Never made one of these before but wanted to see what the ladies think about my thanksgiving story I have for them, any tips are appreciated

So thanksgiving morning you wake up a dripping hot mess, horny, and desperate to be filled, but obviously there’s no one around who can do that for you, so you just lay in bed squirming and drooling at the thought of anyone touching you, that’s when I tell you I’m right outside in my car waiting for you you throw on panties and a robe and nothing else and practically dive for the passenger seat of my car and once you are in you are met with my hand on your neck and my toungue down your throat, my other hand begins to rub you through your panties you are already soaking wet you havent had anyone touch you right in a while it feels amazing, you lean in to feel my dick through my pants and you can instantly tell I’m rock hard, you can practically feel my blood pulsing in my dick through my pants, not wanting to waste anymore time you undo my pants and pull them down letting my dick out it’s so warm and you can already see a drop of precum sliding down the shaft, you take my dick and shove it as far back as it’ll go down your throat choking yourself on it like a good slut, you continue to do so while I toy with your clit and spank your ass a few times, you start getting light headed and dizzy because you can’t help it but continue to choke on it, just feels so good to have the whole thing throbbing in your throat, you try and take a break but me not wanting to waste any time I pick you up out of the passenger seat slide your panties down to your knees and slowly work the tip of my thick cock into you, I’m bear hugging your whole body even your legs, your knees are in your face like you were in the fetal position, your bare pussy is rubbing against the tip of my cock as I slowly work it into you, once I finally get the tip in the rest of my dick glides into your dripping cunt, using you like the fucktoy you are makes you so happy, you grip my dick so tightly as I slowly lift you back up and down doing long slow strokes, every time I pull out it leaves you hollow and needy and everytime I push back in you can feel yourself immediately blissful like all is right in the world, the constant long slow strokes fucking with your emotions like that makes you feel like the only happiness in this world for you is your pussy stuffed with my cock once it is in you all the way you feel so happy and once I pull it back out your drooling and desperate for me to put it back in, I push you all the way down on my dick balls deep let go of your legs so I can grab your breasts with one hand and your neck with the other as I start thrusting into you from underneath slamming my cock in you, making you moan uncontrollably like the whore you are it feels amazing everytime it goes in you it feels like the tip is practically in your stomach and your pussy is already stretched out thin you can feel every vein even as I pick up speed and continue to fuck you harder and hard until eventually I grab you wrists and pull you down on my dick making you grind on my lap, feeling my dick swell and grow hotter inside you, you can tell I’m about to cum, I order you to grind harder and faster and like the obedient whore you are you move your hips with everything you got until you feel my entire cock twitch violently inside you, I havent gotten off in weeks and you can tell when my cum is already flooding out of your pussyi slowly pick you back up off of me pull your panties all the way up so you can leak cum all over them and make you clean off my dick with your toungue then I send you back inside to enjoy thanksgiving with your family while you still have cum dripping down your thighs, giving you something to be thankful for this year

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/e31v7o/never_made_one_of_these_before_but_wanted_to_see