My sensual power – looking for feedback

Years ago I wrote a story about a college student who discovered a pretty freaking cool ability.

I was hoping to create more than just quick story to wank to. I wanted to create interesting characters.

Re-reading after a several years I see how the timeline could be a bit confusing.

I would be interested in feedback and if you enjoy the story, thoughts on where you think the storing should go next. I did write a couple next scenarios but didn’t care for them.

[My Sensual Power](https://www.literotica.com/s/my-sensual-power)

Source: reddit.com/r/eroticstories/comments/lk3k9b/my_sensual_power_looking_for_feedback