I’m writing my own take on Star wars.
I love star wars. I’m playing Jedi Fallen order again after a small hiatus and it got me thinking about sexy Jedi and Sith and I’ve come up with a small story that I’d like to to expand on.
It started just after my training, I had done it, after years of training in the ways of the force I had become a true Jedi. No longer a padawan in training.
But sadly I didn’t get the long awaited vacation I sorely needed. Instead rather, one, of the master Jedi’s was attacked and murdered in cold blood by someone who could only have been a Sith.
Rather than getting a holiday I was sent on my first solo mission to a known Sith training planet to gather information, upon landing on the planet, undercover. I headed over to a local cantina, to gather information. All sort of creatures frequent the cantina and it was here where I came across a very peculiar, yet intriguing female of some unknown race. She was tall and fairly slim but thick in all the right places. She had hips that widened out which could only mean that she was a humanoid. She had this beautiful long wavy hair, that happened to be a light pale blue tinge. Her skin was also slightly pink and looked so soft. She wore a long and elegant cloak, with no jewelry, from what I could see.
Immediately as I saw her I knew she was an agent. Anyone who spent the time to become inconspicuous as she was had to be an agent.
So I followed her. I ordered a drink and sat close to her. I studied her, using all my training, I looked for the smallest details. The was she moved her hand told me she favored her left side more and the way she gently wafted from one table to another. She was a woman of grace, obviously well trained and she knew how to carry herself. But this was of a Sith planet which meant she must be a Sith, so why should she even attempt to try conceal she was an agent. Watching her speak to the patron, I realized she was respected, or feared. Then was her dress, she too had a cloak on, the tell-tale outline of a saber against that beautiful hip.
Then to my surprise she received a com and I swear I could hear her say ‘yes mastee’. Now the only time that is said is if she were a trainee initiate. She quickly dealt with the account and left. I had to follow, so I did too.
Once paid for a followed her, now if she were just a recruit, her training would not be up to mine. Or at least I hoped.
I followed her, concealed in the shadows for about a block or two till I saw she had a meeting with what I assume was her master, a big brute of a Sith I knew, he had a robotic arm that I knew well, considering my former master had given it to him saving me when I was but an initiate. But now my hunches were confirmed I had to be very careful, so I crept after them as they walked and spoke, I learned her name was Jayna and she indeed was an initiate.
The Sith ways were weird and unusual to me. I was trained in the ways of a Jedi after all, and my connection with the force was strong, but not strong enough to take on a Sith lord right out the gate. Maybe a trainee, but not a lord.
But this trainee, Jayna. I could feel her force and I did not want to take her on in a bad way. Rather I could feel her force was drawing to me, calling. Her lord was a repulsive force, as Sith usually are. Sith are dark and for themselves. They use the force in aggressive ways. I could feel Jayna was resisting the darkest of the Sith ways. Why I couldn’t gather.
Then something strange happened, Jayna dropped her cloak off her shoulders and what she wore surprised me. She wore a red and black corset with black stockings. I also got a full glimpse of her full bust for the first time. Then I saw what surprised me most, why had I not seen it earlier, she wore a slave collar around her neck. Was she a slave?
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Maybe, if you want I can get Jayna’s perspective, on this?
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/gytm22/need_help_writing_m4f_im_writing_a_story_called