This is one of my first pieces. I’m super open to criticism, both positive and constructive. I’m not a trained writer. Just a horny girl with a lot of time on her hands. Thanks Covid-19!
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I’m at a club with friends. We’ve had a long week and we need to blow off some steam. I’ve had a couple of rum and diets (I don’t like beer, when I want to dance) and I’m moving my hips and dancing.
I feel you come up behind me. At first you’re just standing there. I can feel your presence but nothing else. Then as the next song starts you place both of your hands on my hips and you pull me in close. I yell out in surprise but continue dancing and writhing. The attention was surprising but not unwelcome.
As I move my hips back and forth and make little circles I can feel the bulge in your pants growing. I would never say this out loud, but it turns me on. So much so that I can feel my pussy become slick with wetness.
After dancing for what seems like hours, you whisper in my ear that you’d like to buy me a drink. Buzzed and giggly, I follow you as you lead me away from the crowd.
But we don’t go to the bar. You steer me to the bathroom and I begin to worry that I’ve made a mistake.
It’s only when we’re inside and you’ve locked the door that my fears are confirmed.
I back away slowly but you’ve positioned yourself between me and the door and you let out a sigh.
“I was watching you all night. I knew the second you started dancing you were a slut that needed to be fucked.”
In shock, I don’t say anything. I just stare and slowly shake my head “no”.
You move towards me in a few steps. My body and mind have stopped working, it feels. You turn me so my ass is back against the crotch of your pants. You whisper, so softly I can barely make it out, “is this what you want?” And you grab my hand and place it on what I assume is your cock. I whimper and try to pull away but that only makes you grab harder.
With your other hand you reach around and lift up my skirt. Two fingers slide down my underwear as I feel you searching for my pussy. Calloused finger tips grabbing hungrily to peel apart my lips. I’m embarrassed knowing that you’ll feel how wet I am.
You gasp. “I knew you wanted this” your two fingers running up and down my lips, occasionally sticking your middle finger inside my soaking wet hole. You begin to pull them out only to stop at my clit. Slow circles elicit the softest moan from me.
That’s what you wanted. The second you hear me moan and whimper, my skirt is yanked up and my panties are ripped off.
I still don’t know what to do but I can hear you unbuckle and unzip you’re pants. Before I can register what’s happening you’ve bent me over the bathroom sink.
For a brief moment I feel your tip behind me, grazing my smooth ass. And then without warning you shove the entirety of your thick throbbing cock inside my tight and unprepared pussy. I scream and let out a single tear. You’re thrusting in and out repeatedly. One hand bracing me and playing with my clit while the other has a fistful of my hair.
You last so long, I begin to wonder how long this could possibly go on. It feels so good that even though I’m saying “no” over and over I’m desperate to cum.
Your thrusts slow down and I hear you start to catch your breath. It feels as if your cock has gotten bigger inside of me. You stop and pull me hard onto you, so every inch is buried deep inside. No longer thrusting your fingers are working tirelessly on my clit. I hear you growl behind me “you’re going to cum on my dick”
My whole body is tingling. I’ve never felt so full before. Your fingers speed up circling my clit and I’m trying to hold back tears of pleasure and shame. I’m going to cum, but I’m desperate to not lot you see. I can’t control it though. You speed up one more time and I feel it. My insides contract and release, a wave of tingling pleasure rushes through my body as my pussy squeezes and releases. My eyes close and I let out a moan of sheer ecstasy. Anyone standing near the door would hear. I want to to collapse or pull away but you keep me planted firmly on your dick.
“My turn.”
My pussy is even wetter now, you resume thrusting. Even harder than before. I can feel my tits bouncing back and forth. My head coming close to the wall with each thrust. You speed up and begins to hurt. Just as I think I can take anymore you say you’re going to cum. Hearing these words triggers something in me. I want to cum again. Instinctively, I reach down and play with myself. As you continue shoving your dick in and out of my needy pussy we both get closer and closer until finally I’m cumming and I can feel your hot wet release deep inside me. Everything feels so warm and full.
You stay inside me for only a moment. You pull out, wipe your cock off and pull up your pants. You leave me dripping in the bathroom.
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/g15ebf/fantasy_rape_play_cnc_mf_mild_humiliation_tw
That was pretty hot from what I read so far.
aw this was really good! a really fun little read and because you didn’t include any references to gender i got to imagine this as a story between two women (that’s just how i swing)
but really this was super good and i would love to read more of anything you post
So not a writer, and I’ve read more of gwstories than erotica, but very well written, IMO. Good detail on the sensation and thought process. Are you new to this type of writing?
Nicely written little one
I like it! We have a similar style x
Very sexy
What about leaving the door open and catching you in the shower with the showerhead
Great story!
This is throbbingly hot?