Catching a cab [mf] hold the moan. strangers

This is my first erotic story, please let me know if you see anything that needs…improved upon

The sky darkened as the wind picked up, whipping her long, dark hair into her face and trying to pry her purse from her shoulder. On the bright side the nasty weather was ruffling everyone’s feathers that day, camouflaging her walk of shame. Her frazzled hair and disheveled blouse fit the human landscape, just as long as she wasn’t hit by some bit of flying debris.
Alright, this isn’t going to work the young brunette thought to herself as she tried to tug her skirt back down over her tan legs. She flung her hand into the air, hailing a cab. One stopped, not for her but for a tall man ahead of her. Just as she was about to huff he caught her eye and waved her forward. As she approached she was caught off guard. Tall and broad shouldered, he was remarkably well put together considering the apocalyptic hell scape slowly moving over the city. His slanted eyes flashed with a smile “Want to share a cab?” She didn’t even think to ask where he was going as she hopped in the cab breathlessly. Not sure if it was the wind or those eyes that had stolen her breath away.
“Thanks!” she said, grabbing the edges of her skirt that had once again decided to start riding up. “No problem, you looked like you were about to be blown away” He said to her “23rd Avenue” he added for the driver. “Oh, that’s where I was going too!” She blurted, although her apartment was at least 20 minutes in the other direction. She just couldn’t help herself, she needed to see if this sudden sexual tension might go anywhere.
“Really?” he asked her, his eyes lingering on her breasts. Suddenly she flushed, confidence waning as she remembered her disheveled state. She realized her top buttons were undone and her lacy black bra was peeking through. He smiled at her bashfulness as she tried to cover herself. “I’m Logan” he reached his hand out for hers “Jess” she replied, taking his hand and leaving her breasts unattended.
At that moment the sky exploded. CRACK BOOM!! Jess practically leapt into his lap, and the driver rolled his eyes and put up the privacy screen. “Sorry” Jess mumbled. He smiled once again “No problem” and this time he grabbed the side of her skirt, pulling it down- much to Jess’s disappointment. Lightning had shot through her thigh, and she had immediately responded to his touch. This time her flush had nothing to do with embarrassment, although the moments that followed seemed to stretch out into a rainy oblivion. After a few moments he tried to apologize, but Jess was done. The tension had risen to a crescendo along with the downpour, and although she was chanting “Slutty slut slut” to herself, she didn’t really care about what that sensible Jess was saying to herself. Fuck that Jess, she was terrible. New Jess was horny, and she pounced on her fellow passenger.
Their mouths pressed together, his tongue exploring her mouth then her neck, then creeping below her collar bones. Suddenly, almost inevitably, the driver lowered the privacy screen about half way to let them know about a delay on the route. They tore apart, embarrassed. Nothing but the radio and the rain to keep her company.
Then she felt his hand on her thigh, going in the right direction this time. She pushed her leg against him. He was warm, his hand slowly tickled around her inner knee. Creeping up…up…up… Of course he found her soaking wet, and she pushed herself into his hand. He didn’t let her have what she wanted though. He traced her panty line, dragging his fingers up and down. She was having trouble controlling her breathing. Lightning flashed and she couldn’t help but to moan during the thunder. Her hand found his belt buckle and deftly undid it, unzipped his pants, and found her own prize. She grasped him in one had and took his hand in her other and guided him the rest of the way, pulling her panties aside. Her eyes rolled back, then so did the drivers and he rolled that stupid fucking divider back up.
Alone at last, they had a moment of eye contact and grinning before she straddled him and pushed his face into breast. His hands deftly unbuttoned her blouse and she brought her heaving breasts the rest of the way out. His tongue traced her areolas and he drug his teeth over her nipples. She grabbed his cock and slid it up and down on her clit. He moaned with the thunder and grabbed her hair, exposing her neck for him.
Suddenly he grasped her waist and slid her on to her back. She pulled her panties to the side and guided him inside of her, filling her up. She covered her mouth to hide a moan, although it might not have been necessary with all the wind screaming outside the cab. She lifted herself into him as he thrusted into her again and again. They rocked together, no longer caring if the driver was on to them. With a shuddering moan she climaxed, drooling in pleasure. Moments after he pulled free and squirted on her belly.
They both panted for a few moments before breaking into giggles. “This was the best cab ride I’ve ever had.” He laughed, handing her his scarf. “Sorry, take this.” She grinned back at him, cleaning up the mess and stuffing it under the seat, making a mental note to tip the driver heavily “Definitely one of my top 10.”

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