The Rapture of Breanne: A kinky re-telling of Snow White and the 7 kinky Doms

Once upon a time, a brave young woman walked into a public dungeon on Free Play night and had no idea what she was getting herself into. Her name was Breanna, and she had just moved to the big city from the sleepy Midwest because she was starting college in the fall. A few weeks back, Breanna had met a few women at a club and they had talked about the experiences they had had at a place called “The Cave” on Free Play night and she had been intrigued to say the least. The stories they told her left her skin flushed and her pulse racing as she imagined herself in those situations, she knew that she had to find this place for herself and explore her desires in person. When the women left the club that night they gave Breanna a business card and when she looked at it later, it only contained an address and the phrase “Admit one”.

Breanna spent that night furiously masturbating and imagining herself exactly where those women had said that they had been inside The Cave. In her mind, she could see herself bound to a wooden cross, her arms and legs spread wide as her naked body was displayed lewdly for everyone in the dungeon to see… her hips bucking and her breasts heaving wildly as she moaned like a wanton slut in heat while multiple men had their way with her. In her fantasy, she was treated alternately like a porcelain doll and in the next moment, she could feel the heavy thud of leather striking her ass hard as she cried out in extacy!

“Oh my fuck… ugng! Ngh….. take me!” she called out into the dark space of her small bedroom. “I want to feel it, I want to feel everything!” she gasped as a soul-splitting orgasm ripped through her and left her nearly blind for the stars in her eyes.

Now, as the legend goes, Breanna waited the 3 days before the next Free Play event was supposed to be and could barely concentrate on anything else. She was so turned on constantly that even her panties rubbing against her soaked sex was enough to nearly set her off into an uncontrollable fit. No one knows how she managed to keep her wits together for that time, but we know that she did because on the Friday night that the event was planned, one of the women from the club she had shared drinks with called her to see if she was coming out that night. She and Elise chatted for a bit and Elise assured her that she would be perfectly safe, no matter what she decided to try… that she would be there at 7:30pm and that the business card she had been given would get her into The Cave.

When Breanna flashed the business card that night she was immediately led in through the heavy wooden doors and into a moderately lit room with some easy-going club music in the background. The moment the doors closed though, she could see that she was in a completely different world than the one she had just left.

The room was larger than she had expected it to be and very comfortably warm, which was a good thing, because all around her she could see people in various states of undress doing things that she had only heard about existing 3 days ago. Someone was tied to the ceiling over here, wax was being dripped off a candle onto a naked man’s body over there, out in the back there was a woman bound on her knees and screaming in what could only be called a rapturous orgasm while a man and a woman both crowded around her, their hands and arms moving furiously. Breanna’s mind swam and spun with all of the new visuals she was seeing!

The next thing she knew, an extremely petite young Asian woman in a black leather mini -dress walked up and smiled brightly, then asked for her invitation. As Breanna shook the cobwebs from her head and looked at the woman, she felt her hand on her arm. It took a moment but Breanna managed to hand the woman the card she had been given and smile.

“I’m Ari, I’ll be your attendant for the evening. I’m here to make sure you get to experience anything that your heart desires and make sure that you don’t go too far on your first visit.” Ari said sweetly.

“Is it that obvious?” Breanna asked.

“Well, for several reasons, but yep… I’m afraid so.” Ari chuckled. “You see, only first time visitors have this invitation, after that you’ll have a small tattoo that is only visible under black light that grants you instant access at any time of day. And…. that deer in the headlights look you have going on didn’t hurt my guess either. So tell me, brave newcomer, what can I call you and what would you like to experience tonight during Free Play at The Cave?” Ari said brightly

“I’m Breanna… and I’m not really sure where I want to start but I want to try everything!!”

Ari just smiled and took her hand with a brilliant smile, the led her away from the doors as her impossibly black hair swished around her hips.

A lot of what was said has been lost to time and legend, but here’s what happened next…

Breanna followed her escort around, her eyes glued to the young woman’s hips until she stopped at the first play area and pointed out what was happening.

“This is Jake, he’s a pleasure Dom, that means he takes pleasure in controlling the orgasms of his partner and deciding when and how they find their release.” Ari said with longing in her eyes. Mere seconds later, a guttural scream came from just beyond Jake as the woman he worked with lost her mind to animistic pleasure. “Come on, let’s keep going before I stay and watch him watch his magic all night long.” she giggled and pulled forward.

