I recently got into writing erotic literature and this is my first time posting it anywhere on Reddit, so comments and constructive suggestions are welcome. I usually write more about pleasuring my partners and one-on-one scenarios, but this was my first time writing a group dynamic so the action is centered on me. My inspiration always begins with interactions I have in my day-to-day life, which then turn into launchpads for my imagination and fantasies. Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoy this story.
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So I pull up to the drive through window of this local coffee hut and see two young women inside, one making drinks and the other talking to that one with her back turned to the window.
The one making drinks was tall, brunette hair pulled up in a bun, full figured/thick but curvy and not fat, with a cute face, big boobs, and a juicy ass. The other one was very much my type: blonde, hair in a ponytail, very pretty face, beautiful blue eyes, and probably the hottest ass I’ve seen in quite some time. She had on tight blue jeans that were basically form fitting and hugging her curves in all the right ways. She had braces but was wearing a blue sweater from a local college, so I’m guessing she was a freshman.
I’m checking out the tits on the taller brunette one but the blonde is still turned away from me for a minute and I’m just soaking in her gorgeous ass with my eyes. She turns around, opens the window, and starts taking my order, when out of the corner in this little tiny one room drive-through coffee shop comes another petite girl who has reddish brunette flowing hair, a lot of makeup but beautiful face, and an absolutely stunning body. At this point I’m already flirting with the first two and it’s going well, they’re smiling and laughing, it’s great. But after seeing the third I can’t help but have some seriously horny, nasty thoughts about what I’d like to do to these three girls and my brain goes into full fantasy mode…
I imagine one of them telling me to pull around and park because something’s broken and they need me to come inside to take a look. So as I park they turn off all of their signs and pull the windows shut to make it look like they’re closed, then they open the side door to let me in. I walk in and all three are standing in front of me in a line, silent, smiling mischievous smiles, waiting for someone to make the first move. I ask what I can help them with as the blonde steps by me, closes the door, takes my hand, and puts it firmly on her chest, maintaining eye contact the whole time. As I already start to get instantly hard she leans in and kisses me softly, her lips pressed lightly, teasingly against mine. She looks sexy but she even smells good too, her perfume teasing my nostrils as her lips tease mine. My heart starts racing, not knowing what these girls have in store for me but loving where it’s going so far.
I lean into her kiss and our tongues meet, gliding over one another softly as my hands move instinctively to her waistline, feeling her tight body before moving around to squeeze her incredible ass. I pull her closer as I kiss her harder, more deeply before shoving her away suddenly to get back in line with the other two girls.
I tell them to get down on their knees and they comply willingly, smiling in anticipation. I take my now fully hard cock out of my pants as one of them gasps almost inaudibly. I step forward and put one hand under the blonde’s chin, raising her face to look up at me, looking into her eyes. She opens her mouth and I slide my cock across her tongue. Her lips close on the head and I begin moving it back and forth into her mouth, getting a little deeper with each thrust. I enjoy the feeling of this for a minute until I pull out and am sucked next by the tall brunette, who enthusiastically sucks and gags herself on my cock with a passion. I put one hand on the back of her head and press my cock deeply into the back of her throat, depriving her of air for as long as I think she can stand before pulling all the way out. I tap my cock on her outstretched tongue before I move to the petite girl and guide her head onto my cock with my hand too, giving her longer, slower thrusts. Her face looks beautiful with her cheeks caved in as she happily sucks hard and slobbers all over my thick, throbbing shaft. I let out a moan and enjoy the feel of her tongue for minute longer, thinking of what I want to do next.
At this point the other two are desperately fingering themselves, wanting more, so I tell them to get up, pull their pants down, and bend over, one on either side of the petite girl who continues to suck me with a rhythm and pressure that makes my toes curl in ecstasy. As the other two move into place on either side and and bend over I simultaneously give each of their asses a firm, quick smack that resonates in the small room. The blonde one to my right flinches the most so I slide a finger into her now dripping slit, resting the tip of my middle finger right on her throbbing clit, then moving it in small, tight circles as she shudders and moans. I split her pussy lips wide open with my fingers, pull my cock out of the petite girl’s mouth, and step into place behind the beautiful blonde.
She’s bending over the counter as I grab a handful of hair and yank her head back suddenly. Her back arches and she pulls up onto her toes, her pussy sticking out along with her perfect ass, waiting breathlessly for me to take her. I slide in hard, not giving her a second to change her mind, and beginning thrusting deeply, my balls slapping against her glistening wet clit. I press her body up against the counter firmly as I grab the back of her neck, shoving her face down onto the counter top. I’m fucking her vigorously as the petite girl stands up, wiping off her chin after sucking me so well. She pulls her pants off, sits her ass up on the counter, and spreads her legs invitingly with a coy smile forming on her face that dares me to take her too.
I reach down and slide two fingers into her dripping wet pussy and she moans helplessly. As I’m fingering her and pounding the blonde, the tall brunette takes her top off and comes and sits on the other side of the counter to my left, huge, gorgeous tits on full display. She squeezes them together with both hands as I grope them and pinch her nipples hard with my free hand. I can tell she likes this so I tweak them and roll one nipple between my fingers, then the other, still thrusting into the blonde girl between them from behind.
The blonde is moaning and gasping as I penetrate her hard and deeply, my right hand still fingering the petite girl, my left squeezing the tits of the tall brunette. All three are driving me crazy with their moaning, so I pull out, grab the petite girl’s ass as she’s up on the counter, and pull her forward onto my throbbing cock. I fuck her deeply, filling her small pussy completely for a minute as the blonde catches her breath and starts making out hard with the tall brunette, who is now fully naked and fingering herself as she leans back on the edge of the counter too. Seeing an opportunity, I move from the petite girl and pull the tall brunette away from the blonde, turn her around, and bend her over, fucking her from behind as I smack her big, sexy ass hard. She cries out and by now these girls are driving me wild, each of their warm, dripping wet pussies feeling like heaven on my swollen cock. I thrust a few more times into the brunette and tell them all to get on their knees and they gather around eagerly. I place my cock in the middle of their faces and they take turns licking, sometimes one, two, or all three of them at a time, fighting for attention and as much of my cock as they can get.
After they’ve each had a good chance to suck me well and take turns on my shaft I can tell that I’m getting close and can’t hold back any longer. It’s decision time. I go with my gut and pull the blonde’s face onto my cock, and quickly realize that I’m not disappointed. She sucks me hard and fast, enthusiastically and skillfully, as though she’s desperate for my cum. My balls tighten up and I can’t hold back any longer. I hold her head on both sides and start fucking her face, taking full control of her body with my hands and cock. A minute later of hard thrusting and I lose control of myself, forcing my cock all the way to her throat as I shoot ropes of hot, sticky cum down inside of her. My cock pulses and spasms, draining a huge load into her mouth for what seems like a whole minute before I pull back and allow her to catch her breath. She takes it like a champ, sucking up and down my shaft, milking out every precious drop. She gives it one final suck then licks the tip, smiling up at me happily, eyes still watering from the hard fucking she’s just received.
I start to come back down to reality from the high of cumming in this beautiful coed and realize the other two girls are smiling up at me too. Realizing the implications I clear my throat and in a low voice ask them slowly: “So… who wants it next?”
Source: reddit.com/r/sexystories/comments/aqrxla/drivethru_coffee_shop_mfff_group_sex
Shorter paragraphs. Don’t start a sentence with “so”. Use a paragraph to paint the picture of each girl, it’s a bit of a muddle as to who is who in the early part of the story.
Promising, though. Good story concept, accessible, realistic.