I posted this last week, but had never written or shared something like this before and deleted it. A few of you sent me kind and horny messages that you enjoyed it, which I really appreciated. I shouldn’t have deleted it, so I wanted to put it back out there. I’m no longer with the person I wrote this for, but if you like it I may try my hand at writing some others. Comments, suggestions, and PMs welcome.
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*You do trust me, don’t you babygirl?*
You say *of course Daddy, always* so quickly, not wanting me to doubt it even for a split second. I love you for that. Your eyes twinkle as you do, adorable as ever but still a little scared.
I give you a short kiss on your perfect lips, quivering ever so gently. Holding the kiss only long enough to put my hands on your hips. Your dress feels so smooth and warm to the touch, your body heat racing to meet my chilly hands.
*That’s my good girl* I say as I look deeply into your eyes, losing myself as I do every time. No matter how many times I see you, how you look back at me with wonder and love and fear and desire sets my soul aflame. I often ask myself if you know what you do to me. But tonight I’ll answer that question by showing you.
I sit you down on the edge of the bed, kneel in front of you, and slip off your heels. *You looked gorgeous tonight for our date, Princess. Even the big girls were jealous of you. Daddy’s very proud.*
You respond with a wide smile, beaming at the thought of making me proud. You even giggle a bit, likely brought on by the bottle of champagne I couldn’t help but order for us at dinner. Your kisses still taste of bubbles and chocolate, as if I needed a reason to want more. *Thank you, Daddy. I wanted to show you I can be a big girl for you too.*
If you melt me anymore than you have, all that will be left of me is a puddle at your perfect feet. *You did amazing, baby. Such a good girl.*
I move in for a crouched kiss as soon as I say it, feeling the electricity as our lips meet gently, tasting divine sweetness of sugar and of you, and barely holding back the urge to take you right then and there. It takes everything I have and everything I am to not rush to pleasing you. But I have plans for you, my love. All in good time.
I break the kiss, lingering for a few seconds a hair away from another. A quick peck once more because I’m addicted to your taste. Your feel. You.
I stand back up and take off my suit jacket. Moving to hang it in the hotel room’s closet. You start to get up saying *I want to help.* I smile. *Stay seated, baby. I’m coming right back.*
I can tell when a moment of planned disobedience crosses your mind, but you think better of it and stay sitting on the edge of the bed. Such a good girl. I’ll be rewarding you for that, even if you don’t know it. I slip off my shoes and come back towards you, but surprise you by sitting behind you on the bed. Before you can turn to face me, my hands are on your shoulders. Making their way up to your gorgeous neck. Massaging your muscles gently but firmly. Eventually I move my right hand and give you long slow kisses up your shoulder and neck. I can practically feel you burning for me now. I whisper *You belong right here in Daddy’s arms, babygirl.* It’s not just for effect either. You belong in my arms.
This proves too much for you, such a passionate and stubborn creature. You spin around and attack me with a kiss, straddling me and reaching to undo my belt. I grab your hands but hold the kiss, breaking it only to stoke your fires further. *What do you want, baby? Do you want Daddy’s pants off?* You nod quickly and follow it with another passionate kiss, your hands still held by mine. *Do you want Daddy’s cock inside you, Princess?* You nod even more enthusiastically, grinding on me to sell the point further. Such a good girl.
You know I don’t want you wearing a bra. That’s established by now. You’re not wearing panties right now either. I took care of that at dinner when I told you to take them off in the bathroom and put the vibrator inside you. I saw the devilish look in your eye when you came back to the table, came over for a kiss, and secretly slipped your panties into my hand. I couldn’t help myself, my love. Watching you try not to cum in the restaurant while I controlled your throbbing pussy was nearly as fun as watching you fail in your attempts. The table near us may have heard me whispering *Cum for Daddy, right here* as you gripped the table and did as you were told, but no one else in the world really exists tonight. Only you and I.
