My first attempt at writing erotica and looking for some feedback. This version is the female POV. The male POV will be posted shortly. TIA! 🙂

Update – I have posted the male POV: [https://www.reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/qf8fs9/as_promised_heres_the_male_pov_for_the_story_i/](https://www.reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/qf8fs9/as_promised_heres_the_male_pov_for_the_story_i/)

As we arrived back at my two-bedroom apartment, I was feeling the effects of the alcohol we had with dinner. Along with being slightly dizzy and feeling a little goofy, my mind was also gravitating toward a darker, more lustful side I don’t experience often. We had such a wonderful time at dinner that I wasn’t ready for the night to end, and I think Ethan could read it on my face. Once he put the car in park, he shut off the engine and asked me if I wanted him to walk me up to my apartment. Aside from my inability to climb the flight of stairs on my own, I was wanting a little more from him on this beautiful night. He kindly helped me out of the car and put his arm around me to stabilize me as I walked along the sidewalk and up the stairs to the landing in front of my apartment. I wasn’t sure if it was my drunkenness or lust that caused me to drop my keys as I was fumbling to unlock the door, but it was definitely the lust that led me to bend over so far that my bubbly little ass pushed back into his groin. I played it off as a drunken accident and started giggling about it, but for that moment I was pressing into him, I could feel a nice big bulge. As if the thoughts going through my mind weren’t already getting my heart rate up, feeling what he was packing made it that much more intense.

Eventually, I was able to clumsily unlock the door and asked him if he could kindly help me into bed since I was struggling so much to walk. Being the kind gentleman he is, he accepted without hesitation and we both stepped inside my apartment. When he turned around to close the door behind us, I walked right up behind him, reaching my right hand around his side and placing it on that nice bulge that I felt pressed against my ass just moments before. I began rubbing my hand all over it, feeling that huge mass stretching the fabric of his pants, barely contained within. He froze in place, still as a statue. I wasn’t sure if it was because he was taken by surprise or if he was merely enjoying the moment and not wanting to take the chance of ruining it. Either way, I couldn’t stop thinking about all of the things I was wanting to do to him and what he was packing.

After a few moments, he must’ve realized what I wanted. He slowly turned to face me and placed his hands gently on my hips, pulling me closer to him. As I drunkenly stumbled toward him, I maintained my grip between his legs and leaned in for a not-so-graceful kiss. We laughed it off and tried again. This time I used my free hand to slide up underneath his right arm and embraced him up across his back to make sure I was stable enough to hit my mark. Mission accomplished; my lips landed on his gently but passionately. His hands made their way slowly up my sides, groping my perky breasts on their way to my shoulders. With a little flick, he slid the straps to my dress right off my shoulders and I let it fall all the way to the floor to reveal my round B-cup tits with quarter-sized nipples and slender hourglass figure. Down below, I was just wearing the tiniest black thong in my lingerie drawer. I wasn’t leaving much to the imagination that night.

We kissed each other slowly, lips and tongues dancing with one another. I was feeling butterflies starting to flutter in my chest from all of the excitement, then felt the warmth growing between my legs as the excitement moved farther south. I slid both hands around to his chest, unbuttoned his shirt, and pulled it back and down off of his shoulders. About halfway down his arms, I was struck by his muscular physique; the pair of soda-jug arms, the cannonball shoulders, the barrel chest, the 8-pack abs, all chiseled into a masterpiece. At this point, I could feel my mound getting wet from all of the racy thoughts going through my mind. How could I land such an amazing catch? I went back in for a wild and rough kiss before working my way down the side of his chin, neck, and strong chest, sliding his shirt the rest of the way off as I made my way down his body.

The anticipation was building inside of me like a wildfire with my face mere inches from his groin. I looked up and locked eyes with him, letting a lustful smile work its way across my face before giving him a suggestive lip bite so he could see a small piece of the fire building inside me. While my eyes were still locked with his, I slid my hands straight to his groin and felt every inch of it before unbuttoning that annoying fabric that was containing my prize for the night. My eyes shifted to the main event inches in front of me, taking in the view on the way back down. I began unzipping his pants and could see the stretched fabric letting loose with much relief as it was spreading apart. As I pulled them down his strong thighs, I began to see in more detail what he was really packing in his athletic trunks. I was able to see the outline of his thick shaft going straight down the front with a nice big golf-ball-sized testicle on either side where his legs came together. But the shaft didn’t stop there…it continued down the inside front of his trunks and curved underneath his balls and toward his ass. The enormity of that shaft took me by surprise as I had never seen one so massive in person. Sure, I’ve seen them in porn before, but I always figured that was just different Hollywood tricks to make them look bigger. This was no trick though. It was just a beautiful piece of man-meat inches in front of my face, hiding behind a thin piece of fabric.

The only thing on my mind at this point was how badly I wanted that nice big sausage. The fire inside of me was raging beyond control. My tight little pussy was so wet that it soaked my thong and I could swear it was dripping on the floor beneath me. Unable to contain myself, my hands worked their way up to the waistband of his form-fitting underwear seemingly on their own. I couldn’t believe how quickly I was able to get my hands there after how much I’d had to drink. I guess in times like these, they know what needs to be done and they go on autopilot. Before I knew it, I was sliding his underwear down and revealing that nice thick cock that had been on my mind since the second glass of wine at dinner. I took my time to enjoy the moment and take it all in as I slid them down. Inch by inch, his thick manhood came into view. It seemed to never end as the underwear kept going down and the tip hadn’t even shown itself yet. I finally got to his balls and they just plopped out to the sides in his nice loose sack, clearly showing themselves in all their glory. But his cock was still going and going until finally the head popped out and sprang right up to meet my eagerly-waiting face ever so gently. It appeared to be rock-hard with pronounced veins popping out all around it, but the sheer size of it kept it from springing straight to attention. After that nice big mushroom head gently slapped my cheek and slid across my lips, it slowly swayed to a rest, pointing straight back at my face again.

