So I wrote this for my wife as part of our sex game, haven’t sent it to her yet but looking for feedback.
Miami was the perfect place for me and my wife Sarah to get away from their busy and demanding life. The sun, the food, the fashion, the bodies, the perfect place to let loose and enjoy the atmosphere of sexy South America with the attitude of the South of France. Our dinner reservations were for eight at our favorite restaurant in South Beach, OLA, as I was finishing shaving Sarah stepped out of the shower giving me pause as I took in her delicious curves and pert breasts. “What time is it?” Sarah asked as I was shaken from my trance. We had plenty of time to finish getting ready and still make the reservations. Sarah finished getting her hair ready and asked me to help her with her dress, which I did, slowly admiring the red material adorning her body, presenting her breasts on a delectable platter. She twirled for me, giving a full look of what I was going to experience this evening. I wanted to strip her dress off her right there and fuck her but we were running out of time, it would have to wait for later.
We arrived at the restaurant and were quickly seated at a single table by the window, a sort of lover’s lane of the restaurant where the lighting was dimmed and the atmosphere resonated with decadence. I ordered a bottle of champagne to celebrate our first full day in Miami and raised my glass to toast our vacation. Dinner was nothing short of amazing, I excused myself to use the restroom before dessert was to arrive, a double chocolate souffle, that I was excited to enjoy. When I returned Sarah had struck up a conversation with the table next to us, a slightly older South American man in a very expensive looking suit was enjoying his dinner and Sarah was engaging him regarding plans this evening. There were always things going on in South Beach, it was just a matter of who you knew as to whether or not you could get an invite. Our plan had been to enjoy dinner, go back to the hotel for drinks, then maybe LIV for a night of dancing, but we were in Miami so plans were up in the air. Armando, as he was introduced to me, was just in town for the week on business and this was his last evening before flying back to Argentina. Our souffle was everything we imagined and devoured it while sharing stories of past adventures in Miami with Armando while hearing about his country and his business.
As we paid our bill to leave and say our goodbyes Armando asked if we would stay for a bit longer for another drink, we had been there for awhile and were ready to head back so we politely declined but told him we were going to be at the Delano bar later if he would like to join us. We arrived back at the Delano and went up to our room to change into more bar/club attire. Sarah asked me what I thought of Armando, I thought he was a really nice guy that seemed to know a lot about international business. I returned the question back to her, she also thought he was very gentlemanly but found him to have a sexy allure. She was obviously turned on by the thought of him, so I played it up, asking her what she found sexy about him. I asked her if she hoped he would show up for drinks tonight, she rubbed her hand over my cock asking me the same question back in a seductive manner. I asked her if she would like to dance with him at the night club and as I was doing so she removed my hardening cock through my zipper and started stoking my cock answering my question. I told Sarah based on how Armando was looking at her I bet he would get turned on just dancing with her. At that she took me into her mouth and I let out a moan as her warm tongue wrapped around the head of my cock and her eyes briefly met mine, a look of being incredibly turned on and a little guilty at the same time. She sucked me for a minute while I enticed her with the idea of Armando. I pulled Sarah up by the arms and positioned her on the edge of the bed laying her head back onto the pillows. I spread her legs with my knees and lowered my face onto her waist kissing her thighs inward as I worked my way to her slit. I teased her, licking around her slit and occasionally flicking her clit with the tip of my tongue, it was driving her crazy. I could tell she was building up to come and was enjoying every moment of it, just before she was about to burst I stopped and pinched her nipples while kissing her. She looked at me pouty saying she was just about to come, I smiled and said “I know, let’s finished getting dressed”.
There were only a few people in the bar when we arrived, so we grabbed a tall table and I ordered two drinks from the bar. Sipping our drinks, people watching, laughing at made up stories we gave to people, we were enthralled with each other and almost didn’t notice when Armando walked in. Armando spotted us immediately and made his way over to our table with what appeared to be a friend of his following close behind. Armando was still wearing his suit and his friend had a tight red dress on that contrasted my wife’s partially knit white body suit. She was introduced as Isabella by Armando, the CFO of his partner company for commercial real estate. Isabella was a beautiful women herself with dark features similar to my wife, but less voluptuous. We laughed, drank and enjoyed learning about their country and their travels. As the conversations evolved Sarah and Isabella became more enthralled with their conversation and Armando and I in ours. We decided we had been sitting long enough and made our way to the pool area where a DJ was setup spinning live music and people dancing.
