Best Friends

Thank you for reading. I have been slowly writing up episodes in my life tha I enjoyed. This is one.

It was one of those fortuitous moments in life. There had been a lot of impassioned thrashing in the car, but there wasn’t enough space for all of them to get what they needed, too many arms, legs, and lips trying to vie for better positions. The night was hot in San Diego, too sticky to have the car be still, the beach too sandy for their activities, driving around was the only way to manage the heat.   The glowing lights of the cheap chain hotel beckoned at the next exit.   They hurriedly scraped enough cash together in that way of young underemployed people and got a single room with double beds for the night.  They were a random collection, Mia, her best friend Liza, Liza’s current flame, What’s his Name? (it was ok not to remember he wouldn’t be around next week) and Jeff, the driver.  Jeff was one of a three brother/cousin combo Mia had been ambiguously dating. Mia and Liza were a mismatched pair, where Liza was long and lithe, Mia was short and curvy.  Liza had all the bravado of an experienced woman, Mia was several years younger and still new in her experiences. 

Being oldest Jeff was sent in to book the room.  When he came back with a keycard, they  left the car and hurried through the oppressive night air into the cool of the lobby.  As they stumbled down the hall giggling and laughing, the desk clerk  barely raised an eyebrow at their lack of luggage.  Falling into the room while groping each other, they paused only to turn on the lights.  

Jeff had Mia’s shirt off before they even pulled the covers back on the bed closest to the door, his face fully pressed into her large breasts inhaling her scent, his mouth pressing deeply into her skin.  Liza’s beau hurriedly pulled her pants off and placed her on the bed,  his kisses already beginning to trail all over her body.  Jeff’s hands were insistent, she had spent the last hour of the car ride teasing him all over with her mouth.  Running her soft lips up and down his arms, every once in a while she would  take one of his fingers and suck it in between her lips all the way to his palm, the back of his finger would touch her throat, her tongue wrapped tightly around it.  With her other hand she had been fondling the growing bulge in his pants.  She loved the way it was throbbing in her hand, loved the way she could control his pleasure and he could do nothing while driving.  He had pulled one of her breasts out, aggressively pinching her pert nipple between his fingers, his shaft growing harder when a passing car stared at her bare chest.  Liza and her date had not been able to accomplish much more in the back seat,  the small space restraining them.  The heat that had filled the car now filled the small room of the hotel as the remaining clothes were discarded on the floor. 

Jeff didn’t take too long to move to  tracing his tongue around her nipple and taking it deep into his mouth. He bit it lightly, causing her back to arch, driving her breast further toward him. Her hands were furiously stroking his cock, bringing it back to the fully aroused state she had achieved in the car.  From the corner of her eye, Mia could see Liza fully naked, her beautiful body on the bed, her beau’s face buried between her legs.   It was mesmerizing  to watch Liza as she writhed and moaned.  Jeff seemed to be spurred on by the company, his cock now throbbing in her hand. 

 He pushed himself into Mia with one long stroke.  Mia raised her hips to meet him, her moan escaping without her consent.  His thrusts were long and deep in her tight recesses.  She hadn’t ever known him to be so forceful, but she loved it.  She pulled him deeper leaving long lines of red on his back with her nails.  He moved his mouth back to her breasts, taking one of her nipples in his teeth, biting it sharply. She gave a little cry of pain that swiftly turned over to extreme pleasure.  She swiftly learned she could control the depth of the pain with the pressure of her fingers in his back. She drove her nails deep into his skin as he thrust over and over into her. He bit down harder, it was throbbing but she was loving every beat.  

Liza and beau had traded places, though she was still expertly holding him at bay.  Mia could see his throbbing shaft practically begging for entrance into Liza’s body as she teased and denied him at every turn.  She was kneeling on the bed, her breasts swaying, her nipples brushing his thighs,  just barely licking the head of his cock, deliciously taunting him.  His hands were politely resting on his thighs, but Mia could see the white of his fingers as he restrained himself from shoving Liza’s head down. Ultimately Liza crawled all the way up his legs and positioned herself over his throbbing cock. 

