Please forgive me if this isn’t the place for this, but I’ve published my first ever erotic novella and I would love some reviews/feedback! Thank you so much for creating a place to share my work that can’t really be shared many other places ??
[Unseen](https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07Y29PF27/ref=cm_sw_r_cp_api_i_6esIDbYP7YXE1)
Book Summary:
After leaving an abusive marriage, Melanie Gilman checks into a quiet, beach motel ready for some much needed self-healing. What she doesn’t know, is that her life is about to change forever. Over the next few days she’s pulled into a whirlwind of secrets, love, sex, murder and self discovery. Follow Melanie on her journey as she learns who she is, what she’s capable of, and what she really wants out of life.
Book Excerpt:
“Sex with her husband was disgusting and practically unbearable. He didn’t care if she climaxed or not. As soon as he got off, it was over. She would wait until he fell asleep and then take care of things herself. Fucking asshole. Shaking her head and clearing her mind once more, her fingers continued their descent down under the water until they reached her awaiting pussy. She playfully tugged the outer lips, before spreading them wide apart, letting the warm water flood inside her folds. She bent her knees slightly and draped one leg carelessly over the edge of the tub. Her pussy, now completely open to her, silently begged for her touch. She teased herself a little longer by lightly rubbing and pressing the tight opening of her ass. She applied a little more pressure there while her free hand squeezed her nipples and her pussy screamed for attention. Finally, as her breathing increased, she massaged her swollen clit for a moment, and then slid two fingers in and out of her cunt. She moaned out loud and began sliding them a little faster. Water sloshing from the bath as she became a little frantic, feeling like she was so close. With much disdain, she realized that thanks to her little detour at the bar, she was too tipsy to really get herself off. Frustrated, she tried again in vain one last time before finally giving up. She cleaned herself and dried off, slipped on her favorite nightgown, and climbed into bed. After contemplating turning on the tv, she decided against it and just closed her eyes. Tomorrow would be a better day, and she would begin planning her new life.”
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/e00pkx/my_first_ever_erotic_novella