Good day. I wrote a short fantasy story with elements of violence. The main character is a young man.
I am not a native speaker of English, so I would like to receive criticism or learn about mistakes in English. Thank you!
Illustration for the story: https://imgur.com/8ZWWCO0
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One way to arrest a criminal is to put him under you and stand until other guards arrive and take him to the dungeon.
The young and inexperienced guard did not know what to do when the criminal began to touch his legs. The guard demanded to stop, but the criminal did not listen to him and continued to tenderly cosset the guard’s legs. It would have been foolish to succumb to temptation, but the guard could not refuse. He stood and felt these rough man’s hands touch his hips, slowly approaching his panties.
The guard was pleased to feel the caress of his feet, but he wanted more.
Therefore, he knelt down and began to slowly spread his legs in order to be closer and closer to the criminal. When the guard’s underpants touched the criminal’s face, the guard realized that the intruder was a ghoul, but it was too late. The ghoul grabbed the guard’s thighs tightly and began to bite into his crotch. The guard began to try to get out of the trap, but to no avail, the ghoul held his legs very tightly. He was very hungry and he wanted delicious blood. And when the guard’s panties from the bites began to get wet with blood, the ghoul dug into his crotch and began to feed on it.
The guard felt the blood rushing under strong pressure to his cock, which caused an incredibly strong erection and a sudden orgasm.
Feeling the sweet smell of semen, the ghoul brought his mouth to the soldier’s penis and began to drink everything that flowed out of it.
However, the wounded crotch could not be ignored and drops of blood began to fall on the body of the ghoul. The ghoul thrashed between cum and blood of a soldier, feeding on one or the other. The soldier at this time was in ecstasy: his eyes were rolled up and his mouth was open.