Mia was momentarily distracted as she watched Liza’s body swallow his shaft in long, languid strokes.  Taking first just the tip and then a little more each time.  She eventually was riding him with her hands on his chest,  consuming the whole length of him while lifting her hips in long strokes. Jeff forced Mia’s face back to him with a sharp pull of her chin and smiled.  He began driving deeper and deeper into her, bottoming out.  Her cries became louder, more insistent and pleading. He kept going as her legs reached up to grab around his hips to pull him in even more.  Liza wasn’t ever one to be left behind, she slammed her body down harder, with her head tossed back to the ceiling she started screaming in long hoarse cries.  The hands of her beau gripped her hips pulling his cock deeper into her body, her breasts bouncing in time above him.  It was more than all four of them could manage after the  long foreplay session on the highways.  They came together their cries mingling in the air of the room.  

There was a brief moment of silence and panting breaths before Liza began trailing her mouth down her prone beau’s body.  She slipped down to lick their mingled juices from him. This was something Mia had never done, but she felt her dormant competitive side rising. She shifted Jeff off of her, then to his back so she could wrap her lips around him. She started taking just the head in, tentatively. Jeff impatiently sat up against the pillows and wrapped his hands in her hair to control her mouth. As he moved it up and down she worked hard to keep her mouth in the perfect shape. Above her she could hear his moans, Suck it Mia. Be a good cocksucker. 

 Between all of his pleas Mia was completely aware of the other bed and its inhabitants, they seemed to be trying to be the loudest. This only caused Mia to redouble  and improve her efforts. She wrapped her mouth more tightly around his shaft and used her tongue to stroke the large vein on the underside. She increased the pressure and speed until Jeff finished in a hot spurt of cum, he pulled her face back just far enough to watch it shoot into her willing mouth, long ropes graced her tongue.  Mia couldn’t see it, but the sounds from the other bed let her know Liza’s mouth was having similar effects.  There were a few coarse whispers of Fuck, please. Your mouth is so good. Then finally a long extended sound of pleasure as Liza and her date moaned together.  Then once again stillness, marred only by the sound of quieting breaths, perhaps a gentle murmur. Mia placed one finger against her cheek where some of the cum had landed, looked Jeff in the eyes and sucked it down her throat.  He smiled.

 Jeff ran his hand up Mia’s thigh, his fingers reaching towards the wet mess he had just created.  He ran his thumb around her clit and slid inside her eased by his cum.  He slowly began fucking her with his fingers.   The sensation making her back arch, she began pressing her hips down on his hand, thrusting in tandem with his movements. As she felt the heat rise in her, she slowly became aware of Liza’s voice beside her.  She turned her head to watch Liza.  Her head was curved back, her shoulders high with her mouth wide open.  Mia and Liza locked eyes and their moaning began in harmony.  As they moved toward their respective orgasms they gazed at each other’s faces.  It was the most delicious moment Mia had ever experienced in bed.  They had shared so many things over the years and this moment of having this mutual climax was just so indescribable.  Their screams increased and bounced off the walls, heedless to any neighbors.  Liza came first, her screams dying as Mia’s grew. Mia felt her body tensing, pulling, needing for Jeff’s hands to drive harder, deeper faster.  It was the most intense feeling she had felt in her young life, her fingers in his shoulders leaving more red marks on his skin.  As she crested the wave, she let her voice open in a way she had never allowed.  It was magical. As she felt her body pulse and spasm on Jeff’s hand she looked over to see Liza smiling at her.  

After that night when Liza and Mia would talk about it, they didn’t recall that they slept at all. There must have been brief lulls, but the next few hours were a blur as they took turns listening to each other orgasm.  At times they would compete in the volume of their cries, sometimes it was quiet and soft, at times it was one couple that moaned and thrashed while the other watched and listened. In the early morning light they found themselves tangled in the sheets, chatting and laughing, cuddling against their respective partners.  As Jeff shifted in bed she could see where her nails had pulled so hard against his skin it left long red lines that he would see for at least a week.  She kissed them gently, she knew he loved these marks.  

As the morning dawned, they gathered  their clothes from the floor, dressed and returned to the car through the quiet cool parking lot.   Mia and Liza shared a knowing smile as they drove back down the freeways from the night before.  Best friends forever. 

  

 

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/itpf1w/best_friends