I pick you up with me as I stand up, but set you back down on on your feet. I take my hands off you, already aching to put them back where they belong. I take a step back from you and give you the look. You know the one. The look right before I tell you exactly what I want you to do for me. But first, you know I have to tease you. I can’t help it. It makes what comes after so much better.
*Are you ready to be Daddy’s good girl, princess?* I hold back my smile as best I can. As if I don’t know the answer.
*Yes, Daddy. Always.* I can’t tell if your excitement is because you don’t know what’s coming or because you do.
*Excellent, my love. Take off your dress.* To your immense credit, your dress is on the floor before the word has finished leaving my lips. I love you for that too.
You probably think I’m taking a moment to appreciate your incredible form. In all honesty, you are so sexy that I’m still rendered speechless. You are absolutely breathtaking. I’m weak to you, in every way. Captivated by the goddess that is my babygirl.
I let out a long slow breath to recover my faculties. *Perfect. I love when you’re naked, babygirl. You make me so happy.* I know what these words will do as I say them. I can practically sense your pussy dripping as you smile. I know it wants my full attention. Soon.
I allow a stern edge to come back to my voice, finally recovered from seeing your naked form.
*Undo my belt.*
My jaw is steel now. No hint of the silly grin it often has. I think now you understand how badly I want it too.
You close the gap between us with a step, masterfully undo my belt and slip it off of me, tossing it to the floor behind you. I’m preparing my next command for you, but you stop me in my tracks. Your hand is rubbing my cock through my pants. I definitely love you for that. But I didn’t tell you to feel how incredibly hard I am for you yet, baby. I grab your wrist tightly, but keep your hand where it is.
*Did I tell you to do that, princess?* You shake your head slowly, but still don’t move your hand. I stare back into your seductive eyes, wondering exactly how to proceed.
*Get on yo-* I don’t even make it through a word before you’re on your knees, undoing my pants. I’m not even on the third word and you have my pants down and, yep my underwear too. Did I even make it to the word knee? I couldn’t tell you because that’s when you slipped my cock into your mouth, like Daddy’s perfect little slut. I really fucking love you for that.
I wish I could tell you that I recovered, but all I can manage is a mix of *Fuck, Good girl,* and *You make Daddy feel so good.*
I know better than to do any more commands at this point. You’re sucking the head of my cock like there’s no tomorrow, stroking the shaft and massaging my balls as you do. If there is a heaven babygirl, it wouldn’t be half as good as you’re making me feel right now. If this were another day, I’d let this keep going. I’d let your magic continue, and cum all over that unreasonably gorgeous face of yours, helping make sure it all found its way to your perfect mouth afterwards. I know you love Daddy’s cum, and I absolutely adore you for that. But tonight, my love, Daddy has other plans.
*Time to stop, baby.* I wonder if you understand how hard it is for those words to escape me instead of my cum. You take your mouth off my cock and stop stroking my shaft, but you little devil. You’re still massaging my balls, gently but firmly. Now I wonder if this is my reward for your massage. I admit, this feeling is perfection. My gorgeous little girl naked on her knees playing with Daddy’s balls. It’s easily 30 seconds or more before I can break that spell, our eyes locked the entire time.
*Get on the bed.* You stand up and do as you’re told, making sure to graze your perfect ass against my cock as you make your way to the bed. I love you for that.
*Not that way, babygirl. Lay sideways on the bed with your legs hanging off.* You look back at me puzzled for a moment before my intentions click in your head. I want to spend some time on my knees for you, my love. I ache for a taste of your sweet juices.
You do as you’re told, as you always do. And in a flash you’re feeling kisses up your thighs. Feeling Daddy’s beard gently scratch and tickle as I make my way up towards my true destination. Your legs close slightly in anticipation of the moment my lips land on your lips, but I tease you yet again. This time I kiss every inch of skin around your perfect pussy, taking a scenic tour of what I know is mine. Do you feel the lightning bolt when my tongue slips up your pussy lips? Do you feel another when I swirl around your clit? I’d ask if you felt the storm when my fingers slid inside you while I wrote you a message on your clit with my tongue, but your moans answer that for me. Some may trace the alphabet, but I have a very specific message to write. Your pussy is mine. But I don’t need to say out loud what we both already know.
