I’m just looking for some feedback I suppose. I sent to my wife and she said she liked it, but idk. I wanna send it to a few female friends but don’t know how that would go. Anyway here it is. Feel free to dm
This started as a scenario I was given in another sub.
Walk in room to find you naked in bed in the dark
I would come in and find you in such a position, I would grab your hands and restrain them behind your back with zip ties, getting you onto your knees, spreading your knees as far as they would go. I would grab a pair of your dirty panties on the floor and rub them on your already leaking pussy and get the nice and wet, then grab your hair in a pony tail and jerk your head back and shove those soaked panties in your mouth so you can taste yourself. Then with a handful of hair in one hand, i would with my other hand run down your back to your sweet plump ass and slide my finger down your crack, grazing your sweet asshole and coming to your soaking wet pussy, then rub down the outside of one lip to your clit and very softly press my finger against it then back up the other lip all the way to your asshole to circle my pussy juice covered finger around your sweet hole. Never fully inserting but stretching you slightly.
Hands zip tied behind your back, knees spread. Soaked panties in your mouth letting you know just how good you taste. You don’t even know whos behind you, that excites you. Not knowing the man behind you when your restrained or what he will do to you. It makes your pussy quiver and a shiver go up your spine making your nipples become rock hard.
From behind you I slip a blindfold over your eyes. Creating darkness for you, the only senses you have left are heightened, you hear me breathing slowly, you taste your sweet yet musky juices in your mouth, you smell the musk in the air from your continuous flow from your pink swollen slit, you see nothing. Darkness.
I let go of your hair and let your head fall to the bed. Face in the sheets. Gagged, bound, nothing to do but take what’s coming to you.
My hands caress down your back to your hips. Softly glide over your beautiful ass, meeting in the middle, at your lower back pushing down making your ass and slit more exposed. My hands glide down your ass cheeks giving them a slight squeeze. Down the rear of your legs, softly, slowly. My hands slide up your thighs back to your ass, with a hand in each cheek I spread you. Spread that gorgeous ass and expose your sweet dirty hole. Begging to be touched. Licked. Used.
A shiver runs through your entire body as you’re so enthralled in what’s about to happen to you, yet scared, anxious, beyond excited.
With your backside spread wide. I kneel down and give that sweet asshole a quick flick of my tongue, then another. And another. Right when you’ve come to the conclusion that I’m going to fuck your asshole with my tongue I stop.
My hand slides down to your pulsating clit. Putting pressure onto it and a slow back and forth motion. You push back against me. Your pussy is dripping but it’s just not enough to cum. I won’t let you cum. Not yet. You Push back harder and harder. And I make my motions lighter and slower. Driving you to the point of insanity.
I’m at eye level with your sweet asshole slowly rubbing and barely touching your clit. I take in the sweet scent of your asshole, intoxicating me with your smell.
You squirm and moan, but your restrained and gagged. There’s no where to go, nothing to do.
You will take what I give you, when I give it.
Like a good girl.
It’s quiet, you hear me inhale your odor. Basking in your smell.
I’m knelt behind you, face inches from your holes, my thumb applying pressure to your clit, my movements get faster and faster, rubbing my thumb side to side, up and down on your swollen clit. Your juices are flowing freely from you covering my hand, dripping onto the sheets.
I feel you begin to tense, all movement stops, I let that feeling of Ecstasy slowly subside. You don’t get to come yet.
Your panting. Muffled moans coming from you as you wait in anticipation of what happens next.
You feel me stand up behind you. My hands slide up your arms and grab your shoulders, I push myself against you. You feel my skin on your skin. You feel my hard cock nuzzled up against your ass. My hands firmly grab your shoulders and pull you upright. Your hands explore and touch my throbbing cock. You push back against me and feel your skin make contact with my hairy chest.
