I want to pull your pants down and press my face into your crotch and feel the warmth of your manhood on my face.
I want to feel your hand play with my hair as I start to lick your balls. I want to savor the taste and experience as I suck on them and hear you moan.
I want to tease the head of your cock with the tip of my tongue, and once it’s moist do warm and cool breaths to get you feeling stimulated.
Then as your glory rises I want to take you in my mouth enjoying your precum as you fill up my mouth. I’ll start to suck you from top to bottom licking your balls at the same time.
I’ll occasionally pause to kiss and lick your cock taking my time making you feel like the king that you are. When your moans reach a peak I’ll keep sucking you to completion and feel you relax as I swallow your load.
Any and all feedback is welcome!
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/sr683y/28_f_worship_him_2022
Glorious short. Very stimulating.
I’m into it and it’s along the lines of how I’d give a blowjob. I don’t know why, but the word “glory” for dick makes me uncomfortable. Also the word “member”… can’t stand either one! But that’s just my personal preference.
This is great. Graphic in the nesf way possible, concise, and very sexy.
This is such an evocative piece of prose. It would work equally well if it were three or four times as long. You have a great imagination and way of presenting it. Trust it.
this reminded me so much of my ex for some reason , really hot and precise.
Very erotic, would love to see a longer version. There’s only 1 thing I’d change and it’s the double use of “mouth” in the 4th paragraph. Try using other descriptive words or comparing it to other things like you did before with manhood or glory.
Hope it helps and keep them coming!
That was hot. I loved the descriptiveness of it. I only wish it were longer because I want more.