21 [F4A] am writing an erotica, and want help
I [F21] am writing an erotica. I wanna write a buttsex story with all kinds of anal sex. It’s incredibly sexy and romantic and I wanna write it with someone. I don’t plan on making money off of it, but I do plan on maybe posting it to Reddit when it’s done.
It’s about a young religious man named Scott, his wife Ashley, their maid Madison, their friends The Sullivan Sisters (Mary Kylie Mia and Donna), and Scott’s ex girlfriend Ruby. He has vaginal with Ashley, and anal with the rest.
I’ve written the outline of the chapters so far. Each chapter is about:
1. Background of how they met each other. How they grew up in the church, met, etc.
2. Scott and Ashley’s marriage and sex life
3. The four girls tempt Scott for anal and he gives in.
4. Him feeling guilty about the anal and goes back to vaginal with his wife. We find out here Ashley doesn’t like anal.
5. The four decide to stay at Scott and Ashley’s house. Scott panics as he is caught with the four
6. He meets Ruby, his ex, at the park. They then have anal at her house
7. Ashley and the girls see him with her and then him and Ashley have a heartfelt moment. Then Ashley has anal with Scott but hates it.
8. Scott has sex with Madison, their maid, to conceive a baby, since Ashley is sterile, and then him and Ashley agree to never have sex again, since their sex is no longer special in her eyes.
9. All six females agree to marry Scott.
10. Ashley has strap on anal with Scott, and they laugh about it. They then have anal and it’s better for Ashley. Still not her favorite but she’s getting the hang of it.
11. Scott’s has anal with all 7.
12. The big anal orgy before the wedding. They all dress sexy.
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/tuz0d8/21_f4a_am_writing_an_erotica_and_want_help
Sounds great and chock full o’ butt fun. One observation I’d make is that Mary and Mia are too similar for character names and could cause confusion when things get steamy.
Is there a ‘ripple’ effect with the characters, where they see the pleasure that comes with anal for others and then want it for themselves?