His thrusts have gone rougher and deeper, moans just as deep as his thrusts. The sound of our sweaty skin slapping against each other was overpowered by his roaring groans that filled the room. “You think he can fuck you as good as I can?” He asks and grips on my waist, looking down at my breasts that bounce along every deep thrusting of his. The roughness he showed only made me even weaker to the knees, my head throwing back not to look at his lustful eyes. His fingers grip on my chin, forcing me to look down at him.
“Whenever I fuck you like a desperate little slut… you look at me.” He commands, his words flowing out of his gritted teeth. “You fucking look at me until you realize there’s no one else who can fuck you like this… understood?” He rasps and I nod a few times. My body felt nothing but pleasure… even if he was this rough. He knew what he wanted and he knew how to claim what belonged to him and only him.
Without a doubt, I wasn’t complaining. Not even a single bit. The way his large hands would grip onto my waist, pinning me down or his fingers around both of my wrists pinning my hands over my head all while he latches onto my nipple or kissing sloppily on my neck. He’d leave a kiss mark or two on there as well, one directly on my neck for everyone to see. He would leave one in between my breasts, sucking on it hard enough to leave a brownish red mark. He would sometimes leave handprints on my ass, one that would sting and make my whole body quiver.
But now… he had his strong hands gripping on my waist and pinning me down on the bed as he continued to slide his thick and throbbing cock inside my tightening walls. It took everything in me not to give into an orgasm right away… but the way he was just thrusting into me, the way his eyes roamed around my body but meeting my gaze every now and then… it was just screaming pure lust and nothing but primal sex.
“It feels good, doesn’t it?” He asks, leaning forward a little. His other hand trailing up to my sternum and to my collarbone before feeling his fingers wrapped around my throat, gripping a bit tight. I gasped for air as he flashes me a sinister smirk. “You only belong to me… no one will ever get to feel this pretty little pussy of yours.” He says, spitting on my chest, a proud smirk on his lips. “These full and pretty tits… this sweet and tight little pussy… all of you, is all fucking mine.” His free hand travels up to my perky breasts, smothering his spit all over the valley of my breasts and tweaking my nipples a bit harsh. My skin glistened with his spit. A sight that made him moan quite wildly.
His words made me moan endlessly. He knew how to turn me on with his words, he knew how to work with details and if you include his actions with that? Your knees would be buckling, toes would curl and moans would be heard.
I felt his cock twitch and pulse inside me, letting out a breathy groan as his head threw back and then looking down at me again as I whimpered, feeling myself on the verge of reaching my high. “Almost there, baby?” He asks, his voice raspy and upon uttering that question. I nodded slightly, whimpering even more as I saw him breathing heavily.
His thrusts are still deep and rough but a bit faster, picking up a pace. “See?” He groans, “See how fucking good I make you feel?” He smirks and cups my cheek, before his fingers cup my chin. His thumb softly caressing there before he wraps his fingers around my neck.
“I got your body trembling like it should because you’re a needy little whore.” He whispers, my breath hitching over his use of words. Definitely in a good way. A way I won’t be able to get enough of and would always want… no, I’d always need more. “You needy fucking whore…such a good fucking cockslut.”
“Open your fucking mouth.” He commands, gripping on my chin tightly as if he forced my mouth open. I obliged, opening my mouth a bit wide as I looked up at him. “Stick your tongue out, you slut.” He adds and I do so, my tongue sticking out and he spits on my tongue, feeling some of his warm saliva dripping down to my chin. He reaches over and scoops it all up on his thumb, pushing all of it back into my mouth. I rolled my eyes slightly as he makes me suck on his thumb.
But after that… he leans down, leaving more kiss marks along my collarbone as I feel his breathing getting heavier by the second. My hand on the back of his neck as I moaned against his ear. “I fuck this pretty little pussy good, don’t I, kitten?” He’d whisper back into my ear, nodding in response as my nails dug into his sweaty skin. His lips placed more kisses that went up from my collarbone and behind my ear.
He leans back again, looking down at me as he bites onto his lip. His hair all over the place as he rests his hands flat on either side of me, holding himself up. “Fuck… look at how good you’re taking my big cock.” He looks down at where we were connected, a loud curse leaving his mouth. I looked down as well and I felt my clit pulse a little. His eyes look at me again and say, “I felt you clench there… you like seeing my hard cock slamming onto your cunt, huh?” He asks and I nod, my hands gripping onto his arms.