All four of us were dancing together, enjoying the cool breeze and the warm air with the great music. I was enjoying watching my sexy wife swaying her hips as she placed her arms around my neck allowing my eyes to take in her body, her breasts, her eyes. She was lost in the music and alcohol, so I decided to be a little daring and moved my hands down to her ass grabbing and pulling at that delicious peach. Sarah gave me a sexy smirk and started really getting into the dancing, dropping in front of me and rubbing her ass on my crotch as she came back up. Isabella joined in on the other side of Sarah and the two girls started dancing with the guys behind each of the two ladies. Isabella whispered something to Armando, kissed him on the cheek and sat down in one of the cabanas by the pool while the three of us continued dancing. After a bit I excused myself while taking drink orders and then approached Isabella about a drink for herself. She told me she would go with me to the bar to assist with the drinks, as we made our way to the bar I caught a glimpse of Sarah dancing with Armando, she was giving him a good show and he appeared to be enjoying it.
“How did you meet Armando” Isabella breathed into my ear over the music. I told her the story of our introduction, her response was just “Well you two must have made quite the impression” as her gaze trailed off towards Sarah who was enjoying showing herself off on the dance floor, occasionally rubbing her ass into Armando then looking in my direction for a reaction. I blew a kiss back, to tell her, I approve. Isabella didn’t miss a thing asking me “Enjoying yourself?”, I replied that it was a beautiful evening and the company had been wonderful. She looked me right in the eyes, smiled, glanced towards my wife and said “That wasn’t what I was referring to”. With a smirk forming on my face I said, “Well I certainly enjoyed watching you two on the dance floor….. if that is what you were referring to”. “She is stunning” Isabella responded, “Armando told me I had to come out and meet you two, he was certainly infatuated by her, I don’t see that often”. I asked if her and Armando dated, which elicited a laugh, she explained that they didn’t have time for relationships the frequency at which they travel but that Armando was an enjoyable lover when she was in need.
We made our way back to the cabana with the drinks and were joined by Sarah and Armando. We decided to go back to Armando’s suite since he was staying next door and enjoy the bottle of champagne that he had back in his room. We were not ones to turn down a good bottle of champagne so we all migrated to his room. We rode the elevator to the top opening into a small lounge area with three doors. The suite was quite amazing, there was a large living area as you walked in that opened to a splash pool and hot tub. Armando was on a mission to open that champagne as Sarah and I took in the room admiring a suite we would have never imagined being able to rent on our own. Armando returned with the champagne while touring the suite with us, showing us the amenities. When we got to the hot tub Sarah slipped her shoes off and put her legs in sitting on the side enjoying the cool breeze and ocean view. Armando suggested that we hop in the hot tub, Sarah looked up at me and announced that our bathing suits were back at our unit. Armando gestured his drink towards Isabella stating “It doesn’t seem to have slowed her down” as she pulled her dress over her head and slid into the tub.
Sarah shouted “When in Miami!” and pulled her dress over her head tossing it aside and made her entrance into the tub. Unlike Isabella, Sarah was not wearing a bra and with the lighting in the hot tub on, her breasts were on full display. Armando, sipping his champagne, and focused on my wife’s breasts, announced “Beautiful” as my wife gave him a bashful look. I had stripped down to my boxers and entered the tub snuggling up next to my wife. Sarah teased Isabella that it was unfair she was still in a bra since Sarah hadn’t worn one. Isabella laughed and removed it saying she was Latino, she had kept it on for our American bashfulness. I felt a hand on my leg and looked at my wife who gave me a sly smile while rubbing on my thigh and up to my cock. She was obviously trying to turn me on while no one could see under the water due to the bubbles. I tried to join into the conversation Isabella and Sarah were having but I couldn’t focus. I snapped back to reality as Armando was entering the other side of the hot tub across from me asking “Everyone enjoying themselves?” I felt a hand join Sarah’s then rest on my balls massaging them as my wife slowly stroked me, I let out a groan as I slipped further into the tub, enjoying all the attention.