My hands move from your shoulders to your chest. Slowly exploring your skin. One hand slides down to your wanting breast and slowly rolls your erect nipple between my thumb and index finger. The other hand grips firmly around your throat, slightly cutting your supply of oxygen.
Your hands are stroking my cock to the best of your abilities while restrained, my chest against your back, hand caressing your nipple, circling your Areola, hand gripped around your throat. You feel me squeeze and get closer, I let out a long slow breath near your ear, then take your earlobe into my mouth very gently and suck on it slightly. As I let your Lobe out of my mouth I whisper into your ear, “you’re mine.”
Your skin on mine, my hand releases your throat and both my hands explore your skin, gliding across your skin like silk, cupping both your breasts into my hands and squeezing slightly, my hands move all over your skin, from your chest, to your nipples. To your belly. Down to your hips. They glide across your mound sending shivers up your spine.
I touch your thighs and hips. And finally slide my hand down to your swollen pussy. I begin rubbing your clit harder than I ever have, faster and faster. Your on the brink of finally cumming.
I sternly tell you into your ear “it’s time” and I continue to rub your clit up and down. Running the entire length of your sweet slit. Just barely entering you as I move past your sweet hole and back up to your clit. You have your first earth shattering orgasm. You cum hard. Trying to moan. Muffled by your panties. You are on your orgasm high. But, I don’t stop. I rub harder, and faster than before. You fall into another orgasm. Just as you gasp for air, I firmly grip your throat with my other hand, and squeeze. Rubbing harder and harder. You cum again, and again, you feel your eyes rolling to the back of your head just as you are about to lose consciousness i release your throat and let the Ecstasy flow through your body.
I push you back down. Hands behind your back restrained. Face in the sheets. Trying to get oxygen back in your lungs. Pussy and ass in the air exposed. “Good girl.” I say as I give your ass a very firm smack, leaving it tingling and beat red.
Another smack, and another, and another. You squeal in pain from the strikes on your ass. Your ass is throbbing and stings. I spread your cheeks apart, you are exposed. Helpless and exposed. You feel the head of my cock touch your asshole. My swollen head messaging your dirty hole. You moan and push back against me. My cock working against you. I grab my stuff shaft and circle your sweet dripping pussy, I rub my head down your lip to your clit and back up the other side all the way to your asshole, then back again. Spreading your sticky wetness everywhere my cock touches. I slap the head of my dick against your clit making you twitch. Again, and again, and again. The swollen head of my cock touches your gaping hole. I grab the zip ties and pull you back onto me, burying my head and shaft deep inside you. In, then out. Slow steady strokes, deeper and deeper into your wet pulsating pussy. My balls will touch your swollen clit with every thrust inward, slapping harder and harder with every stroke.
I’ll feel the tensing of your insides on my shaft and know that you are cumming on my cock, which will only make me fuck you harder. Pounding my cock inside of you, making you squeal in pleasure. One hand holding you restraints, pulling you to me, the other hand relentlessly smacking your sweet beat red ass cheek. You’ll cum and gush on my cock over and over again. I won’t stop. I will slam my rock hard cock into you again and again. Finally after I’ve had my fun with that hole. I’ll pull my cock out of you, my cock will be dripping with your juices.
I will pull you up to standing, turning you around and make you kneel in front of me.
You know what’s next.
You sit patiently and wait. The wait is grueling. You see only darkness. Hands are numb from the restraints. You have spit and drool coming down your chin, you sucked all your own juices out of those panties by now and replaced it with your own saliva. Your ass is still throbbing from the beating you endured. Your pussy is leaking down your thighs. Your ready. Ready and willing for whatever comes next. So you wait, like the good girl you are, eager to please.