“Can… can I cum, please?” I ask, the tone of my voice breathy. Which was followed by my countless trails of please. I hear his chuckle that was in a mocking tone. “Now, you’re going to beg me to let you cum?” He asks, biting on his lip as he starts to slow down his thrusts.
“You think you’re a worthy little slut to be given permission to cum? Think about it.” He breathed through gritted teeth, his fingers gripping a bit harshly on my jaw.
“I actually love it when you beg for me to let you cum all over my thick cock… because it lets me fucking know how good my cock makes you feel, right?” His lips press a rough kiss on my lips, sucking on my bottom lip too. “It lets me know that my big cock is fucking you just good to the point were I make you cum.”
My body quivered and my hips bucked into his, feeling his thick cock sliding in and out of my tight walls accompanied with sloppy sounds from my dripping arousal in between my tight walls. “But I really want to cum…” I begged, desperation evidently heard from my moans and begging. “Your… your big and thick cock… is making me feel so good.” I stuttered, at a loss for words as he continued with his long and deep thrusts.
His eyes lit up, letting out a soft growl. “Such a slut.” He mumbles under his breath, his pace quickening. I was eccentric, knowing he had such a stamina that stood out among every other guy I had sex with. His lower abdomen tightened, his neck veins popping up as he groans.
“I… I could feel you clenching around me… if you keep doing that, I’ll just cum inside you.” His voice became deeper and raspy. His grip on my waist became firm too. “It’s because you make me feel so good… so, so good that I want to cum all over your cock.” I said through gritted teeth as I gripped on the sheets. His smirk was so sinister, his hand pinning my waist down onto the bed. “Yeah? Really?” He asked, leaning down as he pressed a rough kiss on my neck. His lips trailing down to press kisses on the valley in between my breasts.
I could feel his cock twitching even more, feeling his hot breath fanning against my collarbone. Feeling him nibble on it, nipping on the soft skin. I started clenching myself around him and heard his deep groans. “Fuck that… come on, cum all over my cock, sweetheart.” He whispers directly into my ear, almost growling. “You’re gonna cum before I do so… come on, baby… do it.” He adds and it was just encouraging me more to finally give in to the pleasure that was rushing through my veins.
I panted, rolling my eyes to the back of my head. Feeling my release building up, my hips pressing on the bed. “I’m… I’m gonna… gonna cum.” I moaned wildly, throwing my head. “Let go, baby… for me.” He whispers into my ear once more, nibbling on my earlobe. I threw my head back one last time before releasing myself all over his cock, feeling his cock twitch as I wrapped tightly around him. He smirks and I felt his thrusts become sloppier.
“Good girl… I’m almost there… almost fucking…” He trails off, nuzzling his head on my neck. His cock explodes and his cum oozes deep into me, his moans and groans boomed all over the room.
I felt nothing but bliss as our bodies became one, feeling his heart beating rapidly. Our chests heaved, trying to catch our lost breaths. He brings his head up after nuzzling it in between my breasts. “You okay?” He asks, biting his lip. I nodded in response, looking up into the ceiling. “Was I… too rough earlier?” He whispers and I shook my head, “No… just the right amount of roughness.” I chuckled and he leans forward, pressing a soft kiss on my lips. “I wouldn’t want someone else to go rough on me… so…. only you, okay?” I say teasingly and he rolls his eyes, both of us cuddling and making out, our sticky and sweaty bodies pressed up against each other.
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With this one, I focused more on details and it’s also a bit rougher than my usual ones. Let me know how you like it!
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/ndnb0d/f4m_all_yours_rough_sexspitplaychokingcreampie
Pretty good but I’m new to reading erotica, I have a friend who writes them so I can ask her to review it as well probably.
I write erotica fairly often (I post mostly on fetlife). This is honesty really good, some of the words made the visuals difficult in the beginning, but that might just be the POV isn’t what *im* used to reading. But honestly it’s really really good, just needs a little refining. By the 4th paragraph it’s really pulling you in so you’re really onto it here. The dialog is absolutely perfect, for sure. ?
so fucking hot! not gonna lie, made me wet…can’t wait for more!
Well that’s one of the hottest pieces of short domination erotica I’ve ever read. Excellent job. Even if I am a little confused by your usage of F4M when you don’t seem to be looking for a guy.