I’m in my personal heaven here. My tongue swirling and licking, my fingers deep inside you. Why would I ever want to leave? So for a few minutes, I don’t. I zone into this moment I’ve been picturing and imagining and aching for since my last visit. I didn’t hear you at first, your words lost in your breathy moans. You being me back to reality the second time when you put your hands in my hair. *Can I please cum, Daddy?* I can’t help but smile. That very question sustains my soul. If asked what I find most fulfilling in life, I’d be hard-pressed to find a better answer than my babygirl asking her Daddy permission to cum. Tasting it is even more of a bonus.
I pick my head up for a moment, long enough only to say *Yes, please cum for Daddy babygirl* and sink back down to finish the job. My fingers can feel your every pulse as I thrust them in you faster, my tongue swirling your clit with greater pressure. Until the moment. That moment. My favorite moment.
Your moans become nearly a scream as you cum hard on my fingers and tongue. But I’m still ravenous. I don’t stop until that moment where you get overwhelmed and push me back. I’ll take every nanosecond I can spend eating you out.
Your breathing is still hard, but soon comes back down towards normal. I stand up while you lay back normally on the bed. I bend down to give you a kiss. I can tell you’re still overwhelmed because the taste of your pussy on my lips shocks you for a moment, but then you make out with me hungrily. I really love you for that.
We break the kiss, and I can see the truth before you even say it. *Daddy, I’m tired now.* I smile and nod. *You look a bit exhausted now, babygirl. We can get some sleep.*
You frown suddenly. Did I say something wrong? You aren’t saying anything, just pouting at me. You’re so fucking adorable. I am putty in your hands right now. Do you want the moon? I’ll throw a lasso around it and get it for you. I’ll do anything for you, my love so why aren’t you saying anything?
Finally you break your silence. *No Daddy, you don’t understand. Lay down.* You scoot over to give me room. You’re right in that I don’t understand, but you move quickly and undo my tie and the buttons on my shirt. I’m in just an undershirt and socks when you approve and move to your next action. Eating your pussy and making you cum is such a turn-on for me that it only took a few strokes to get me fully hard again. You moved even faster this time, straddling me and slipping my cock inside you. Fuck. Did I say it was heaven before? Heaven is you riding me, babygirl.
Once you feel me inside you, your pout disappears and becomes that sly smile. *Daddy, I’m tired. So I want to make you cum quickly, ok?* The words don’t exist to express how much I love you for that. All I can manage is a nod before you start to work your magic grinding your hips and riding my cock. You change the angle of your leaning and everything feels like absolute bliss. It isn’t long before you’re about to get your wish. *I’m getting close, babygirl. I’m about to cum.*
Your whole demeanor changes at hearing this. I’ve never seen a more determined look on anyone, made all the better that what you’re determined to get is Daddy’s cum inside you. And like the perfect little good girl you are, you know what I want. *Cum inside me, Daddy. Please. I need it. Please fill me with your cum.*
How could I refuse? My attraction to you, my desire for you, my love for you, all reach their maximums as I shoot pulse after pulse of my cum in your perfect little pussy. We both know that’s where it belongs. You keep riding me greedily, fucking every last drop from me until I am completely drained.
Much like you did, I have to grab you when I am finally overwhelmed with the bliss you bring me. I get up to clean up and turn off the lights, while you have slid into the bed. I take my rightful place next to you, holding you tightly in my arms. You speak before I can. *I love when you cum inside me, Daddy. I sleep better when my pussy is full from you.* I chuckle. I don’t know if that’s true, but it’s just like my prefect little girl to say it. *My cum is yours, babygirl. Just like the rest of me.* Such a strange concept I think, but also completely true.
*That’s what I like to hear, Daddy. Goodnight. Can’t wait for tomorrow.* You nestle deeper into our cuddle and sigh happily. I give you one last kiss on your back before I say *I’m so glad we have this weekend together. Goodnight, my good girl.*
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