Been awhile since I wrote smut. Kinda rusty. Tips would be helpful

You’re sitting down on the recliner after a full day of work. I walk into the doorway wearing white lace panties and a large black T-shirt. I walk closer to you and run my hand on your chest as I climb up onto your lap. “Daddy, can we have some fun,” I say as my hand trails to your lap and strokes your dick through your pants. You let out a soft moan and I slowly stroke your dick and kiss you neck. I make a move to undo your pants and you stop me. “Let’s take this to the couch,” you whisper. You pick me up and move us over and set me on the ground as you lay down. I get on my knees and undo your pants and slide them down as I bend my head over to give your almost rock hard dick a lick from the base all the way to the tip. Flicking my tongue on your tip before inserting it into my mouth completely. You throw your head back and moan as I slowly move your dick in and out of my mouth. Feeling the warm and wetness of my mouth sliding up and down your dick as I gently cup your balls. Every time I reach the tip of your dick, I swirl my tongue around it and my other hand works your base. You suddenly grab me and place my pussy over your face. I gasp in surprised pleasure as you work your tongue over my clit. “Yes Daddy, please more,” I moan out as you taste my pussy. I lean back down and start sucking your dick again. Going faster as I grow hornier. My hands still gently cupping your balls and working your base. My moans grow louder as I get closer to cumming. You stick a finger in my pussy and I shake with pure pleasure as I get closer to climax…

Source: reddit.com/r/sexystories/comments/f2hopp/been_awhile_since_i_wrote_smut_kinda_rusty_tips