How does this sound? My perfect night [mf]

What do you guys think of the below? My idea of a perfect night of pleasure. M is me, F is you.

We would be out for drinks, and get quite tipsy. I couldn’t stop looking at you with lust. You would be looking at me telling me you wanted me with your eyes. We would still be out and would start to really want each other, feeling each other a bit. You would casually brush against my crotch, feeling how hard I was for you. At this point we could not wait any longer and rush off to our hotel room.

When we get into the room I would immediately pick you up and throw you onto the bed. Then we would start kissing passionately whilst talking our clothes off. You would be wearing lovely lingerie under your outfit and I would have to stop and look at your beauty. You would get up and show off for me whilst I lay down on the bed. You see how much I want you but you then tease me and start kissing me down my chest and stomach before getting to my super hard dick. You would then start to lick me up and down the shaft before putting your mouth around my dick and going down on me slowly. You’d here me moan in pleasure and then turn around to put your legs over my head so I could then touch you and pleasure you whilst you are still going down on me. I would be really close to cumming but tell you to stop so I can save it for later.

Next I would roll you over so I could get up and then grab you, spin you around so you were on your back. I would start kissing you slowly from your mouth, down your neck onto your collar bone and then touch your breasts and keep kissing you lower and lower, going down to your stomach and then putting my head between your legs. I would then start licking your wet pussy and touching your clit to get you really excited. I would keep doing this until you orgasm and scream with pleasure. Once you are satisfied I know I can continue to give you more pleasure.

I would grab your hips and push your legs open and start teasing your pussy with my hard dick, rubbing it up and down your pussy and almost going in but not fully, then finally I would go all the way in you slowly at first until I could go really deep inside, we would keep fucking like this for a while and then I would start to really want to fuck you harder. So I would come out and toss you onto your front and grab your hips pushing your ass up into me, I would enter you from behind slowly again at first so I could go really deep and feel you. I then keep going and pound you making sure orgasm and scream in pleasure even more before I really need to cum myself. When I am about to cum I pull out and spin you over so I can cum on your breasts with great pleasure.

Thanks for reading, it’s not a polished and very raw!

Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/cp4cw7/how_does_this_sound_my_perfect_night_mf