This is my first attempt to write anything so let me know what you think and tips will be taken on board.
A NIGHT AT THE SPA
The gravel crunched under my tires as we pulled into a dark empty car park. After a long week at work I had booked a spa evening for me and my fiancée April planning to relax and unwind. We stepped out of the car into the frigid November air I locked it behind me and followed April toward the spa. April was visibly shivering her normally ivory skin turned a rosy pink that I could make out even in the low light of the carpark. She looked beautiful her long blonde hair up in a bun showering of her lovely neckline, her red Cath Kidston glasses were hiding her amazing blue eyes. Tonight, she was in a pair of black high waisted skinny jeans that showed of her long legs, a white Levi t-shirt and form fitting black leather jacket. As we walked into the lobby I could help staring at her tight ass in those jeans, thinking to myself what I lucky man I was. We went up to the counter and rang the bell after a few minutes of waiting a young girl came out of the back room to meet us. “welcome to the garden spa how can I help you tonight?” she asked with a smile. “hey, I booked to use the spa for me and my partner tonight, looks a little quite.” I reply looking through a window in the lobby to the pool in the next room. “yeah actually you guys are our only booking tonight. As she was speaking, she typed on the pc in front of her “there you are all booked in if you need anything will be n the back room just doing some paper work have fun!” she said waving us in the spa. We had been here before but never this late and never on our own. “see you in a sec” April said giving me a quick kiss on the cheek before heading into the changing room to get her bikini on.
I went into the mens and changed into a pair of red swimming shorts before walking out into the spa room. They had a large pool to one side with two hot tubs, in the back I could see a sauna and steam room and to the right an ice fountain and set of showers with lots of different heads. I walk into the pool and started to swim up and down until I heard the door go again. “how warms the water” April called to me standing by the side of the pool looking drop dead gorgeous yellow pok-a-dot bikini, I felt myself start to get hard looking at her beautiful slim body her hip bones just barley showing over her bikini bottoms an her beautiful double b breast barley hidden behind her tight bikini top. “no, it’s perfect you don’t even need cloths” I joked as she walked into the pool towards me. “oh, is that right” she laughed leaning in to kiss me and evil look in her eye. Kissing her back I was surprised to feel her hand slid over my crouch feeling up my semi hard cock through my shorts. “Hey, stop it you such a tease.” I say with a groan as she stops. “I just wanted to see if you liked the new bikini and obviously you do” she says with a smile before swimming away form me and doing a few laps. After about thirty minutes swimming back and forth, we give the hot tub a go sitting next to her with the bubble on full relaxing. I think this is the perfect time for some pay back. Gently running my hand up her leg I start to rub her inner thigh moving my hand slowly up and down the soft skin between her legs. Looking up at the security camera April says “stop what if they can see us” she says this with a naughty grin almost like she hopes they are. I slide my hand further in between her legs sliding one finger up to between her lips and pressing her bikini against her as I continue to slowly move up and down “they can’t the water moving to much to see anything” I whisper pushing harder and enjoying the look on her face as she tilts her head back slightly and bites her lip. I pull the bikini to the side and continue to rub along her pussy with one finger I can feel it already slick even through the water. She got her eyes closed by this point and she looks relaxed. As I slide my finger down her slit the next time, I gently slid it into her we pussy. And she can’t help but letting out a moan as I slide my finger in and out her tightness grasping my finger.
Looking into my eyes panting now as I slide my fingers in and out under the water, she’s says “I seriously need you to fuck me”.
I was fully hard now and didn’t need asking a second time looking around I noticed the sauna was out of the cameras view. I stopped what I was doing and moved away nodding for April to follow me in the sauna the sound she closed the door behind her I was on her lifting her on to the hot wooden bench and kissing her. She was busy at the same time undoing the ties on my shorts and feeling up my cock. She sucked on my lower lip before pushing me away. “my turn” she said seductively getting on her knees in front of me and pulling my shorts down. When She wrapped her delicate finger around the base of my cock and looked up at me with those amazing eyes, I could barely contain myself I felt my cock twitch in her hand. She started to slowly slide her hand up and down before leaning in and licking the tip of my cock. It felt like I had been stuck with lighting I couldn’t help but let a groan as she slid her lips around me and started to suck her eyes still staring into mine. She started to work away sucking up and down my cock reaching behind her to untie her bikini top letting her perfect perky tits bounce free. By this point I was so worked up I knew if she carried on, I would be cuming before I got a chance at her sweet pussy. I leant forward and pulled her up feet kissing her deeply as she came to her feet. Pushing her back on the bench I kissed my way down her collar bone moving further south until I could feel the soft rose buds that are her nipples against my lips. I lovingly sucked on both already rubbing her pussy with my right hand. Still sucking her nipples, I pulled her bikini bottoms off and started to finger her in earnest. I could feel her tight pussy was lovely wet and ready for me. Lining my cock up between her legs I slowly pushed forward into her feeling the soft folds of her stretch around me. She ran her finger through my hair and let out a moan as we slid together. I started to fuck her progressively getting faster in time with her moans. Next thing her legs locked around my back clenching as I felt her pussy clench around my cock. She moaned in my ear “ fuck tom don’t stop fucking me awwwwww” letting out a final squeal as she came.
Looking in to my eyes she grabbed my head pulling me closer for a kiss “your turn now cum in my pussy” she said her hips rotating as I slide in and out of her. “that’s it cum in in me baby” she said begging me in a seductive whisper. I couldn’t wait any longer and with I final thrust I drove my cock as far in to her as possible filling her pussy before almost collapsing on top of her. “I fucking love you.” I said kissing her “love you to” she said as I pulled out of her my cum dripping out of her pretty pink pussy. Thinking it was time to leave we got dressed and went back to the lobby to sign out. The same girl as early came out the back to meet us. “ I hope you had a good time” she said giving us a strange look as I looked past her inti the back room I could clearly see the sauna on a monitor. “yeah, we had a great time, thanks!” I say blushing and leading April out the door the last thing I hear is the girl saying, “Come back any time”.
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/clzkc4/a_night_at_the_spa
Very nice and hot! I would advise breaking the text up in paragraphs, just because it’s kind of easy to get lost in all that text when youre in an aroused haze. Keep it up!