I couldn’t help but sit there staring at it in amazement, thinking about all of the things I was going to do with it. At this point, I know I must’ve been soaking the floor through my underwear. I looked up at him and smiled like a giddy little slut, showing my naughty side that doesn’t get to come out very often. After building up his confidence and teasing him, I moved my attention back to that nice big rod pointing straight at my face. I wrapped my left hand around to his ass to hold him in place for my next move, then slowly moved my right hand toward his base. I could see that mushroom head in front of me begin to swell and twitch as my hand got closer and closer. Once I finally reached it, I tried to wrap my fingers around it but couldn’t quite manage to do it. I could feel the warmth radiating from his base, but it must’ve been close to the size of a soda can because I wasn’t even able to get my fingers close to touching.

The thought of what this thing is going to do to me sent me to places I had never been before. I was getting in touch with a side of me that I didn’t even know existed and before I knew it, I was leaning forward and placing my lips on that swollen head of his that was patiently waiting for me. My lips danced around the tip, pecking and sliding around in small circles as I worked my way down the left side of his shaft. I kept my firm grip on his base to hold it right where I wanted it as I worked it over. Once I got to the base, I lifted that heavy hunk of meat upward for me to work my tongue on those big balls hanging loosely underneath. As I flicked my tongue around, they were lazily swinging back and forth. The sack was so big it never seemed to end, so I enlisted the help of my left hand to massage and roll them around while working my tongue back up to his base. Once there, I let my tongue out and dragged it slowly up the bottom of his shaft all the way to the tip. I began pecking and kissing it again just to tease him. This was when I could feel a rhythmic pulse beginning to grow through my fingers and tongue. Not wanting things to end too quickly, I used my grip to turn it to the side a little bit as I worked my way back down his shaft, this time on the right side.

But the pulsing continued to grow in my hand, so I decided to take a break, back away, and look up at him with the slutty grin again. Except this time, I didn’t lock eyes with him. He had his head thrown back taking it all in and enjoying the pleasure he was receiving. Seeing how much he was enjoying it combined with the anticipation that had been building in me all night, I brought my eyes back down and dove right in on that amazing dick. Spreading my jaw as wide as I could, I buried it as deep in my mouth as I could in one big push. I could hear a massive groan and “FUUUUUCK” from above me as that cock slid through my lips and pushed my tongue down, just a split-second before that fat mushroom head slammed into the back of my throat. If it hadn’t been for all of those glasses of wine at dinner, my gag reflex probably would’ve made it miserable. But in that moment right then, with all of that alcohol and fire inside of me, it didn’t even phase me. I loved the feeling of that big dick filling up my mouth and pressing into the back of my throat.

As he was standing there moaning with his cock in his naughty little slut’s mouth, I grabbed his ass with both hands and pulled him into me even harder, pressing him as far in as I could possibly get. Even so, I was only able to fit about half of that massive rod in my mouth. After holding it in place for a few moments, I tightened my lips around his shaft and slid my head back until he was just barely inside before ramming my head back down on it with full force. I knew slamming that swollen head into the back of my throat was going to hurt in the morning, but my mind was only thinking about one thing at that moment. With his big dick filling up my mouth, I looked up at him and met his eyes. I could see him biting his lip at me, thinking about how I’m his dirty little fuck-toy and how he is going to destroy me later in the night. I tried my hardest to smile for him with his cock inside my mouth, but my lips were so tight they wouldn’t move. Regardless, he got the hint that I was enjoying this. A big grin worked across his face and he placed both of his hands on the back of my head as he began to thrust into my face harder and harder.

He took total control of me with his big strong hands and bobbed my head on his cock as he thrusted his hips into it. I could feel my firm B-cups bouncing back and forth from the rough face-fuck I was getting. As he got faster and rougher, I could feel that shaft swell even more in my mouth and that rhythmic throbbing came back. It was getting stronger and stronger with each thrust until I heard a huge “OH FUUUUCK! YES, JUST LIKE THAT! I’M ABOUT TO BLOW! HERE IT COMES!” and my mouth was quickly flooded with his massive hot load. I could feel each powerful shot as it worked its way up inside his cock through my tight lips, then through the bottom of his shaft along my tongue, and out of that throbbing head into the back of my throat. He just held it in place in the back of my throat as it pumped load after load into me. My mouth was so filled with cum that it was oozing back out around his cock and running down the back of my throat at the same time. Once he was finished using my mouth, he slowly released his grip on my head, pulled his member out, and admired his nice thick load as it ran down my chin and formed a pool on the floor. I opened up my mouth wide to show him how much he pumped into me before pushing the rest of it out and letting it hang from my chin and drip all over my tits. I leaned backward and shimmied side to side so my nice round cum-glazed boobs would bounce around for his viewing pleasure while a big cum-drenched smile worked its way across my face. I had given him only a small taste of the little slut I can be, and we had only just made it inside the front door.

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/qf8c6o/my_first_attempt_at_writing_erotica_and_looking