You feel me run my hand through your hair, i then gather your hair into a pony tail and hold it, very firmly. I pull your head back, I reach into your mouth and remove your drenched panties and throw them beside you in the floor. Finally, you can take some deep breaths and regain your composure, you move your sore jaw back and forth trying to regain feeling. “Open.” I say in a deep demanding tone, you do as your told. You sit there mouth agape ready for my cock, I grab ahold of my rock hard shaft and circle my head on your lips, letting you taste the fresh deliciousness you have to offer. I grip your ponytail tightly and push my cock into your mouth, your no newbie when it comes to sucking cock, so you begin sucking and twirling your tongue around the swollen head of my cock, tasting your fresh sweet juices. I work my cock deeper and deeper into your mouth, reaching your throat. I pull my cock all the way out of your mouth, then back in all the way to your throat, but deeper with every stroke, my balls touching your chin as I make my way deeper and deeper into you. My cock is as deep as it will go into your throat. And I pull it out again, one last time, I slide my cock into your mouth, past your tongue, into your throat, but instead of removing my cock quickly as I had done before, both of my hands grab the back of your head and push and hold your head onto me. My cock all the way in your throat, hands holding you in place firmly, you’re fine at first, but that you feel the gag starting, you resist, but not you feel you need to breath. To bad. I hold firm, cock down your throat, you struggle and try to pull back. Spit spilling out from all side of my cock. You squeal and thrash and jerk. There’s nothing you can do. I begin to slam your head back and forth on my cock, fucking your throat, you can’t breath, you can’t get away. You give one last jerk in an attempt to free yourself, it’s no use, I just push deeper, and then it happens, everything goes grey, you become limp and your arms and legs go numb, your fading, and quickly.
Black.
SMACK!
A hard spank on the ass.
You scream as you come to, you try to move. You cannot. You try to run through what happened, but things are fuzzy, very fuzzy. You try to move your arms. You can’t. You are still blindfolded and can’t see a thing. You feel you’re restrained, but it’s different now.
It’s quiet. You don’t know where I am or how you ended up like this.
You’re on my knees in the bed again, face in the sheets, ass in the air.
Instead of your hands being restrained behind your back, they are under you in between your legs.
You move your hands around and feel a bar, with both hands. Your grab it and try to move it, you feel it pull your ankles. You now realize there is a spreader bar locked to both ankles as well as both your wrists. You’re stuck.
You’re exposed, vulnerable, scared, and dripping wet.
I glide my hand across your back.
Finally! You now don’t feel so alone and all of a sudden have a wave of security come over you.
I rub your bruised ass cheeks gently. Grabbing and squeezing ever so slightly. I grab the inside of your butt check and spread you open wide, then stillness. Nothing. You felt you were there, spread, for ages.
Until, you feel a hot glob of spit fall right onto your asshole.
You twitch from the feeling.
You pucker your sweet asshole cause you know what’s coming next.
My finger slides down your crack to your wanting hole very slowly.
I push the tip on my index finger into your tight asshole, I feel your muscles accept my finger into you and flex harder and harder almost pulling my finger deeper inside.
“Fuck, that feels so good” you mutter.
SMACK!
The hardest spank you’ve ever received just rippled through your whole body.
“No talking!” I demand
You whimper and bite your lip, your butt cheek on fire. You feel a tear break loose from your eye and absorb into your blindfold.
My index finger deep into your asshole, working in an out stretching you, preparing you for what’s to come.
Index and middle finger enter you, I can see your hole envelop my fingers and I push forward, and you push back.
Two fingers working your tight asshole in and out. You can feel it, feel the orgasm creeping up again.
You think to yourself, am I really going to cum from this man that I don’t even knows fingers in my asshole.
My finger work deeper and faster inside of you, I add some spit along the way, keeping you nice and lubed up. Then it happens, I feel you tense up and push back hard, your muscles squeeze tight on my fingers.
“Mmmm ooooh fuckkkk” you squeal as you cum hard from my fingers inside you.
SMACK!!
Harder than before a hand that feels like a hammer smack down on your bruised ass, sending shockwaves of pain through your entire body.
“I said no talking!” I demand in a harsh yet comforting tone.
My fingers retract from your asshole, leaving you with a slippery gaped hole in the air.
