Down the Rabbit Hole (Excerpt)

About the story: This is an excerpt from a story I have been writing. Just wanted to see if anyone liked where it is headed. Bobbie, the main character, has been a tomboy mist of her life. The guys she grew up with have always just thought of her as one of the guys, or so she thought. She finds out from Sara that there is a den of debauchery in town that hosts sex parties and she gets an invitation from her swim team co-coach Ms. Purcival. The following excerpt is after the initiation and Bobbie is finally seeing herself as a sexual being with no limits.

THE PARTY

We arrive a few minutes early, and rush inside to get ready. A couple other girls are already inside and milling about. One of the girls turns and I recognize her, Sarah from the swim team. She glances my way, starts to smile, and instead wiggles her fingers at me, and I return the gesture. Tom steps forward and clears his throat, “Ladies, our guests will be arriving shortly. They all know the guidelines and will adhere with strict repercussions. Any violation, find me immediately and I will deal with it. You have each named yourselves, please only refer to each other by this name. Please disrobe and I will help you to your chosen areas.” Kitty steps forward, turns to face us, removes her top, and we all follow suit and are quickly stark naked. “I’m Kitty, this is Jewel *(Sarah, short green hair, large breasts, a tight tummy, and a bubble butt)*, Jezebel *(a dark haired beauty with nice breasts and large hips)*, Harley *(a tall girl with bright pink hair and several tattoos on her slender body)*, Betty *( a brunette with heavy breasts and what looks like a baby bump)*, Cristal *(older woman, mid to late 40’s, very fit)*, Ebony *(a tall woman with dark hair and skin, large breasts and a big ass)*, Sam *(bright blue pixie cut, piercings all over, small breasts and long lean legs)*, Savannah *(a short, cute, blonde with thick thighs and a really nice ass)*, and Redd *(me)*. Most of you are new, so if you have any questions come to me or Tom. Ok, place your clothes on the counter by Tom, he has lockers to keep your valuables and clothing for the duration.” We all grab our clothes and do as told. I go to Tom, “I’m not sure what I want to do.” He smiles at me, “Come with me.” He takes me by the hand and leads me back to the room with the mats. “Here is where I would want you.” I look up into his eyes, “Are you participating tonight?” “I will be around, keeping an eye on everything, but yes, I will be participating.” I step closer to him and run my hand up his chest, “Play with me sometime tonight.” Stretching up on my tiptoes, I give him a quick kiss. “Ms. Redd, your wish is my command.”

As the party starts, we are paraded in front of the 40 or so guests that have already arrived. Tom introduces us and goes over the rules with the guests. Kitty has many of the men’s attention and the rest of us begin to mill around edging to the rooms we would like to be in. Jewel and I head to the room with the mats. “I never would have thought you would be into this kind of thing, but then again you do have all those guys wrapped around your finger.” I stop dead, “What are you talking about?” Jewel faces me, steps close and runs her fingers up my stomach, tracing my abs. “Those boys you hang with, they are always eyeing each other like you’re some morsel they are going to fight over.” Her hand circles my breasts, “You really haven’t noticed?” I shake my head, and my body responds to her light touch. My nipples harden and she brings me into a tight embrace and whispers, “Grab my ass and kiss me, those guys are very interested in what we are doing.” I look over my shoulder and 4 men are staring at us with hungry eyes. With one hand I turn Jewel’s face to mine and passionately kiss her, my other hand smacks her ass, I grab her cheeks, and spread her open for them to see. Then, I drop to my knees and kiss her mound, hands still holding her cheeks apart, I open her pussy lips with my tongue. Jewel moans, and suddenly there are hands touching us all over. Eight men surround us, jerking their hardening cocks vigorously, Jewel rocks her hips and I suck on her clit. I feel hands on my ass spreading me, then a tongue circling my asshole. I gasp as the tongue enters me. Jewel takes a cock in each hand, stroking them on each side of my face.

I return to eating her pussy, and a hand opens her lips from behind. Fingers explore her pussy as I tongue her clit, I can hear the man behind her begin tonguing her ass as well. She moans with delight and I look up to see a man at each breast suckling, their cocks being worked furiously by Jewel. She steps back away from me, carried away by the horny men.

Tom steps in front of me, his massive cock studded with 2 piercings and rock hard. I grin widely at him and immediately take him into my mouth, his cock jumping. The man at my rear satisfied with his meal, now fingers my pussy and ass simultaneously. I moan around the cock in my mouth, and Tom holds my head and forces himself deeper into my throat. My eyes water from the strain, but I reach up and caress his balls to show my pleasure. He pulls back and slaps my face with his cock a few times, I stick out my tongue and lick his shaft, my drool dripping from his member. I gyrate my hips against the man fingering me, and I feel lube added to my asshole and prepare myself mentally to be penetrated. The man behind me lifts my hips and he gets me to stand, my torso bent at the waist so I can continue sucking Tom.

