My First Attempt — Feedback Welcome!

We made eye contact just the once, after that it wasn’t necessary. It’s not that I’m shy about being watched, it’s that this time was different. This time I wanted to be ignored.

He’s already naked on the couch. His legs are spread in the way only a man who’s used to taking up space in public can be. I braid my hair tightly, keeping it pulled back so no strands fall loose. I move the coffee table back far enough that I can fit between the couch and the table on my knees.

Unceremoniously, I put my mouth around his dick and start sucking. I keep my hands by my side, on the floor by my knees. He moves forward a bit to pick his phone up off the charger and his dick goes further down my throat, but we settle back into the rhythm easily. My eyes are fixed on his pubic bone, watching the same spot zoom in and out as my mouth keeps sucking. He chuckles at something funny he sees on his phone and his penis vibrates briefly on my tongue. I pause to swallow the spit that’s accumulated. He’s growing harder in my mouth but the rest of his body remains relaxed, his legs still spread and his torso slouched on the sofa. He turns on the tv to the nightly news and picks up his phone again.

He says “Hey Siri, can you look up the menu to China Wok?” And pauses to look through the results. The news anchor in the background rattles about the homicide rate in the city reaching a new record. My eyes are still fixed on that spot and my mouth is still sucking.

He says into the phone “Hi, I’d like to place a delivery order. One sesame chicken combo please. Yes, same address as last time.”

He holds the phone with his right hand and pulls my braid with the left. My mouth pulls back from his dick leaving it soaked in my spit. He still has me by the hair.

“Yeah, you can use the same card as last time too.” He switches his phone to his left hand, and with his right massages his penis with the spit I left dripping.

I feel his cum before I see it, it’s in my mouth and on my lips. Across my cheeks and running down my chin. I keep my mouth open to taste what I can, licking around my lips for what’s there. More comes out and I watch for it eagerly. My hands still by my knees and my eyes still on his dick, but between my legs are now wet. My pussy is dripping and my thighs are shaking. Still more comes.

He hangs up the phone after saying “Yeah that’s fine, just call when you’re here and I’ll meet you outside” and turns the tv up a little louder.

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/jr75qq/my_first_attempt_feedback_welcome

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