Thanks to anyone who reads this I’d love some feedback!
It’s based on the Punisher: Frank Castle and a neighbour
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“Well, expect many more flowers in the future” Frank looked at me seriously and it made me laugh
I smiled softly and nodded my head.
I got dinner out of the oven and I felt Frank come up behind me. He put his arm around my stomach and moved my hair to the side to kiss my neck. He kissed me so softly I felt a little weak. He moved his lips down my neck, until he got to my shoulder and bit softy. A moan escaped my lips and encouraged Frank to keep going. He pulled the strap of my dress down and kissed back up to my ear. I pushed my ass into his crotch and he let out a manly groan. That sound was so sexy and I wanted to hear it again. I braced myself on the counter and bent over a little bit, pushing harder into Frank’s crotch. Frank let out another groan and I could feel he was getting harder against me. He turned me around and kissed me really hard on the lips, our tongues finding each other. My breath started to get really heavy and a familiar warmth started to radiate between my legs.
This is it, I thought. I want him. I want him now.
Frank grabbed my hips and lifted me up with ease. I wrapped my legs around him and I could feel his hardness through his jeans against my underwear. I moaned slightly, I couldn’t help myself. I’d wanted this for so long. He was so sexy and he was mine right now.
Frank placed my ass on the counter and kissed me harder, pushing his crotch against mine. One of his hands traveled down between my legs and slipped into the side of my underwear. He felt how wet I was already and groaned. The feeling of his hands between my legs made me Inhale sharply
“You okay?” He whispered in my ear.
I nodded and let out a “uhhhuh”. It was all I could muster. His hand was gently rubbing the outside of my underwear and it was driving me crazy.
“Bedroom?” He asked
“Yeah” I breathed.
Frank Castle picked me up, and carried me to the bed. I held on with my legs around him, and his hands where propped under my ass. Being carried made me laugh and I liked how he was in control, but kept checking in with me. It made me feel safe.
He placed me gently on the bed and stared at me for a moment.
This made me feel exposed and I looked away. Frank moved up between my legs and kissed me on the lips. “Look at me” he ordered gently. I did and he kissed me again. He rubbed his crotch onto mine and I moaned again. I propped myself up on my elbows and unzipped my dress from the back. Frank took over and pulled it down, exposing my bra. It was a black corset-esque push up number and it was expensive and very flattering. Frank kissed my chest and undid the clasps at the back of my bra with ease. I was impressed and I was going to let him know, later.
Frank pulled down my bra as I layed on the bed, exposing my nipples. He let out a low moan as he took one of my nipples in his mouth, cupping my full breasts with both hands. His big rough hands on my soft skin felt heavenly.
Satisfied that he had explored my chest enough, getting to know every inch of me, Frank pulled the rest of my dress down, staring and my black lacy underwear.
“Well that’s a sight. I want to remember that forever”. He said, almost to himself. Frank kissed down my stomach, stopping just before the top of my underwear and looked up. I gave him a quick nod and he pulled down my underwear with both hands. Exposing my pussy to his face.
Frank dove in, tongue first, lapping up all my wetness. I squirmed in pleasure and Frank held my thighs still. My breath started getting heavier, and Frank watched me, picking up every movement, noticing when I enjoyed something. Frank Castle was so intuitive, and I couldn’t believe he was this good.
As I started breathing heavier, I let out some moans of pleasure, in which Frank responded by sliding a finger Into my pussy while licking my clit. I gasped and lifted my hips up into Frank, overcome by the sensation. “Good girl, come for me” Frank’s words sent me over the edge and I started moaning louder, my legs started shaking and a wave of pleasure rushed over me. My body went limp as my brain went numb. My legs relaxed and Frank gently kissed my clit as he moved upwards, and kissed my mouth. I kissed him back gently, tasting myself on his beard. I opened my eyes and Frank had a smug smile, his eyes where sparkling with amusement and he kissed my forehead.
I started to level out after my intense orgasm and I kissed him again, lowering my hands to undo his jeans. He helped me pull his pants down, and he grinded his crotch towards mine. His underwear was soft, and I slid my hand into the front of them. I felt how big and hard he is. I pulled his hard cock out of his underwear and aimed it towards my pussy. His head parted my pussy lips and we stopped kissing for a moment as I looked him in the eyes. I breathed heavily and Frank kissed me as he held himself, teasing me. “Please” I begged, “I want you” Frank thrust into me, and groaned into my ear as he took a second to savour the sensation. I let out a gasp, he was big and thick and he felt so good. He was stretching me slightly, and it felt perfect.
“Oh my god” I gasped, I already felt like I was going to cum again. As if Frank knew, he started moving his hips backward and forward, thrusting his huge cock inside me, fucking me harder and harder. I wrapped my legs tightly around his ass, and exposed my neck slightly to him, begging him to bite me. Frank knew exactly what to do. His teeth sank Into my neck, with just the right amount of pressure. I gasped again, feeling myself creep closer to another orgasm. I dug my nails Into his back, and Frank groaned. “Fuck” he said just under his breath. I loved hearing that. Frank fucked me hard, as we pawed at each other, grabbing onto each other like our lives depended on it. I felt my legs shake and my pussy clamp down onto Frank’s cock. I was moaning and Frank could sense I was close and I could feel him getting closer. “Come with me” I moaned and with a few final strokes, pleasure washed over me as Frank released deep into my pussy.
Frank layed his head on my chest for a moment, catching his breath and enjoying the feeling. He kissed me passionately, and slowly pulled out and layed next to me. He looked amazing, eyes closed, completely naked, beads of sweat running down his chest. I could look at him forever. I rolled over and placed my head on his chest as he wrapped an arm around me.
He kissed my forehead, and I sighed.”wow I uh…just wow” I trailed off.
“Yeah…” He added.
Neither of us could speak. Our brains had stopped working and we drifted off to sleep. I don’t think I’d ever felt so whole.
The end! What did you think?
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/gi9dap/first_time_writing_smut_punisher