My pussy floods as the man’s cock prodded at my asshole. He slowly enters me, my anus stretching to accommodate him, I push back against him as he makes his way deeper. My face screws up with the slight pain of it, but a few seconds pass and it fades away. Tom jerks himself, his head just inside my mouth, and I appreciate his patience. I begin to tongue his piercings, teasing the stud dividing the large head. His cock quivers with the stimulation. The man behind me grunts, and pushes deep inside me. I grind my hips against him, and he begins to fuck me faster. With each thrust my breasts bounce and Tom’s cock gets pushed further down my throat. I reach back and spread my cheeks further apart. The man in my ass grabs my hips and thrusts in quick succession, he grunts and pulls from me, I quickly turn and kneel. I open my mouth, and present my tongue, licking the head of his throbbing cock. He twitches and cums in my mouth and down my chest. I turn to Tom, chest thrust forward and dripping with cum, I smile up at him, “Will you fuck me now?” He gives me a hungry smile and lays down on the mat in front of me, I crawl toward him and climb over him, straddling his legs. I lift my hips up and impale my slick pussy down on his cock. I moan loudly as he fills me and before I can begin to ride him, a cock is in my face and another behind me. Tom thrusts upward and I squeal with pleasure, and try to position myself to take both of the other men. Tom grabs my hips and I arch my back to give them access, the man behind me kneels and slowly enters me. I have never been filled like this before and I feel like I’m breaking in half. Tom pulls back and lets the man enter me fully, and as he pulls back Tom thrusts back inside, their rhythm working to keep me constantly filled. I lift my face to the man in front of me and my eyes go wide, Mr. Lee, my swim coach, thrusts his cock forward as I open my mouth to take him in. His cock still slick from fucking Jewel, I take him deep into my mouth tasting her pussy and cum. Mr. Lee tilts my head back and looks me in the eyes, he caresses my cheek and holds his cock, balls deep in my mouth. I continue to look up at him until my eyes tear up, my pussy throbs close to orgasm, and my ass burns with pleasure. Mr. Lee finally gives me reprieve and begins to fuck my face. I feel Tom cup my breast and tease my nipples, pulling and pinching. My body quivers from the beginnings of a massive orgasm, pussy tightening around Tom’s cock as he and the man in my ass pound away at me. The man in my ass pulls free and is immediately replaced by my coach. The man from my ass, gripping his cock tight, comes around in front of me and I once again assume the position. Cum pours from his cock, filling my open mouth, I begin to swallow and he forces his cock down my throat and continues to cum. I cough and choke on the pulsating cock as he pulls free. Cum runs down my chin and I reach up and spread it on my chest and face. Mr. Lee grabs my hips and hungrily pounds at my ass and paws at my breasts. As another cock is presented in front of me, Mr. Lee grabs a fistful of my hair and forces my head down on the new cock in my mouth. The large cock enters my throat and I have to open my jaws wide to take him in. My head is pulled back and slammed down again, back and forth. The man in my mouth begins to moan. Mr. Lee continues to use me as a toy, and the man cums deep in my throat. Tom, below me, spreads my pussy lips, pinching at my labia, and flicking my clit. I buck at the hard cocks entering me, Mr. Lee grunts and pulls free, he jerks hard at his throbbing cock cumming on my back and ass. Free to move Tom grabs my hips and brings me down hard on his cock. I lean back and ride him, grinding my pussy against him. One hand caresses my stomach the other at my breast, I feel his cock pulsating inside me. I quickly move down and swallow his cock, my hand massaging his balls, the other jerking him. Lost in extracting his cum, another person is behind me, caressing my hips. I arch my back, sticking my ass in the air and a hand moves to stroke my backside. A slap on my cheek makes me squeal, another cock spreads my labia and slides inside me. Tom bucks at my mouth and cums as I pull on his balls. His hot cum pours on my face and in my mouth, and I lap at his meaty cock. The man behind me fucks away at my pussy, his hand caressing my breasts. I hear more guests arriving and I can’t wait to be used more.

The man behind me exits my pussy and enters my ass, easily sliding in between the lube and cum, “Jewel, come here, this one can clean you up.” Jewel crawls over to us, cum dripping down her body. She positions herself in front of me, on her knees face to the ground. I pull her legs toward me and plant my face in her ass. I lap up the cum covering her gaping asshole and dripping into her open pussy. “That’s a good girl, eat up all that cum.” Jewel spreads her cheeks allowing me deeper access, and moans as I play with her swollen clit. The man at my ass pulls free and walks around us, jerking furiously at his cock. He kneels down and turns my face toward him, and cums on Jewel’s ass as I eat her. I slurp his cum into my mouth and turn Jewel to face me, I kiss her, sharing his load with Jewel, it overflows between us and runs down her lovely breasts. I follow it down sucking her nipples on the way, lifting her heavy breasts with my hands and squeezing. Jewel giggles and I look up to see 3 more men jerking their cocks around us. Jewel embraces me, grabbing my ass, and pulling me close to her. She moves her lips close to mine, almost kissing me, and we stick out our tongues. Each man steps forward to cum in our waiting mouths, taking a turn fucking our mouths as we clean their cocks before walking away.

“You two seem to be enjoying yourselves,” Kitty stands above us, wet and fresh from the showers. “Why don’t you freshen up, rest for a few minutes, and get ready for the next round?” Jewel pulls back from me, strings of cum and saliva between us, and we laugh. “Ok, that sounds good to me,” I stand and offer a hand to Jewel. I follow her to the showers and look back to see Kitty already on her knees again, surrounded by 10 men.

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