Your in the club having a few drinks, it’s been a slow night and you have been itching to have something inside you besides your vibrator but it doesn’t look like it’s going to happen, you finish off your last drink and look across the bar, you notice there’s someone sitting there looking at you, his eyes are full of lust and he licks his lips at you, you feel heat between your legs as you imagine what he could do to you, you know it’s a bad idea but screw it your horny and you want to be fucked, you walk by him and whisper in his ear “meet me in the bathroom” and go off. You get into the bathroom and take your panties off putting them into your purse, you don’t want anything getting in the way tonight you go to put lipstick on and as you do you look in the mirror and see the guy from the bar walk in, he looks nervous but he came anyway you look down and see the outline of his cock in his pants, shy and big just like you like them, you lick your lips and grab him pulling him into the closest stall you shove him against the divider and kiss him deep shoving your tongue down his throat, you feel his hands waver but them grab your ass tight squeezing each cheek for dear life like his life depends on it. You pull away and drop to your knees unbuckling his belt and pulling his pants down, as soon as you do his dick shoots up, large, thick, long and juicy you thank god and proceed to attempt to take this massive thing in front of you down your throat, you feel each inch in your throat filling it to the point that you can’t breathe tears run down your face as your makeup starts to run, your choking but you don’t stop you want every inch inside you, you begin fingering yourself as you continue to blow him his hands glued to the walls of the divider you take it out and run your tongue along it loving every bit, you remover the top of your dress to reveal your breasts and at that moment he loses all self control. He grabs the back of your hair and shoves his cock back down your throat fucking your throat mercilessly until you think your going to fall unconscious, back and forth I. And out he shoves his cock into you while you continue to pinch your nipples in clit in pure thrill until you feel it, the throb in your throat the twitch and you know what comes next you plunge your fingers inside yourself faster and harder until your so close you can feel it through your whole body, he grabs the back of your head desperately and shoves his cock all the way down your throat as he yells “IM CUMMING” and he unloads straight into your stomach. The feeling of the cum in your stomach makes you climax harder then you ever have before, squirting into the floor of the bathroom. You slowly remove the dick from your throat and gasp letting the cum drip from your tongue into your hands and pour it back into your mouth. The guy looks at you and believes that it’s over but you grab the back of his head, kiss him deep, and say “were not done yet”.
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/b079vz/a_night_in_the_club_fm_blowjob
Grammatical errors aside not a bad story. I suggest using paragraphs tho. (And making sure you use the correct your/you’re)
Try to not start every sentence with a noun (ex: you, him, I, etc.), because it makes it seem choppy and unorganized. But other than that it was amazing!