My first attempt at some Erotica, I’d love to hear what you guys think!

You’re laying there, waiting, I come in and smile at you, you smile at me, I come to the bed and kiss you, we kiss and you wrap your legs around me and pull me on top of you, while we kiss I unbutton my jeans and you take off your shorts, I start kissing down your neck and lift up your shirt. I grab your breasts in my hands and slowly run my tongue around your nipples. They get hard and I begin to suck each one, gently, whilst you run your fingers through my hair, I run my tongue all the way down your chest, down your belly and stop at your panties, I kiss your inner thighs before biting the elastic of your panties and pull them down with my teeth…I just stop and look at you and smile and you stare at me. I run my tongue straight down and onto your clit then down into your hole. I finally get to taste you. I gently rub my finger over your clit while I taste your sweet ? I can feel you getting wetter and wetter…at this point my ? is so hard. I lift your legs over my shoulders and slowly pull out my throbbing ?. Again, you stare at me as your gently touch yourself…we are both shaking with anticipation…as I insert my ? inside you, you gasp…and I run my tongue slowly along the sole of your foot and fuck you passionately, we have both longed for this moment……Then we lock eyes again, and I throw your ankles off my shoulders and grab you by the throat “is this what you want you whore” and I begin so squeeze the sides of your throat as I start to fuck you aggressively. All you can do is lay there…as you struggle for air I allow you to breathe and instead pin your wrists to the bed….then I begin to crave the taste of your ?again…I pull out and grab your ankles and push them to the air, my tongue dives into your ? and then down into your ass and it continues to go up and down, all while I’m playing with your clit….

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/kdk77e/my_first_attempt_at_some_erotica_id_love_to_hear