I am not a writer and not pretending to be one. I have a huge hotwife / stag / vixen fantasy and decided to put that fantasy to words. If this storyline is your thing and you read on, I’d love to hear your feedback.
The kids had just moved out and it was time to start a new chapter. We were in our late 40’s and were excited with what this next chapter would bring! We decided to sell our house and move into an apartment for a year or so.
Our move in went smooth. As we were finishing we met our new neighbor. He was just returning from work, He worked as a supervisor for a large general contractor. He was 6’ 4” and probably weighed 250 pounds. He was built like a football player and when shaking his hand I realized he had a grip that felt like he could bend steel. He had blue eyes that sparkled when he smiled and he was very welcoming.
Our first Saturday in the apartment and we were looking forward to a quiet evening. I had a work project that meant an early Sunday morning of work ahead. My wife and I were enjoying a glass of wine, as I finished mine i said I was going to head off to bed. My wife said she was going to have another glass of wine and watch some TV. As I walked into the bedroom I could hear music coming through the walls. Of all nights, I knew I had to get up early tomorrow. I walk back out to the living room and you could hear the music there as well. “Want me to walk over and ask him to turn it down?”, my wife asked. “Ha! You’re on your third glass of wine. I’m not sure if he is ready for you”, I laughed. We’d only been there a few days. I certainly didn’t want to be that guy.
I went back to the bedroom and sighed. I finally drifted off to sleep when I awoke to my phone going off. I grab my phone as I rub my eyes. A new text from a strange number. Figures, just as I drift off to sleep a wrong number or spam text. I open my phone and the text says, “feel free to join the party”. There is an image attached. It is a woman’s hand wrapped around a hard dick. The dick is impressive to say the least. Her hand is wrapped around the base and there is easily room for another hand above it. It wasn’t just long but thick. Even in the pic you could tell it was rock hard. I closed my phone and envied that guy. To be packing like that!
I laid there for a moment and unlocked my phone and brought the picture up again. I reached down and started stroking my cock imagining what it would be like to watch that guy and another woman. I knew he would be able to take her in any position. As long, thick, and hard as that was I could just imagine the noises that woman would make later. At this point I was rock hard though I dwarfed compared to that guy. Wide awake I decided to go out to the living room. After all my wife was a few glasses of wine into the evening and maybe she’d be in the mood. As I walked to the living room I couldn’t help but notice the wedding ring looked a lot like my wife’s. When I arrived in the living room there was no one there. I saw a note on the counter and looked and it said. Walking over to talk to our neighbor about the music.
I suddenly had a rush of nervous energy and excitement go through my stomach. I quickly tried to process my emotions. Was I jealous or angry or excited or aroused? Maybe all of the above. My cock said aroused. We had talked about this during foreplay. I had told her how turned on I would get watching her. I never knew if we would act on it but it seemed to be coming true. My heart raced as I walked next door. I knocked and waited. My phone buzzed. “Get your ass in here. You already have your invite” it said.
I walked through the door and there was my wife, sitting on the couch, his dick still in her hand. She stood up and before she could say a word, he pulled her shorts around her ankles. He jumped to his feet and yanked my wife’s shirt over her head. My wife was now standing between us in just a thong and a bra. He quickly moved his hands, rubbing them across her stomach and up over her breasts. He reached in front and unclasped her bra showing her beautiful 38D breasts. He began rubbing and squeezing her breasts as he kissed the back of her neck. He then moved his right hand sliding it down her belly and into her panties. As he plunged a finger in her she leaned her head back and started kissing him. The sounds of their kissing filled the room. His hand greedily explores her body.
She turned to face him and they continued to kiss. He squeezed her ass and I could actually hear how wet she already was. He ran his hand up to her shoulders and pushed them down. My wife dropped to her knees and started stroking his cock with one hand while she began running her tongue up and down his shaft. He stood with his hands on his hips and I could see the enjoyment on his face. Soon she stopped licking and was lustily sucking his cock. The sounds of her sucking filled the room. He and I made eye contact and I could see on his face, the combination of pleasure from not only her sucking his dick but knowing I was watching.
He tapped her on the shoulder and said, “let’s go to the bedroom where we can be more comfortable”. As we walked to the bedroom he slapped her ass, she turned and giggled a bit. He laid on the bed on his back and she climbed on the bed and began to pick up where she left off. Her beautiful ass on full display for me. Her head bobbing up and down on his dick. I pulled my phone from my pocket and started filming. His soft moans filled the room as she worked his dick with her hand and mouth in rhythm. My dick was as hard as it’s ever been. I stopped filming and got up and walked over and put my hand on my wife’s ass. I rubbed her ass and slid my hand between her legs. Her thong still on but soaking wet. The insides of her thighs were slippery with her wetness. He looked up at me, “not your time yet, why don’t you slip off her panities and sit back down” he said.
I did as I was told. I put a hand on each of her hips and slid her panties off. She moved her legs allowing me to take them off completely while never losing her pace on his cock. He leaned up and she stopped what she was doing. He whispered something in her ear. She climbed on top of him into the sixty nine position. She went right back to work on his dick, but now I could see her face as she did it. I started the camera again and watched as she was completely lost in his dick. She looked up at me at one point and I could see in her eyes his dick was not a want for her but a need. Her hips began to rock and I knew she was about to cum. Her eyes closed and her hips picked up the pace as she leaned her head back and softly moaned.
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/hm5fv3/the_new_neighbor_part_1_hotwife
I know you said you’re not a writer but I wonder if you would like some feedback on your writing itself, as opposed to the storyline? It would be more interesting to read if you could vary your sentence structure. Your sentences start with pronouns (I, he, she, her etc) more often than not which quickly becomes tedious. Also, your sentences are often of the same length (approximately). Varying both of those would help you to engage the reader.
I like. Pls continue.