Make me yours.
Tell me when to touch you, where and how.
Tell me in detail what you want me to do
And then watch me do it.
Tell me what you want to do to me
And watch me melt.
Whisper it in my ear, your voice a low grumble,
While I stumble over what words to say.
Leave a trail of soft bites from my neck to my chest
As you continue to tease by doing nothing and everything at once.
Make me tell you what I want.
Make me beg.
Then tell me louder.
Do all the things that drive me insane
Then put a hand over my mouth and tell me not to make a sound.
Put your hands in my hair and take it slow,
Then put one on my neck as you go harder, rougher, faster.
Tell me we’re not stopping until I’m done.
But never give me the chance.
Make me incomprehensible.
Make me a mess.
Make me yours.
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/hr0gqr/first_time_doing_anything_like_this_any_advice_is
I really liked it. I love the idea of telling someone exactly what I want done, exactly how, in detail, and vice versa. Very hot.
I love to tell what I like, it’s kind of guarantee I’ll feel good while being with the man, but I also want to hear what he wants, the way he wants… this is actually a must when we care about each other.
What I truly want to underline here is… the beauty and rhythm of your writing! If you like poetry, you could adjust a bit your lines, and voila, the poem is ready!
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Cheers!