You can hear me walk a few feet away and then you hear a zipper unzip, you can hear me pull something from the bag.
I walk close to you and get right behind you. I’m not touching you, but you can feel me. Feel my presence. You wait, for what feels like an eternity.
You feel me grab your pony tale and lift your head.
You feel me placing something around your head. It feels like leather with cold metal pieces on it.
“Open” I say.
You lower your jaw and open your mouth wide, still not knowing what’s happening.
You feel a ball being pushed into your mouth and then a strap on either side of it being wrapped around your head and cinched tightly right below your ponytail.
“That ought to help you listen”
All you can do is whimper and bite down on the ball as you bury your face into the sheets once more, awaiting whatever treatment comes next.
You feel my head of my cock make contact with your moist gaped asshole. I grab both your hips and pull you back, burying my cock deep inside of you. Then I slide my cock out until just the head is inside of you, then my shaft makes it’s way back inside you, deeper then before, and back out. Slowly I work myself deeper inside of you until your ass is making contact with the base of my shaft and my balls slap against your clit.
Again, and again, harder and harder my cock slams inside of you, stretching that tight little asshole.
Your grunt, moan and whimper behind your ball gag as you take a strange mans cock deep inside your dirty hole, you can feel it coming you know your gonna cum on my cock, you feel it farther inside of you than you thought possible.
In and out in and out
Your body tenses, you squirm, you grip the spreader bar between your legs as tight as you can.
Your body shakes with a violent orgasm, you muscles tighten around my cock and I just slam harder, and harder.
You can’t breath, you can’t think.
My cock is pounding inside of you relentlessly. Orgasm after orgasm my cock tortures your ass.
You feel me slow my strokes, it feels as if my dick got bigger inside your asshole and stretched you just that much more.
You can feel stream after stream of thick hot cum filling your insides as I pump you full of my seed.
While getting your ass filled with my cum it brings you to the point of another orgasm, stronger than before, you cum hard. Screaming and moaning behind your ball gag as load after load of cum enters your bowels. You push back hard in my cock milking every drop of cum from me.
I slowly slide my cock out of you.
You feel the cold air enter your ass as my cock slips out.
Your legs are quivering.
You feel used.
You’ve never came that hard in your life.
“Push my cum out of you” I say softly.
You oblige, like a good girl.
You tense your asshole and push. You can feel a river of hot cum seeping out of your ass and flowing down your pussy, slowly sliding across your clit and dripping onto your bound hands below you.
“Good girl” I say as I put my hand on your hip and give you a soft reassuring squeeze.
You feel me release your restraints from your wrists and ankles.
“Don’t move” I say softly yet firm.
You can hear me gather my things.
You can hear me collect my cloths and get dressed. As you sit still, obedient.
First my pants slide on, then my shirt, then my boots.
You feel my hand glide across your back to the back of your neck and push your hair to one side, then you feel me bend over and get close. Almost touching your ear with my lips.
In a very seductive soothing tone “what a good girl. You can move when you hear the door close behind me.”
You whimper in response, still attempting to regain your composure.
You’re lost in a daze.
You hear the door open.
Then the door close.
You collapse onto the bed
Stretched and weak.
You pull the ball gag out of your mouth and take a few deep breaths.
You have cum all over your hands that had flowed out of your ass.
You look around and assess.
Your ass is bruised and beaten.
Your wrists are swollen and sore.
Your asshole is leaking, gaped and sore.
You finally gather the strength to stand. You walk to your dresser and stare at yourself in the mirror.
Abused.
“I don’t even know who that was, or what he looked like.”
You look down and see a note pushed into the frame of the mirror.
The front of the note reads
“To my good girl”
You slowly open the note
It reads:
“Keep the ball gag, and never forget.
Until next time my beautiful girl.”
Signed: “The man you’ll never know.”
The end.
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/gkdnrv/good_girl_my_first_attempt