Breanna could hear the sharp slaps and deep thudding impacts on skin before they reached the next area and she squeezed Ari’s hand tight… stopping cold. “Is he…. beating her?!” she asked almost under her breath, “Is he hurting her?”

Ari’s hands went protectively to her shoulders and she looked up thoughtfully and she spoke softly to reassure her.

“Yes, yes and no…” she said, “The partner Kayden is with asked for exactly what she is getting and Kayden is experienced enough to be sure he pushes her to the edge without going past what she can handle. So, yes, he is beating her but in a way that maximizes her pleasure; yes, he is hurting her but only because she enjoys being hurt like this; and no, he is not causing pain that she does not want. They have a well-established safety system and there is another person watching to catch any signals to stop the play that Kayden might possibly miss.” she said calmly. “I promise you, she is perfectly safe and will have nothing more than bruises in the morning… and knowing Kayden, she will love every single one and come back asking for more in her next session.”

They walked closer and Breanna watched entranced for a while as the woman sweated over a padded bench and Kayden repeatedly flung the leather flogger at her body, she writhed at every impact but seemed to be beyond herself with the entire experience. When Ari led forward again, Breanna was already flushed with anticipation.

Next was a brightly lit area with different flooring than Breanna had seen in the rest of The Cave, it seemed like it was softer, maybe padded and there was a woman crawling around on all fours with a tail coming out of her ass…. was it… inside her?!

“This is Olivier, our pet play expert” Ari began, “whether it’s simple kitty play with belly rubs and snuggles or something much more primal, this is your guy. He’s chased me down on many occasions and made me remember that I was no match for him.” Ari blushed and shivered visibly. “I highly recommend trying this one, it’s amazing to let yourself out of your shell and just experience the world.”

There was a huge crowd around the next area, and Breanna could see the lights dimming every now and then as the crowd murmured and gasped in time with the strange lighting. When they finally could see, Breanna saw a man strapped to a medical bed that had been tilted in the air, and there were wires and leads all over him that led to a stack of boxes off to one side. An olive-skinned man stood nearby with a control box in one hand and a long wand that looked like a plasma ball in the other.

“That’s Armani… and that’s his favorite toy, the violet wand. And yes, if you remember the plasma ball things that gave you a mild shock it’s kinda like that…. just…. stronger. And girl… trust me, you want to meet that wand… it will completely change your outlook on life.” Ari beamed. “Come on, there’s only a few more players to meet if you really want to experience everything!” she squeezed Breanna’s hand even as the heat started to flood her cheeks and led onward.

Around the next group of people, things were absolutely silent and Breanna could smell the faintest aroma of incense in the air. As Ari pushed them gently into the crowd, the people parted and looked at them knowingly, letting them through to experience the magic first hand. Before her, Breanna could see a breathtakingly beautiful woman, held aloft by heavy cables and tied with the most intricate rope work that Breanna had ever seen.

“Isn’t that uncomfortable, the position I mean?” Breanna asked in a whisper, “It seems like she would be aching from just getting in that position let alone holding it like that!”

Ari leaned up and whispered in her ear “The trick is to relax into the ropes and let them hold you, trust the rigger, Sebastian will never do you wrong.”

Breanna could feel her pussy begin to throb at the thought of being so helpless, so utterly at the mercy of another person… so utterly on display for everyone to see. She had no idea what was coming next.

As Ari led on once more, Breanna could hear deep groans that sounded like they were being ripped straight from someone’s throat… almost painfully. When she could see, Ari pointed out the specially made chair that the woman was seated on… or rather bound to… it was pose-able, and she made a point to mention that a person could be put into almost any position they could fold themselves into while seated or on their back and the chair would hold them there until it was released. The woman’s hands were bound in leather cuff’s above her head and her legs were splayed wide, showing all of her dripping, creamy sex to anyone who wanted to look. A plug like a glittering jewel sparkled from between her ass cheeks and the look on her face was utter anticipation.

“Meet Benny, our well-endowed show off who loves nothing more than to show off his partners to the world. I think he would put them on worldwide TV if he could get away with it!” Ari giggled.

