Hey sexy Redditors! As the title states, I am looking for some feedback on a Choose Your own Erotica story I am working on. I am hoping to monetize it at some point down the road if responses are good, but primarily I am just writing it for my own enjoyment right now.
As for what you can expect from the story, it is written from a woman’s PoV, and while I think it would certainly be a hot read for men, it has been designed with the idea of having a female reader, though I would certainly welcome all genders!
As for content, it is very much pure, unadulterated smut. This is NOT a romance novel. There is a story, and character development, but it is dispersed between (hopefully) steamy sex scenes. As for the scenes themselves, there are around 11 unique scenes, along with some variations among them. The entire story is just under 60,000 words currently, with over 130 different passages, and this spans the course of only 2 days in the life of the character. As an avid fan of boardgames and RPGs, I have tried to make a story where your choices actually matter, as opposed to just different ways to arrive at the same outcome.
I have tried to include a variety of fetishes, though at this point in the story they are somewhat tame, at least when compared to what else is out there. All scenes are heterosexual though, so if that doesn’t interest you, you may want to look elsewhere.
If you would like to get an idea of what you might expect from a writing and style perspective, I have posted a few other stories to this subreddit which you are welcome to read.
If you are interested in checking it out, please comment or send me a DM and I will send you a private link, along with a short survey to complete after you’ve finished.
Source: reddit.com/r/sexystories/comments/oytomc/looking_for_playtestersfeedback_for_a_choose_your
I’m intrigued.
Post it to chyoa.com