I sit on the bed, as I’ve been instructed to. Awaiting.
Eyes on the ceiling. Your head pokes around the corner. “Ready?” With a cheerful smile.
“Yes, been waiting for you.”
One leg peeks out… and I’m instantly hit with the adrenaline of whats to come.
Making your appearance in a black sheer piece, I’m in awe. Standing to meet you as you walk to me.
“Do you like it?” Spinning, showing me the lingerie.
“You’re stunning” my eyes wander all over, scattered. I don’t know where to begin. You push me back on the bed, sitting… as you straddle me. I gravitate to your collarbones. “God, I want to mark you so bad.”
“Mhmmm no no. Not there. Anywhere else away from other eyes is ok.”
Lips grazing amongst your skin. The structure of your bones. Gently, lightly kissing and sucking. Your fingers run through the side of my head. Grasping my hair.
I flip you on to your back. Crawling over you, positioning myself above you, mouthes meeting. Biting your lower lip, pulling. You reciprocate. Heavy kissing, tongues playing, meeting. I venture down to your neck line, ever so gentle to leave no trace.
I maneuver your straps passed your shoulders and down. Kissing the middle of your chest, sternum. Cupping your bosom in to my mouth. “Fuck, your tits are so gorgeous”
Your head and back arch in unison.
Licking, sucking, biting your nipples. They erect at my touch. Pausing to admire them in all their glory. I bury myself between them. Slowly pulling your piece down the length of your curves. You shimmy in assisting me. Tossing it aside, I go back to you. Kissing your breasts, stomach, ribs, I want every inch of you. I get off and make my way to night stand. Giggling ..”what are you doing?”
“Here put this on.” Tossing you a blind fold.
“I want to heighten your sense of touch/feel”
“Oh la la la”. You oblige and slip it on.
Settling in as you lay down.
“I’ll be right back”
“Really?!”
Coming back quickly, you feel the side of the bed carry my weight.
Suddenly a sharp sense of cold stings your skin and instantly drips down your side, leaving a trail of lingering effect. “Mhmmm Ice, huh?”
“Siiii”
With my warm touch, the ice doesn’t have much left. Droplets splash on your skin… neck line, inner thighs, hip bones. You react with every drop. Sucking on the ice cube, freezing my lips. Begin to kiss your belly, moving slowly down to your waist band. Snapping at it, playing with it. Fingers gliding in between the fabric and skin. Kisses below your belly button, venturing further and further down. Finally at my favorite place. Face to face with you. Kissing you through the fabric. Feeding off your body’s reactions. My lips meet the length of your legs, holding them up in the air. Your chest heaves with anticipation. Delicate touch’s against your ankles, lower leg, inside of knees, “I want you so bad, Naz ”. Lowering your legs, I move to your inner thighs, sucking and biting. Finally arriving to you. I breathe you in deeply. “Fuck, you smell so good”
I’m shaking with excitement. Couple more times of inhaling you. Your scent intoxicates me. Filling my senses. Kissing your lips upon the fabric. Rolling them over your hips, down you legs. Shaking as I near you. Placing soft kisses against you. I peer up as you writhe from the slightest of touches, your bushy, love seeing you grow it out. I bury myself between your legs, inhaling your sweet scent, tasting you. Spreading you with my nose. Your folds of skin give way to my touch. My mouth begins to explore you, learning your body. Pulling and nibbling on your lips. Fingers run, grasp my hair. Black overgrown hair intertwines between your fingers. My tongue wanders to your outer lips, back to inner. Changing my tempo. Your clit makes her appearance, peeking from your folds. Finding her with ease, my tongue dances and twirls around her. Your grip tightens, thighs close in, as your react with every motion. I crave you so bad. I want to indulge myself in you. Tongue entering you, you taste so fucking good. I want to wear you through the day. Paint my lips with your nectar. Your flavor to dance on my taste buds. Picking up the tempo, tongue fucking you. Broad tongue strokes against your vulva. You moan my name, with your sight taken.. every sense is at full alert.
Slowing and picking up speed against your clit. Your grip me hard, grinding your hips against my face. Smothering me. I want every drop of you. Your body begins to writhe and tense as you are nearing. The smell of sex is heavy and pungent. The aroma of salty and sweet fill me. My mouth continues to work on you. Your back arches. “Fuck” you shake as you begin your climax. Waves of pleasure overtake you, small and strong come and go. I keep myself there, slowing my pace. Softer and softer..Slowly. Bringing you back down from your high. Soft kisses around your pussy. Your body convulses and reacts quickly. Breathing for oxygen. Blowing gently.. soft, cool air.
I come back up to you. You already have the blindfold off. Sweat beads at your brow. “Omg, omg.. wow.”
Kissing you, allowing you to taste yourself.
Bringing you water, aftercare is next
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/m4fcam/first_time_posting_erotica_online
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