The hands shifted on my cock and Isabella was now in charge, my eyes met Sarah’s and she smiled seductively and positioned herself closer to Armando to get a better view. I closed my eyes and Isabella shifted me towards her and started stroking me with two hands. When my eyes opened again Sarah was sitting in Armando’s lap while he caressed her breasts, she also had her eyes closed at this point, enjoying the warm water and attention. I felt Isabella move away from me and looked up to see her planting her lips on Sarah’s while Armando pinched her nipples, she arched her back pushing the back of her head further into Armando’s shoulder as Isabella kissed down her neck and chest. Armando pushed himself up and out of the tub resting on the side exclaiming “It is getting quite hot in there”. As he removed himself my wife looked his direction as his semi-erect cock brushed inches from her face, her mouth slightly opening as she stared.
Isabella took the cue and moved between Armando’s legs then took him all the way in her mouth sucking hard then slowly pulling off. She did this a few times getting Armando rock hard, all the while my wife just looking on, inches away. The next time she pulled off of him she locked her lips onto my wife who kissed her intensely back treating Isabella’s tongue like it was Armando’s cock. Isabella pulled away and went back to Armando, licking and sucking the head of his cock. As she pulled off of him this time she shifted her hand, placing Armando’s cock at the tip of Sarah’s lips. She looked over her shoulder at me, as if to ask “Should I?”, I slightly nodded and her head went back the other direction. I pulled myself out of the tub to get a better view and started stroking my cock to the sex scene unfolding in front of me. Sarah would take a few sucks of Armando then Isabella would, and they went back and forth like this until Isabella gave Sarah control over the base of his cock so she could perform one of her world class blowjobs. Isabella moved behind Sarah and started playing with her tits then pushed back to where I was and whispered into my ear “Enjoying Yourself?”, she didn’t wait for the answer and was between my legs with my dick in her lips before I could fabricate a response.
Sarah heard my words of enjoyment as I encouraged Isabella and joined her to reward me with the same double blowjob treatment Armando had enjoyed. The sexual energy was starting to be too much for me and I didn’t want to come, ending the evening, so I pulled Sarah up on the side of the tub and dove in between her legs. She was extremely turned on and I could feel the heat on my tongue as I traced over her swollen lips and licked her in long steady strokes. I feel someone behind me and I feel Isabella rubbing my ass and working my cock and balls in her hands while I lick my wife to orgasm. Armando retrieves one of the cushions and assists Sarah to prop herself up against it giving her a much more comfortable position as I go back to making my wife come. I can feel Sarah’s orgasm starting to build, assisted by Isabella, who is positioned to Sarah’s side pinching and sucking on her nipples and Armando on the other side jerking himself off over top of her. I couldn’t take it any longer and had to be inside my wife, I stood up and pressed all the way into her sinking slowly to my balls. I held there for a minute unable to start pumping as my vision was occupied with the sight of Armando’s dick splitting my wife’s lips as Isabella played with her breasts and fingered herself.
Sarah started to gyrate her hips signaling that she needed to be fucked, I grabbed her hips and start thrusting switching my eyes between her lips, her breasts, and my cock glistening in her come as I fuck her long and deliberately. Armando cups Sarah’s hair in his hand and lays her head back so she is no longer sitting up, gets on his knees and starts fucking her mouth from the side. Sarah and I lock eyes as he is pushing back into her mouth, the glossy look of sexual bliss. Armando lets out a groan and a slew of Spanish words as I see Sarah grab his cock and point it over her tits as ropes of come spray across her chest and onto Isabella. Isabella turns over onto Sarah and kisses her while working her clit, sending Sarah into an earth shattering orgasm. I pull out and stroke myself until I come across my wife’s stomach and tits. I crawl out of the water and make my way to Sarah’s lips where we embrace in a passionate kiss as I take over for Isabella massaging her tits.
I helped Sarah back into the hot tub where all four of us reconvened as Sarah rinsed herself. Armando asked if everyone was enjoying the evening and Sarah stated that she had quite a memorable evening and was glad we went out to the bar this evening. Armando stated that the night was still young and that the sunrise from the pool was an amazing sight. I looked at my watch and realized it was only one am.
Source: reddit.com/r/sexystories/comments/bgzz67/fun_with_my_wife_in_miami
Good concept to your story. Very poor grammer that detracted. You have a habit of changing tense from first person to third in the same sentense. Proof your paper or get someone to edit it. I would also watch the over use of certain words and adjatives also, boost the ending somewhat, it seems truncated. Otherwise, you have a winner! Who wouldn’t want a wife like Sarah?