The Teenage Bitch is Almost Buried – Rape murderer Al Parker gets a surprise visit in the woods by someone special when he is digging his victims grave… His daughter!

Yes, be happy you found this you pervert :) To be fair, though, it’s not very erotic, but just mostly a dark story. Thought it fitted well in here though, hehe. Read at your own risk!

[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rgThXQG_0tsaOJPOelnrEHk1CtBZxxSX7361KIg7yDY/edit](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rgThXQG_0tsaOJPOelnrEHk1CtBZxxSX7361KIg7yDY/edit)

I am looking for critique on the STORY and DIALOG, not syntax, grammar, spelling errors etc :) Thank you!

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/folweq/the_teenage_bitch_is_almost_buried_rape_murderer