kissed her neck. She giggled and turned around to kiss my lips. We made out, and it wasn’t long before she was sitting on my dick with her whole back turned on the movie. I helped her ride by thrusting my hips with her motions, and she took sips from her bottle of cider inbetween her delicate moans. I wanted to somehow tell her how I felt, but couldn’t think of a way to express it – the best I could come up with was to just say “I love you.” That was true, but there was more to it than that.
As I uttered the words I felt Linda’s body quake – her insides clenched rapidly around my hard cock, and she moaned and whimpered extatic sounds of orgasm. Then she collapsed with her arms around my shoulders.
“I love you too –“ she sniffled, “I-I…”
I pushed her up from my shoulders and saw her face. She had tears in her eyes. “Linda, what are you trying to say?” I asked in a comforting tone. Was she feeling the same feeling as me?
“I… I don’t know.” She said. “I *really, really* love you.”
That was all I needed to hear to know what she meant. I turned off the TV and carried her to bed with me. I made love to her for hours, we fucked until we were both delirious with lust, until we fell asleep. And then history repeated itself, but this time it played out differently…
We laid entangled together, sweaty and exhausted from the long haze of sex we had been lost in the whole night. It wasn’t long after we’d fallen asleep that Linda’s body betrayed her again, this time in a way that was more volatile – her body suddenly tensed up when the hot liquid came gushing out from her bladder between her legs, waking her up with a gasp. It was spraying out faster than before, I could see her embarressed and ashamed face when I opened my eyes, feeling the bedding beneath us quickly becoming soaked, and my own legs becoming wet. Even worse, she couldn’t help but make a pleasured exhale at the wonderful sensation, like it was a big release she hadn’t realized she needed. I just laid there and watched her, silently excited that this was happening again.
“F-fuck!! I’m sorry!!” Linda cried out – it was rare to hear her use four-letter words like fuck.
She was about to get up from the bed, but I held her in place next to me. She gave me a bewildered and guilty expression. “Are you angry at me?” Linda yelped. She obviously hadn’t felt my throbbing erection under the cover. I didn’t know what my next step was, but I wanted us to stay here in the large, wet spot of pee.
“Of course not, my love. But I thought you said you were going to be a good girl…” I uttered as I pushed myself up above her with a hand on her soft cheek, wiping away one of her little tears comfortingly.
“I’m sorry, I don’t know what’s wrong with me!” She exclaimed, looking away from me in embarressment. The intimate smell of her surrounding fluids had enveloped the bed, drugging my mind with unfamiliar, kinky thoughts that I felt like a stranger to. Still, I gripped her little chin and pulled her eyes toward mine. “I should teach you a lesson…” I said, and her expression shifted to one of surprise and anticipation. This made me double down on the kinkyness. “You need to be punished when you’re a bad girl. It’s the only way you’ll learn.”
“P-punished?” She stuttered, a hint of want in her vocie.
I kept myself from smiling at her adorableness, and felt the hot flesh of her body under the bed cover. Lifting myself, I revealed to her my hard erection, and gripped her legs to pull her further into her own dark stain. “You’re gonna lay there and be fucked in your own piss!” I said, and before her jaw could fully drop in shock I spread her legs and suddenly pushed the head of my dick against her entrance demandingly. Her thighs and pussy felt warm, cozy and wet, and dipping my cock in her juicy fluids felt amazing. “O-oh my god!” She moaned as I pushed deeper, her whole upper body was laying in her pee and yet she couldn’t keep from digging her nails into the soaked sheets.
Wet clicking sounds came from between our legs the faster I thrusted into her. She wasn’t used to me taking her this roughly – I felt her pant and moan into my bare chest as I had my arms around her little head, pushing her body up and down on my cock along with my hard thrusts. The very hot insides of her pussy squeezed tightly around my rock-hard rod, pounding her like this I felt like I was going deeper than ever before. Her hair and the underside of her body had was soaked too in her piss now, and I didn’t care – feeling it just made me fuck her more wildly. Even though we had already had sex for hours earlier, but it hadn’t felt this intense, this fucking amazing until this moment. I didn’t want to stop, but if I didn’t pause I would cum, so for a moment I left my cock shoved fully inside and we just began eagerly, messily making out with each other as we both breathed for the sour air around us.
“I-I feel so gross” She whispered, I felt the tight walls of her pussy clench and adjust around my unmoving, balls-deep meat as she continued – “B-being held down in my own gross piss like this is just what I deserve! I’m such a bad girl, thank you for punishing me!”
I kissed my girl deeply and passionately, relieved that she was into whatever it was that we were doing… Because I didn’t want to stop I begund slowly sliding my thick shaft in and out of her again as I replied.
“Don’t worry, we’ll train you to control your little bladder. I can’t have you make messes like this, ok?”
I felt Linda grind her wet crotch in anticipation, tempting me to go faster again. I enjoyed teasing her like this, I knew that if I began pounding her again I wouldn’t be able to stop until I came.
“…Train me? What do youuaaAAA-“ I interrupted her with a tight grip and suddenly began to fuck her even harder, faster, rougher – punishing her unruly little pussy with the full force of my need for release. Our sweaty, damp bodies were perfect together smacking against eachother, and sensing that I was close to orgasm Linda wrapped her thin arms around me and pulled down to help me thrust into her harder.
In the final moment I tore away from her, arcing my back as I unleashed many explosive, thick waves of cum all over my girl’s naked, messy body. She smiled ecstatically as she felt herself get covered, not even hesitating to smear it around on herself for fun. After I was fully drained I looked down at her laying there – our bed was a complete mess. After just looking lovingly at each other and breathing for a moment, I took her hand and helped her to stand up from the bed. Linda stood there as I circled around her with a satisfied smile. Her entire sexy backside was damp with her own juicy piss, and her whole frontside was drenched in my own juicy cum – she was *so fucking beautiful* in the most untidy, perverse way.
I kissed my girl’s forehead. “Let’s talk about your training in the shower” I said, and she just replied with an unjustifiably innocent, adorable giggle.
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