Breanna’s breath caught in her throat and her nipples tightened to hard points, she’d fantasized about being with a black man but it just wasn’t possible back on the farm… there just weren’t any around. Now, she had her chance and she wasn’t going to pass it up!

“And last but most certainly not least, let me introduce you to Vinnie, our Sadist du jour. Vinnie is a miracle worker and can make you hurt so good that you’ll beg for more and do anything that he wants just to have him give it to you!” Ari swallowed hard as she said it…. “Trust me, I know him all too well. Some days I just need something to make me forget about the world and Vinnie is always the Dom I come to, and cum to, if you know what I mean.” a devilish grin swept across Ari’s face.

As the story goes, Ari and Breanna spent some time talking and having a few drinks at the bar when Breanna looked her square in the eye and said something she never thought she would have the courage to say out loud.

“Ari, my panties are soaked and I’m afraid if I stand up right now my skirt will show everyone just how turned on I am. I want… no, I need to experience this tonight… I can’t wait anymore or I might just explode and cum all over this chair!” she said boldly.

Ari smiled through half-lidded eyes with a knowing smile and swallowed down the last of her cocktail before motioning for a server to come her way. She looked back up to Breanna and slowly spoke.

“We try to please all of our guests here at The Cave, just tell me where you want to start and I’ll make it happen. Tonight is about self-discovery, and I want to make sure you get to do absolutely everything your heart desires.” her voice was husky and dripped with promise.

“Ari…. I want everything… I want every experience you showed me tonight and so, so much more! I want you to show me the world that you know, I want to know it the way you do, I want to have the look in my eyes that you have in yours when you watch the Dom’s work their magic on their partners.” she could barely believe she was admitting it out loud let alone saying it in a crowded room as the server approached!

Ari just nodded and spoke to the server calmly.

“3 devil shots and a pack of 7 to go, I have a guest to entertain in a moment and I don’t want her to feel left out.” her voice was cool and confident.

The server put down her tray and extended her hand.

“I’m Rachel, I’ll get you ready for the main event tonight.” She said, taking Breanna by the hand and helping her stand. “Lets get you to the stage and get you ready…”

She followed closely behind Rachel as they walked to the stage and waited just on the side of it to be announced, Breanna could feel her wetness slicking her thighs as she tried to imagine what would happen, or maybe just what would happen first. Suddenly a small tinkling of wind chimes brought the entire dungeon to silence, and everyone looked to the stage as 2 women walked out and into the spotlights. She thought that she recognized Ari’s shapely ass and long black hair from behind but she wasn’t sure about the curvaceous redhead next to her.

“Ladies and gentlemen, Dom’s and subs… tonight I present to you a special treat that has only happened once before in the history of The Cave. Tonight, we have a new guest that wants to experience everything that our Dom’s have to offer and all at the same time, all in one night! She will be assisted by 3 of our finest members tonight so lets give them all a round of applause and join me in welcoming to the stage for the very first time… Breanna!!!” a voice boomed from speakers in the ceiling.

With that, Rachel was leading her up onto the stage and when the women turned around she could see that she was right, it was indeed Ari. And with her was Elise… and they were both completely naked! Breanna turned to look at Rachel only to find that she was now totally naked as well, and a stunning beauty in her own right! Elise and Ari moved forward and Rachel helped them get her in position in the center of the stage as Ari leaned in and whispered in her ear, just barely louder than the music that was now starting to pulse as the crowd gathered around.

“You trust me, right? I’m going to be watching to make sure things don’t go too far, and so is Elise. I’ve been exactly where you are right now, I’m the only one who has ever done this before so I know what you’re going through. If at any time you’re uncomfortable or scared too much all you have to do is say the word ‘red’ and everything stops…. instantly. If you’re good and want to continue, when the Doms check in with you just say ‘green’ and they will keep going, got it?” Ari said calmly and clearly. “We’re going to strip you now… all 3 of us together.”

And as legend tells it, Breanna was on that stage for several hours, having the sexual awakening to end all sexual awakenings. She let her mind and body go to places that she couldn’t even fathom existed before that night and ended up being taken down out of her restraints as a boneless and breathless husk of her former self. Utterly sated, and completely spent. The next day, she joined The Cave as a full member and hoped she could be there when someone else made the brave choice that she made.

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/u5r0gv/the_rapture_of_breanne_a_kinky_retelling_of_snow