That Time in the Park [MF] [Public]

This is my first piece, any feedback would be welcome.

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“I really want it” she said, her hand rubbing my stiff cock through my jean shorts.

I locked lips with her, and our tongues squirmed in each other’s mouths. She rubbed me faster, causing me to moan into her mouth. I looked down into her beautiful brown eyes and watched her bite her pink plump lips and made the decision.

“Then let’s do it.” I replied.

Her eyes shifted to scan our surroundings, “Should we really?”

I looked out at the Caribbean Sea before us. The park’s amphitheater was positioned so that it was
secluded from the rest of the park, making it an excellent make out spot. The only exposed part was towards the sea. It was common for multiple dive boats to be anchored off the coast in view but today, in a stroke of luck, there were none. I listened for activity behind us, the usual cacophony of children’s
cries at the playground in the front of the park were muted.

“There isn’t a lot of activity going on, I think we could risk it.” I said.

She chewed her lip in thought, her hand still rubbing my cock. Her mind was torn between lust and
restraint. I watched hoping that the lust would win out. Finally, she spoke, “Go and see if you see anyone is nearby.”

That made me jump up and make my way to the main section of the park. I glanced at the sea, hoping
it stayed without vessels while I did reconnaissance. I could see at the far end of the park, what looked like a single nanny sat watching over a pair of kids on the playground. Otherwise, the park was empty. I hurried back to her, to report my findings. It was the best opportunity we could hope for, and I
hoped she would agree.

She looked unsure despite my assurances that we were practically alone. I added that the gravel
would alert us to anyone approaching. Still reluctance. My cock was aching, straining against the denim, yearning for release. I embraced her again and administered another intense kiss. Her passion reignited but still not sufficient to elicit a decisive affirmation.

I had to have her. I unzipped my jeans and pulled my rock-hard cock out and began to stroke it,
precum on the tip glistening in the sun. Her eyes narrowed, and she bit her lip. I knew that hungry look in her eyes. She took it into her hand, and we entangled ourselves in a kiss as she stroked it. We parted and she moved her head to my lap and took me into her mouth. Success.

She had gotten so much better at this since her first time. On that occasion it had been in the back
of my mom’s Explorer. She was nervous then, unsure and inexperienced. Now, she did it with enthused confidence. Amongst the chirping birds and the rustle of the trees, wet slurps could be heard. Our breathing heavy, as she worked my rod. She took me deep to the back of her throat and gagged, then came up and stroked me. I wanted more of her mouth, but I knew we needed to be quick.

“Take your panties off and give them here” I said.

She complied and ran her hands up her khaki skirt and produced a pair of pink cotton panties then
handed them to me. I stuffed them into my pocket, not without noticing the wet spot on them, which made my cock jump.

“Your slippers too.” I commanded.

She looked at me puzzled, but she refrained from questioning and obliged. I took them and positioned each one on the concrete on the outside of my thighs then pulled her to straddle me.

With enthusiasm she plopped her soaking pussy down on to my cock and whimpered. Each of her knees resting on a slipper, a small buffer to the concrete. Right there, in the sun-filled park, two horny teenagers began to fuck. She bounced up and down, my cock filling her up while she moaned into my ear. Her tight pussy felt amazing as it slid up and down my member. She switched from bouncing to rocking back and forth. I gripped her ass over her skirt and delivered another kiss. We were embraced, making out while she ground her hips into me. She was whimpering now, lost in passion. Despite the feeling of her soaking pussy sliding on my shaft, I knew I had to keep some level of awareness, lest we get caught. I sucked and nibbled on her neck, she responded by increasing her pace rocking into me, harder and faster. Her whimpering grew and with it my own excitement. She was close, and I urged her on.

“Cum for me, slut. Cum for me out here in public, like a good little whore.”

It was enough to send her over the edge and I felt her pussy clamp around my shaft. Her body quivered as she buried her face into my shoulder and emitted stifled moans. Fuck, she was hot. I thrusted up into her as the orgasm washed over her. “What a fucking slut you are, look how hard you’re cumming out here.”

She growled with lust and bit my neck, then whispered into my ear. “You made me into this slut. Now
it’s time for you to fuck me like one.”

 She got up and knelt next to me on her slippers, pulled up her skirt and arched her back. Her earlier bashfulness had evaporated and now she was relishing the affair. I stood behind her and admired
her ass on display. Her bald pussy was glistening, and my cock jumped with excitement. With two fingers, I rubbed her clit and she gasped, then I ran them up and down the length of her slit before slipping them in. She moaned to encourage me. After playing with her dripping cunt, I slipped my fingers wet with her juices into her mouth which sucked clean.

I grabbed her hips and with a single thrust, buried my shaft into her pussy. She grunted in satisfaction and cooed. I began to pump her hard, the fabric of jeans slapping against her ass was muted. She was my perfect slut, the two of us grunting together as my rod slammed into her. I heard a motor and looked over my shoulder to see a boat racing by. There was enough distance that even if they could make out what was happening, they wouldn’t be able to make out who we were. That didn’t stop me enjoying the fact the fact that someone could see us. I turned my attention back to her and saw that she was looking over her shoulder as well. I gripped her chin and pulled her attention back to me.

“Focus on taking this dick.” I ordered.

She smiled and bit her lip, closed her eyes and was taken by the pleasure. I increased my pace,
slamming into her. Her whimpers had turned to moans and I clasped my hand around her mouth to stifle them. That triggered another orgasm, and I felt her pussy tighten as she squealed into my hand. Watching her cum gave me a thrill and I could feel my own orgasm rising.

“I’m close, baby.”

She pulled her face my hand and turned to look at me, “Don’t c-”

“I won’t cum inside of you.” I said to cut her off.
I wanted nothing more than to fill her tight hole with my seed, but rationality prevailed over my
lustful brain. It wouldn’t do any good to get her pregnant. Besides, I knew the perfect alternative.
“I’m going to cum in your mouth.” I said through gritted teeth.

“Ok baby.”

Fuck yes! I thought.

I gave her a couple of hard thrusts then ordered to turn around. In a flash, she turned and was seated
in front of me. Big brown eyes up looking up at me, her mouth ajar and tongue at the ready. The vision of her there ready to accept my load sent and me over of the edge. A single stroke of my cock and I convulsed. The first rope of cum streaked across her face, just missing her eye. The following shots onto her tongue. I was already enamored with the vision of my girlfriend sitting there with a cum-filled mouth but watching her swallow my seed caused a broad smile to appear on my face. Using a finger, she mopped up the streak of cum on her face and licked it clean with a smile. How did I get so lucky?

I stuffed my cock back into jeans and we sat there for a moment, relishing our post-fuck glow. It was
time to go though, so we walked to the car holding hands. I looked back at the rear of the amphitheater and noticed at a cabana a few yards away, sat a couple eating. It may have been my imagination, but they kept looking at us as we walked. How much had they heard?

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1 comment

  1. Proof read, and possibly change the way it starts apart from that awesome story. Being your 1st you can only improve. Keep the creativity going

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