This is written from a male perspective to a female. I am relatively new at this and wish to get better. If anyone has any constructive critiques please comment below (or PM me if you want to discuss more), I would love to read them, thanks!
You’re naked asleep in your bed dreaming when you awaken to the feeling of him kissing your cheek. You open your eyes and he kisses your lips and tells you “good morning beautiful.” He hands you a hot cup of coffee and kisses your cheek again before slowly kissing the side of your neck. You moan as you take your first drink. He kisses down your chest around your breasts as he takes his hand and rubs the other breast. He sucks on your nipples and gently massages your breasts, then kisses down your stomach while his hands firmly rub your chest.
You look down into his eyes while you’re drinking your coffee and say “Good morning to you too Mr. Johnson”. He tells you to sit back and enjoy yourself as he kisses down your stomach, around your belly button, across your hips and down your left leg. He moves his lips to the inside of your right leg skipping your pussy and gently kisses that side too. He looks up your stomach past the tops of your perky breasts and into your eyes as he hovers his lips above your wet pussy. As he maintains eye contact you whisper “Please…” and he obliges very slowly resting his lips on your pussy. He uses his tongue to split your lips open and lick up your pussy to your clit. He licks up your clit and spins it around in tiny circles expertly with his tongue. He then lifts his lips up off your pussy and kisses your clit again this time flicking it gently. He looks up at you as he’s still licking your clit and can feel your hips moving back and forth. He stops and slowly kisses up your waist, up the side of your stomach, up your breast and your neck and kisses you on the lips. Then he positions his hard cock directly in front of your wet pussy. You can feel the tip of his cock resting just outside you waiting for him to drive it deep inside your waiting juicy cunt. He feels your hips move, begging him to enter as he whispers in your ears “No my love, not now, youre late for work.”
You beg him to have sex with you but he’s insistent and gets out of bed leaving you horny and wanting more. He tells you to get moving or you’ll be late. His only request is that you wear your favorite knee length skirt and lace thong to work so he can see your sexy smooth legs. You are disappointed but agree it’s time to get dressed and spend the rest of the morning trying or ignore your wet horny pussy. You make a quick breackfast, leave the apartment and head to the car to get to work. You can feel the tingling in your pussy as you still can’t forget what he did to you, what he did not provide you: his hard cock filling you up. As the morning goes by you try to push the thought out of your head, but are still distracted. Your coworkers notice but don’t mention anything because they don’t know why. Just before lunch you’re asked to bring a file the closet of a floor you never visited in a new building. When you arrive you notice the entire floor is empty and dark. You find the closet and enter. You can’t find the light switch on the wall. Just then someone grabs you from behind pulling you into the darkness and closing the door behind you.
You’re about to scream when you recognize his voice and hear him whisper “good afternoon baby girl!!! You did not think i would let you go an entire day without letting you get fucked, did you?” He turns on the lights and tells you not to talk. He spreads your legs apart and lifts your skirt up. He spank your ass hard and tells you to be a good little slut and if you’re lucky he’ll cum in your tight wet pussy. He rips apart your lace thong off with his hands as your pussy is dripping wet. He pushses your head down on a pile of boxes and leans down to whisper in your ear “right now all of you is mine, to be used for my pleasure and to serve my cock as I please. You’re reward, if you’re a good slut, is my cum in your pussy.” You moan “yes Mr. Johnson, I’m yours.” Right then he slams his cock deep inside you splitting you apart filling you up. You scream with pleasure knowing that no one will hear you. He pulls your hair as you’re bent over the boxes with him fucking you hard from behind. He tells you how good your pussy feels and how tight it grips his hard cock. He keeps fucking you harder and harder as your pussy tightens on his dick in preparation for your first orgasm. He leans down and asks you “how does it feel to be my cum slut you fucking bitch? How does it feel to have my hard cock fucking you from behind at work?” At that moment you orgasm hard. It’s been hours building up and you need to feel the release. Your pussy gushes around his cock as he keeps pounding your dirty little cunt. He pulls your hair harder and spanks your ass again as he slows down and starts fucking you deep and hard. You look back into his eyes and beg for him to cum inside you. “Please Mr. Johnson, please Sir, cum in my wet pussy, I NEED your cum!!!” He is getting close, his cock starts to spasm as he does one last deep hard push into your wet waiting cum hungry pussy. You can feel him explode inside you as he fills you up with his hot cum.
He relaxes and helps you stand up. He puts his pants on and kisses you as he sticks your ripped up panties in his pocket. He gives you a smile and a kiss and walks out the door while telling you how your lunch period is over. You pull your skirt down and straighten your hair to walk back up to your desk. As you walk on your floor your coworkers look up and ask you how your lunch tasted. You look them in the eye as his cum slowly drips out of your pussy and down the inside of your leg “It was delicious!!”
Source: reddit.com/r/Erotica/comments/9zw7cb/mf_lunch_time_at_work_critiques_welcome
Can you write this in 1st person or3rd person?